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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 43)

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aks13

Hmmm... I m so confused... that how am I going to describe this masterpiece...

First of all I never thought that somebody give that much importance to Dustin Coelho as it's the side character n rarely visible in the show but u did n for that I gv u a big salute.

His POV was mind blowing. He witnessed it all but couldn't to anything. Couldn't help his one of the best officers.

OMG he even knw that they both have have some sparks btwn them. Loved his observation skills or may I say experience.

What happened with Riya in the past???????

Finally he decided to spill the beans in front of Rathod n his team. It will be quite interesting to see that how they all take it.

Now what can I say about him as he is already a broken soul n whatever that is happening around him didn't help him either.

The segment where he reminded Riya n her dialogue iskay baad kudna bhi ha sar was a wow moment for me as I loved the way she that.

Hmm... interesting ...  Now his mind flooded with the memories of both Riya n Rosh.

 He is so determined to find the secret about Riya.

Atlast they cme face-to-face.

Eagerly waiting for the fire works!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.


 

Hello, dear Aks. Great to see you here, buddy!!!


Masterpiece??? *Blushes a deep red*


Thanks a lot for liking the Commissioner's PoV! I thought that people might not like it if I dedicate part of the chapter to a minor character. But it's a great relief knowing it's not that waySmile


Riya's history will be one of the highpoints of the tale from now on. A spoiler especially for you- our ACP is the one who will try to dig it up.Wink More on that later.


Yes, the building scene is my 3rd most favorite Ariya scene after the first meeting one and the chai-coffee one. So I couldn't help adding itEmbarrassed


And you said it rightly- Fireworks are in store, esp. for RiyaOuch


Thanks again for the lamba wala and awesome comment!!! Take care my dear.



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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AnjuRish

me re-reading the story for the 3rd time since t update
very anxious to know the reactions dear
how many more days fr the update??


Thanks a lot, Anju!!!


You are reading it for the third time? Yikes!!! That's making me feel so proud.
EmbarrassedSmile

Update on the 17th, ten P.M. Indian Standard TimeSmile Till then, take care!!!
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aabish_02

Api plz update soon
i m waiting for ur pm


Aww, my dear choti behen, aapko apna PM 17 tareek ke 10 baje mil jayega. Tab tak apna khayal rakhna, honey!!!Hug


And thanks a lot for the PM reminder as well!!!
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Live-life

please behna jaldi update karo na!!!! 
please Big smile
i really am very curious to know what happens next!!! 
please please!!!! 
Apni sis ki bhi baat nehi manugi? *puppy face*

update soon!!!!!!Smile


Lo, aapki baat mein kab taal sakti hoon? Update sirf do dinon mein.


Abb puppy face bana diya hai toh how can I keep quietTongue
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by beenish248

BRAVO !!!
Speechless .. Clap
i am hooked to thiss ff man ..
can u belive if i say the way u write no one cane write this kind of story accept madhu di though she hav left IF long ago i am her big fan , and offcourse now urs too ..Big smile
i have read many ff on ariya but ur story is uniqe dear , can't wait to read more plzzz update soon... Eagerly Waiting ..
and do pm me plzzz ... I am sending u buddy req ..,


Yayy! A new reader! I can't tell you how happy that makes me.


And thanks so much for all your compliments, seriously, it's going to make my head HUGE with prideLOL


I am honoured to know that I am one of your favorite writers!!!



I really hope to be deserving of your encouragement in the future updates as well, so please do keep reading and commenting!


Accepted your bud request- will PM you for the next chapter!


Take care, and thanks again!!!


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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IshqDewaani

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
I m sooo glad u updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was waiting for it!!!!!!
 
 
it was awesome!!!!! wow... Arjun's turmoil was brilliantly written...
 
now I am eagerly waiting for the next part...update sooon!!!!!!!!


Thanks for commenting! I am glad that you liked the part about Arjun's turmoil.


Next part on the 17th , ten PM. Will be waiting to hear from you after the updateSmile
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shivi1997

Plz dnt torture us more
plz update soon
yaar we are waiting

Originally posted by Aabish_02

Api plz update kry na 


Originally posted by Leki

Amri where are you??????


Dear Shivi,  Leki and Warda, 


My deepest apologies for making you wait for so long. Update in a couple of days!!!


Thanks for commenting, though. Feels good to know you guys missed meSmile
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyasarkar007


sukriya sukriya...apne reply diya ROFL


pakka na? pls do soon...not only me smone else also eagerly waiting for ur updateEmbarrassed and jab last update bear kr liya next wala bhi kr loongi dnt worry

yesss...excited...pls do soon



Originally posted by Live-life

Welcom back Sis!!!!!!! 
I missed you sooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL
Hey and do check your pm!!!! 
Sent you a little welcome speech!!!!! WinkLOL

Welcome back!!!!!
and update soon!!!!!

P.S- 17th sept...seems sooo faaarrr away!!!! but itni intezaar kiya hai to thoda aur hi sahi!!!! Big smile

Embarrassed

Originally posted by Leki

17th sept two more days??? How can u be so cruel????



Dear Ri, Live-Life and Leki,


I am SO gonna pay for making you guys wait, right!!!OuchLOL


Esp Leki seems to be in a red hot mood. Mujhe ab apne jaan ke liye dar lag raha hai.Dead


Par koi nahin, update is coming up well, and when it is posted, I hope that pacifies you.Smile


Take care, and waiting to know your responses to the next one!!!


Edited by -Amri- - 15 September 2013 at 11:26am

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