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#2 But I love you - SS - VIRMAN - part - 25 to part 33 - THE END (Page 23)

Rachel19 Groupbie

Joined: 18 March 2013
Posts: 137

Posted: 06 September 2013 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
Hey very nice update loved it
Manvi is still insecure and virat is so cute and caring husband
And Simmi just loved how she got that shock when virat was still holding manvis hand and when he said that he doesn't have her stuff anymore just awesome and only virat ca. See the change in manvi that's so cute and priya she is just amazing the way she spoke to Simmi just loved it virat made it very clear that he doesn't care about Simmi curious to know why manvis dad want to talk to virat and manvi
Please update soon
Eagerly waiting for your next update

virman_superhit Senior Member

Joined: 06 August 2013
Posts: 217

Posted: 06 September 2013 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Oh wow... :) Awesome update ya.. SmileClap
Maanvi's insecurities were so right and written so beautifully... SmileSmile... Just loved that.. N I loved d fact that Virat understands her and her expressions so well..SmileEmbarrassed..
But I don't like our sad Mannu.. Cry.. She should b happy n talking always... LOLLOL
Loved Priya bhabhi.. Lolzzz...SmileLOL.. Simmi ka toh band Baja diya.. LOLLOLClap..
And simmi..Angry.. Please throw her out soon.. But I just loved the shock she got when she saw them kissing... Lolzzz.. LOLLOLClap..
All in all, it was as usual a fabulous update.. Plzzz continue soon... Smile.. N more f cute scenes between d couple plz.. SmileEmbarrassed
Jannat94 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 July 2012
Posts: 4794

Posted: 06 September 2013 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update Anu
seriously Feel the Manvi's pain and her insecurity
liked the whole update well written dear
waiting for next part
update soon

smileysmi Goldie

Joined: 22 August 2012
Posts: 2478

Posted: 06 September 2013 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update...
What does simmi wants now?
Does she regretting for her mistake of leaving virat?
Does manvi's intuitions turn out to be write in simmi's case?
What manviz father wants to talk to her?
Answers please...
shaalivirman Senior Member

Joined: 23 February 2013
Posts: 552

Posted: 06 September 2013 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Shocked read the update now only...eeekkksss...awsome...luved it to the core...Big smile
im liking tis new twist...evnthough tis simmi is getting on my nervesAngryTongue
luved it...continu sooonnnHeart

NourinNiShal Goldie

Joined: 05 September 2012
Posts: 2279

Posted: 06 September 2013 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
the update Heart unique virman Heart and lmao..simmi learnt a good lesson :P I wish she never becomes a hurdle between the happening couple. and get her married to that sameer bakra :P and now lemme talk about the KISSS!!! ahh!!! the hungry lovers Heart loved the update to bits..update soon..writing queen Heart
shabsem Goldie

Joined: 08 June 2010
Posts: 1344

Posted: 07 September 2013 at 12:58am | IP Logged
superb update...manvi is thinking too much n its obvious for her...loved the part wen virat told simmi dat he doesnt have her stuff..aww dat was amazing n on top of dat priya's comment abt historical simmi was shock n virat n priya rocks. .how they deal wid simmy..manvi should also deal wid dat idiot the same way...liked the way virat cares for manvi...cont soon
pink1 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 April 2013
Posts: 7403

Posted: 07 September 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
awesome update

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