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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 31)

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Wow what a update just loved it
aysha and liza dnt even have any idea abt whats going on
the update was very emotional just felt so sad i was crying while reading
it just touched my heart and rathod had tears n shree aur chotu Cry
ur every update is so gud tht have no words to explain
i loved loved loved loved loved it
thnks for such a touching beautiful update

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hi dear i am sorry for the late reply was really busy i read the chapter but could not comment and then as soon as i got time i re read both the chapters thrice it is superb wonderful job i liked the way you are protraying the inner thoughts of characters with their emotions and facial expression seriously yar take a bow!!!! i am eagerly waiting for next update 

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Unres my comments on pg-29.
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Amri my dhamki queen update plzEmbarrassed

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api jaldi update kry plz
i m waiting

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heard u are going to update today! waiting dear

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api ab toh update de do na plzzz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khemanisarita

wow
awesome part
love itThumbs Up




ThanksSmile You are the first one to comment, as always:)


Originally posted by ll_megha_ll

again you rocked dear.
i have no words to describe.
sacchi mai agar koi apna hum jispe vishvas karte hai uski care karte hai usse pyaar karte hai agar vo hame dhoka deta hai to seedha dil pe chot lagte hai or jeena mushkil ho jata hai or kisi pe vishvas karne ka man nahi kata.
or aisa hi kuch ETF boys ke saath hua hai.
i am really crying when shree says riya is alive and she bertrayed us our friendship our trustCry Cry Cry Cry Cry  CryCry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry  Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry
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Choree and rathore feels bertrayed.
i am scared what about arjun when he knows the truthwhat was his reaction.
ek taraf riya ka pov sahi hai usne jo kuch kiya apne desh ke liye kiya or doosri taraf etf boys they feel bertrayed.
i am speechless.
continue soon.
and thax for pm.


Waah, megha, kya baat kahi hai tumne. Superb yaar. Abb rona band karo, aaj 10 baje update hai. See youWinkTongue


Originally posted by sharmaayushi

hey dear
thnx 4 updating today and the pm
it was really a sad and full of emotional part
shree has really broken out to tha deepest core of his heart
they way shree collepsed really was hard to imagine
its hard to see calm and a brilliant officer in this stage
the shock has deeply hurted him
the feelings of bretraying a friend by beautifully shown
cant see this situatuion of our gadget freak
loved the line"But overriding his happiness was the sense of betrayal that was stinging every part of his body."
both rathore and chotu r equally shocked as shree is
the lines shree spoke rooted yhem to their places
loved and heartouching lines"
Ri...Riya...You know, Rath...Rathore Sir, Ch...Chottu...She is ...not...de... She is...ali..NOT DEAD!!! SHE IS ALIVE!!! She...she...pla...played us. SHE TRICKED US!!!"
the way he said this line made my heart ache
the way u showed rathore expression and mind feeling by making him turn with a pale face
omg rathore crying ...cant handel this dear
chotu is reallty rooted to the ground
this lines chotu said"
How...how could she do this to us?" clearly shows how much betrayed he felt
three of them were bound with a tread called riya
now three of him r suffering from emotional ill health
thnx 4 such an emtional part
hatsoff dear
salute 2 u 4 this great part
hey plz dear dont discontinue plzzz
i love ur work plz dont to that
continue soon
thnx once again
will be waiting eagerly 4 nextg update
plz post it soon

Hello, Ayushi dear. Nice to see you here as always. Thanks for highlighting your favorite parts. It's always a pleasure to read your response. Chapter 6C today:)

Originally posted by unishaz

omg

Originally posted by shah10

Wow.. Awesome

Thanks, Unishaz and Shah10:)

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