Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Aabish_02

I am short of words,there is no word to describe what I feel right now after reading this chapter
I just want to say that you are a perfect, mindblowing ,amazing writer api
the update was as usual fantastic
dustin pov and his thoughts about arjun and also about ariya relation was amazing
loved it
arjun emotions were beautifully portrayed
loved the memories of riya and roshini and the transformation of arjun was awesome
the last part was scary
riya in etf
precap is interesting
I am eager to know the reaction of arjun after seeing riya in etf
riya past will be revealed
and finally ariya meeting
ohh next update after 8 or 9 days
waiting for the next part
update soon
thanks for the pm



Hi, meri pyaari behna.๐Ÿ˜ณ


Thanks a lot for your awesome comment.


Most of the time, I think it's your love for me that makes you give me such compliments.๐Ÿค—


Thanks for liking this chapter, esp. the last part.๐Ÿ˜› Now the real story begins.


Hope to attain your support and love in the future chapters as well๐Ÿ˜Š Take care, I will see you in a week:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: jia03

Beautiful chapter...๐Ÿ‘... 

and a very interesting precap๐Ÿ˜Š... now the actual story begins,,, difficult to wait for the next part... update soon๐Ÿ˜Š





Oh, jia...So nice to see you here. Thanks for commenting, my dear๐Ÿ˜Š


Yes,the actual story begins NOW. Mega update coming up next - 7 A, B and C, together.๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Hope you enjoy reading it, as much as I am going to enjoy writing it.


Take care, honey. And don't worry, ek hafta jald hi nikal jayega.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

beautiful
awesome part
love it๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


You are one of my most loyal readers, sweetheart. Thanks a lot for commenting๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by: unishaz

nice one..



Thanks!!! I am glad that you enjoyed it.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: AbhiyaMaaneet

Awesome Update...
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...
Plzzz Update Soon...




Thanks a lot for commenting!

I am really glad you liked it.

Upcoming chapter- dhamakedaar update of 3 parts- 7 A,B and C. But update will be next week. But I promise to make it interesting๐Ÿ˜Š



Originally posted by: Leki

I vl comment once i come out of the shock i got after reading this update... 


OMG!

Theek hai, Leki...waiting eagerly for your comment๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Shivi1997

Thnx god
at last they met
ariya met
i loved it
eagerly waiting 4 nxt update


Yes, they FINALLY met!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Abb aayega mazaa.


Thanks for commenting! Next update will be a looonnnggg one. In a week
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: AnjuRish


loved the way u have portrayed arjuns POV
dustin seems to be a nice fellow
finally we will see the relevation of truth
would love to c a triangle btw arjun riya and a third person 
might be fun ...



Thanks a lot for following the story. And for commenting๐Ÿ˜›


So you liked the portrayal of Arjun's state of mind, huh? Thanks.


Yes, finally the revelation of the truth. Abb things are going to get very messy, and interesting.


Love triangle? Nice idea. I will see what I can do๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
My 2500th post!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ


I am a DAZZLER...Whooppieee!!!๐Ÿฅณ


4 saal baad akhir yahaan tak pahunch hii gayi๐Ÿ˜†


Now, over to Nakshatra's comment. Ahem, ahem.


Originally posted by: nakshatra92

most awaiting and the best part  ... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

ARIYA officially met...
right from the beginning, commn 's POV , arjun's POV ...

transformation of arjun from arjun to super cop ACP Rawte... fab...

then the last part , just got a heart attack... was waiting for their meet but didnt expect  like this...

want to know ETF's reaction , most importantly arjun's reaction on knowing about riya's mission...

one thing i forgot to tell you " you are a fantastic writer  ๐Ÿ‘ "

update soon... will be waiting for it...



Thanks a lot for commenting, my star๐Ÿ˜›


I worked very hard on Arjun's PoV...glad that it turned out well. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Hope it lived up to your expectations.


Next chapter will have a lot of thrills- stay tuned. The real story starts from here.๐Ÿ˜‰


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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Kaval05

i was eagerly waiting for your update. When i read it i was looking for more. I just cant wait to read more. So Riya is finally meeting everyone. It will be very interesting. Update soon


Thanks a lot, Kaval. So sweet of you to say this.


I am happy that I could sustain your interest๐Ÿ˜Š


Yes, Riya is FINALLY meeting everyone. Things will take a turn from now on. But for the better or for the worse?๐Ÿ˜‰


Update next week, but a long one๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Jorja

Super awesome update
Loveit
Cont soon

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Aww, thanks a lot, Jorja!!!๐Ÿ˜Š Happy to see you here again.


Originally posted by: shah10

Wow.. Superb update
Love Arjun's pov


Thanks a lot, dear.

At this point, I'd like to express my appreciation for commenting so diligently. It really means a lot to me๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awwsssmmmly awwsssmmm part
brillently written
can't wait to read more
plzz come back sooon
cont sooon
thnx 4 pm