i wish.. Mayur ff..#2 updated LAST part 27 pg 33

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THIS FF BASICALLY TELLS YOU, HOW MAYANK AND NUPUR FELL FOR EACH OTHER AND HOW THEY GOT SEPERATED AND WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THEY MEET AFTER YEARS AND WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SOME TRUTHS FROM THE PAST ARE REVEALED.

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HELLO EVERYONE.😊
I AM GLAD TO MAKE THIS NEW THREAD😃
I WANT TO THANK YOU ALL FOR THE LOVE YOU ARE SHOWERING ON THIS FF.
I DINT EXPECT SO MUCH BUT IT ALWAYS FEELS GREAT WHEN I SEE YOUR COMMENTS.
THE FIRST THING I DO WHEN I SEE UR COMMENTS, IS SMILE.

THANK YOU ALL FOR BEING SO  GENEROUS AND PATIENT.
LIKE I HAVE ALREADY TOLD YOU THAT SINCE I AM IN 10TH I WILL BE ABLE TO UPDATE LESS OFTEN SO YOU ALL HAVE TO BE EVEN MORE PATIENT.

LOVE YASHFEEN 😳
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CHAPTER 21
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RED=FLASHBACK
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 'I can't believe that I am actually staring at this guy standing infront of me'

Nupur sighed at her thought and nodded her head in disbelief.

 

"Nupur lets take a break"

Mayank informed Nupur and moved              away.

 

"whats happening Nupur? Aisa pehle to kabhi nahi hua .Ye kya ho raha hai tujhe? Mayank ko dekhna  band kar agar wo dekhlega to kya sochega?"

 Nupur was talking to herself.

 

Suddenly Mayank saw her talking to herself and noticed her in a different way.

She seemed really cute and attractive to her ,like never before.

He lost himself so much that he dint realize that Nupur had walked up to him and was waving at him.

He was shook by her sweet, melodious voice.

 

"Kya hua Mayank kahan khoye ho?

Nupur asked.

 

"huh,kahin nahi wo bus..wo bus…"

 

"wo bus???"]

 

"Chalo practice continue karte hai,"

 

"Sure."

 

As the day was passing ,Nupur could feel something building up for Mayank.

She actually liked it,enjoyed it and wanted to live with it.

 

After the practice session Mayank dropped Nupur home and decided to reach college early.

 

 

 

It was the commencement of a fresh day,both Mayank and Nupur got up with a smile put up on their faces.

 

Though Mayank was usually a late person but today he got up early.

He dint know why but he took his phone and typed a text message to someone with a continuous smile playing on his lips and nervousness clearly visible on his forehead.

 

 

"Dude what's wrong? Aj tak toh tu kabhi nervous nahi hua kisi ladki ko aise text bhejne me?"

 

On the other hand Nupur's phone beeped signaling that a message has come.

She took her phone expecting it to be just one of those stupid service messages.

Surprisingly it was from Mayank. As soon as she saw his name a smile and a typical blush crept on her face.

She took a deep breath and  opened it.

 

"She is hot !

She is sweet !

She always Needs A lip 4 kiss

Whole world is Mad 4 her !

Who is she ?

Do you know ?

Ans=Tea

Good morning !!! "

She read it and smiled and decided to reply.

 

Mayank was still sitting with nervousness overpowering him.

He was still fighting about this nervousness with himself when he received a text.

He heaved a sigh and opened it

"Friend nahi to life waste,


Salt nahi to food waste,


Story nahi to cinema waste,


Mera SMS nahi to tumhara cell waste...

 

Good morning"

 

 

 

Mayank smiled at the naughty message and replied

"Kya baat aj tum bhi meri tarah?"

 

Nupur's phone again beeped and after reading it she sent a reply

"Akhir sangat bhi toh dekhna parega na."

 

"Haa bilkul."

 

"waise aj tumhara message?'

 

"Kyu nahi bhej sakte ?"

 

"Nahi ofourse bhej sakte ho"

 

"Tab badhiya hai"

 

"Chalo I am leaving see you in college."

 

"Bye"

 

Nupur kept the phone with a smile on her face and went for getting ready.

 

Nupur was supposed to wear an anarkali suit as it was an indian song.

Nupur on reaching college started getting ready. She slipped into her dress and applied make up in the necessary amount and finally moved out of the room to find Mayank.

 

Mayank was just passing by when he saw, he ws completely drenched in her beauty and it seemed that his eyes would soon pop out. He kept taking steps towards her while intensely  staring at her. Nupur felt shy on seeing him that way.

 

Finally he stopped at an inch difference and uttered something

"You look mesmerizing "

"Huh?"

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First of all...yashfeen congo on ur new thread..very happy...update is too gudd awesome part loving mayur's feeling ...surely their love is not far...update soon tc
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Originally posted by: neha333

First of all...yashfeen congo on ur new thread..very happy...update is too gudd awesome part loving mayur's feeling ...surely their love is not far...update soon tc


Thanks :)
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Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

nice


Thanks :)
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congo on your new thread
and as usual fab update
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Originally posted by: hasiniangel

congo on your new thread
and as usual fab update


Thanks :)