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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 7)

ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 12:41am | IP Logged
again you impressed me with your work.
i like whole the update yaar.
so riya ne arjun ke piche apne aadmi laga diye hain.
love glaring session between riya and her boss.
so arjun is going to meet commissioner sir for clearing his doubt about riya.
love the way rathore interrogating hotel guyes.
riya sees arjun.
shree was seeing the cctv and he sees riya.
he was shocked.
and he called arjun to tell him that riya is alive.
but someone attacked arjun but riya saved him.
love there moments.
shree was scared about arjun.
finally arjun sees riya.
now i am scared what will happen.
continue soon.
eagerly waiting for next part.
and get well son.

Edited by mastmegha22 - 16 August 2013 at 1:54am

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Christeee IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2760

Posted: 15 August 2013 at 2:13am | IP Logged
Omg finally they know about riya being alive
no precap not fair
plz update soon

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rocking_gal IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 February 2013
Posts: 2033

Posted: 15 August 2013 at 4:51am | IP Logged u have to give me time to edit it back again heheh...this one is from cell so short one just a gist of my main comment k...
i have read A nd B yesterday nd sry to tell u i have poor memory so how much i remb will comment on it now...
so all of them hurt Haan...well do they have right to dnt they...
the 4 guys bcoz of such a shattering truth..
aisha hmm b bcoz of Sameer...
Arjun nd shree feelings bang on...
so liza is observant one...hmmm
she caught on every detail very well let it be guys ya aisha turmoil...
hehehhe her heart did skip a beat when she saw shree approaching her..
loved aisha and shree apologies are done in frndship...lovely
now coming to c nd d part
ok now this was fab one gal sply the the d part ahem ahem u guessed it right it was bcoz of know what...
wow riya literally fought and stood on her on ground...loved it...
she went against all the protocols to keep him safe...
nd even though she couldn't be the one shadowing him she kept in her best supports...
so shree did discover the truth lastly...lastly He knows riya is alive...
 yes she is alive nd they know...dancing...heheh
wow the first person shree thinks to call is Arjun...luv u shree babu..,but u were little late...
god played a different game to bring out the truth nd had diff plan for their again first meeting...
so Arjun did feel comfort nd what now in a stranger embrace...oopps not stranger...riya...his riya...
very well described...
who was this hitman now...
but should seriously thank dis Gupta nd way dey did help a lot in bringing riya back to etf guys...
more will be edited from my lappy heheh...
well gal have to tell u u do deserve a hatsoff nd three cheers...
great style of writing nd can keep people hooked to your stry...
u are damn amazing writer...
so remb my request if anytime u write anything do remb us n keep us updated with ur work...will love to read them...
a good freshening thing to read after tiring day...

Edited by rocking_gal - 15 August 2013 at 4:54am

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..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aabish_02

It was amazing
arjun going to meet commishner
rathore and chottu finally got the clue
rathore was very angry when gupta was not confessing his crimes
shree saw riya in the footage
riya in same hotel where arjun was going to meet commishner
arjun was targetted by the shoter
but thank god riya saved him
and finally the much awaited moment came arjun saw riya
he got the biggest shock
but u end the update Cry
eagerly waiting for next part
plzzz update soon

Thanks again for the lovely comment, dear. Yes, our brave Riya saved Arjunwa. Big smile What's going to happen next? Wait and watchTongue
..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by madmadona

awesome update
omg arjun's life is in danger
feel bad for ariya both are immensely hurt
arjun's past feel bad for him
poor ladies i agree with them
i think that undercover agent ayesha met 4 months b4 is riya
cont soon

Yaayy, you commentedSmile

Yes, both Arjun and Riya have been hurt a lot. Now that they've come face-to-face, they'll have to deal with it properly. More on this in the future chaptersSmile
..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 16291

Posted: 15 August 2013 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nakshatra92

awesome... mind blowing... u made me speechless... lovd it to bits...

it was worth waiting...

4 parts in a go...

arjun and shree's understanding...

liza and ayeha's thoughts...

rathore and chottu... rathore on the verge of exploding...

at last it was a zor ka jhatka... riya came in front of him to save him ...

shree spotting riya on the footage and informing arjun and at the same time she came in front of him...

ab zyaada late mat karna...

update soon...

Thanks a lot, NakshatraSmile I am really glad that you liked the chapter after all this while.

Yes, Zor Ka Jhatka indeed;) Both of them finally came face to face.

And I promise, mein zyaada late nahin karoongi. Smile
..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Christeee

Omg finally they know about riya being alive
no precap not fair
plz update soon

Yes, they do;) 

And  I was being purposefully mean by not giving the precap. But the next chapter will be up soonTongue

Originally posted by shah10

Superb update
Love it


..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 August 2013 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1993.ssg

Fantastic update Rathore again went to club z for investication Poor manager and bertender Rathore ne apna gussa unpe nikala. Gupta is disgusting person. Rathore anger is well defined.     Love the way how chotu and shree controled Rathore's anger Rathore and chotu are also upset about Riya's lie. Arjun's nightmare of Roshni's death is blending with Riya's death . Arjun wants answer so he want to meet comissioner. Riya can do anything to save Arjun. She even break the rules to save arjun. Shree spotted riya in the vedio and call arjun to told this. OMG somebody aimed arjun thank god Riya saved him in right time.                                                          Looks like next chapter is going to interesting                                                          Pls continue soon.                                                          ( HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY )

Thanks for commenting;) And a Happy Independence Day to you tooHug

I am always happy to read your comments, it always tells me in a nutshell how you closely follow the story.

And yes, the next chapter will be interesting;) Will update soon, dear.

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