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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 37)

..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Live-life

wow you are back!!!!!!
I really missed you and you updates!!!!!
but now that you are back you shall rock the floor again!!!! heheheLOL

Yes you are right youngling!! we are the children of april and aries!!!! 
hail the children of aries!!!!! mu ahahah Sleepy
and thank you for the birthday wish!!!! 

And update soon!!!! 
missed you!!!! Big smile

Hail the children of Aries!Big smile Very well put.

I am so glad to be an Arian. Maybe I am silly to believe in this zodiac sign business, but I always find that I have most of the attributes associated with it.Wink And I think you do too.

Now we are sistersTongue

Originally posted by Live-life

Finally after ages!!!!!!!! An update!!! LOL
And this one is just one of the most awesomest and the most fantabulous chapter you have ever written!!!!!!! It's like with every single update you tell us that you are the diva of perfection, chahe wo writing, ho ya emotions!!! Big smile

It started out great!!! And i loved the fact that you also showed what Dustin cohelo thinks and feels. Cause usually no one really payd heed to him. So i am really happy that you did!! He is a verrryyy important character!! Embarrassed and he is right...

yehi to din ho te hain, jawaani ke, 
to feel, to love, to live life to it's fullest. Cause when you look back these are the memories that will stand out and bring a smile on your face!! Big smile this reminds me of the song The Climb by Miley Cyrus

And he was right about another thing...
That Arjun and Riya both deserve a second chance! Embarrassed Everybody does! 

And the way you described Arjun was just...OUT OF THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!! 
I mean this one of those times when you actually see that emptiness in him. And it kills every time!! 
You decribed his emotions so well!!!!!!! 
It's just amazing how he can be this emotional man one moment and the other he is back to his no-nonsense attitude of ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte! 
I mean he doesn't fail to amaze me every single time i see him or read about him!! 
And I loved those little flashbacks of Roshni and Riya! It just made me feel sooo...
I don't even know the word, as I said previously "too perfect for words"
I just hope he realizes why he sees them together.Smile

And the last bit was just a really big twist!!! I mean the Commissioner, Anita and...RIYA! 
at the ETF office!!! I am really eager to know what happens next, to read the reactions of each memeber of ETF! Cause this a VERY BIG TURNING POINT!! 

And what happened in Riya's past? I am dieing from curiosity!!! 

Please please please please update soon!!!! 

please please please!!!

Diva of perfection?  *Goes into a dead faint*

But thanks for such a lovely compliment.Tongue

Dustin, I think, is one of the underutilized characters on the show. They can really show him more. But I introduced his Po V for the pure purpose of justifying the cliffhangerWink

And what an appropriate song. Well-chosen. And I think the way Miley is now, the song is very much applicable to herLOL

And yes, second chances are very important in life. It's too much to expect that all of us go unscathed without making mistakes. I hope that all of us are granted this elusive second chance:)

So glad that you liked the portrayal of Arjun's emotions in this chapter. The way I see it, Arjun constantly swings between these two personas- the cop and the man. Often, they also mix together, and sometimes, they come to conflict with one another. More of that in the future chapters. I hope to explore more of this conflict with respect to RiyaBig smile

Thanks for the lovely comment, sis. And take care.

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..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aabish_02

I am short of words,there is no word to describe what I feel right now after reading this chapter
I just want to say that you are a perfect, mindblowing ,amazing writer api
the update was as usual fantastic
dustin pov and his thoughts about arjun and also about ariya relation was amazing
loved it
arjun emotions were beautifully portrayed
loved the memories of riya and roshini and the transformation of arjun was awesome
the last part was scary
riya in etf
precap is interesting
I am eager to know the reaction of arjun after seeing riya in etf
riya past will be revealed
and finally ariya meeting
ohh next update after 8 or 9 days
waiting for the next part
update soon
thanks for the pm

Hi, meri pyaari behna.Embarrassed

Thanks a lot for your awesome comment.

Most of the time, I think it's your love for me that makes you give me such compliments.Hug

Thanks for liking this chapter, esp. the last part.Tongue Now the real story begins.

Hope to attain your support and love in the future chapters as wellSmile Take care, I will see you in a week:)
..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 16291

Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jia03

Beautiful chapter...Clap... 
and a very interesting precapSmile... now the actual story begins,,, difficult to wait for the next part... update soonSmile

Oh, jia...So nice to see you here. Thanks for commenting, my dearSmile

Yes,the actual story begins NOW. Mega update coming up next - 7 A, B and C, together.Big smile

Hope you enjoy reading it, as much as I am going to enjoy writing it.

Take care, honey. And don't worry, ek hafta jald hi nikal jayega.

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..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged

Originally posted by khemanisarita

awesome part
love itClapClap

You are one of my most loyal readers, sweetheart. Thanks a lot for commentingSmile

Originally posted by unishaz

nice one..

Thanks!!! I am glad that you enjoyed it.Big smile
..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AbhiyaMaaneet

Awesome Update...
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...
Plzzz Update Soon...

Thanks a lot for commenting!

I am really glad you liked it.

Upcoming chapter- dhamakedaar update of 3 parts- 7 A,B and C. But update will be next week. But I promise to make it interestingSmile

Originally posted by Leki

I vl comment once i come out of the shock i got after reading this update... 


Theek hai, Leki...waiting eagerly for your commentSmile
..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shivi1997

Thnx god
at last they met
ariya met
i loved it
eagerly waiting 4 nxt update

Yes, they FINALLY met!!!Big smile

Abb aayega mazaa.

Thanks for commenting! Next update will be a looonnnggg one. In a weekOuch
..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AnjuRish

loved the way u have portrayed arjuns POV
dustin seems to be a nice fellow
finally we will see the relevation of truth
would love to c a triangle btw arjun riya and a third person 
might be fun ...

Thanks a lot for following the story. And for commentingTongue

So you liked the portrayal of Arjun's state of mind, huh? Thanks.

Yes, finally the revelation of the truth. Abb things are going to get very messy, and interesting.

Love triangle? Nice idea. I will see what I can doSmile

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..Amri.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:21am | IP Logged
My 2500th post!!!Embarrassed

I am a DAZZLER...Whooppieee!!!Party

4 saal baad akhir yahaan tak pahunch hii gayiLOL

Now, over to Nakshatra's comment. Ahem, ahem.

Originally posted by nakshatra92

most awaiting and the best part  ... Clap Clap Clap
ARIYA officially met...
right from the beginning, commn 's POV , arjun's POV ...

transformation of arjun from arjun to super cop ACP Rawte... fab...

then the last part , just got a heart attack... was waiting for their meet but didnt expect  like this...

want to know ETF's reaction , most importantly arjun's reaction on knowing about riya's mission...

one thing i forgot to tell you " you are a fantastic writer  Clap "

update soon... will be waiting for it...

Thanks a lot for commenting, my starTongue

I worked very hard on Arjun's PoV...glad that it turned out well. Big smile Hope it lived up to your expectations.

Next chapter will have a lot of thrills- stay tuned. The real story starts from here.Wink

Edited by Amri174 - 05 September 2013 at 1:24am

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