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Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 (Page 27)

ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
again you rocked dear.
i have no words to describe.
sacchi mai agar koi apna hum jispe vishvas karte hai uski care karte hai usse pyaar karte hai agar vo hame dhoka deta hai to seedha dil pe chot lagte hai or jeena mushkil ho jata hai or kisi pe vishvas karne ka man nahi kata.
or aisa hi kuch ETF boys ke saath hua hai.
i am really crying when shree says riya is alive and she bertrayed us our friendship our trustCry Cry Cry Cry Cry  CryCry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry  Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry
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Choree and rathore feels bertrayed.
i am scared what about arjun when he knows the truthwhat was his reaction.
ek taraf riya ka pov sahi hai usne jo kuch kiya apne desh ke liye kiya or doosri taraf etf boys they feel bertrayed.
i am speechless.
continue soon.
and thax for pm.

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 27 August 2013 at 1:49am

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sharmaayushi Senior Member

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 8:17am | IP Logged
hey dear
thnx 4 updating today and the pm
it was really a sad and full of emotional part
shree has really broken out to tha deepest core of his heart
they way shree collepsed really was hard to imagine
its hard to see calm and a brilliant officer in this stage
the shock has deeply hurted him
the feelings of bretraying a friend by beautifully shown
cant see this situatuion of our gadget freak
loved the line"But overriding his happiness was the sense of betrayal that was stinging every part of his body."
both rathore and chotu r equally shocked as shree is
the lines shree spoke rooted yhem to their places
loved and heartouching lines"
Ri...Riya...You know, Rath...Rathore Sir, Ch...Chottu...She is She is...ali..NOT DEAD!!! SHE IS ALIVE!!! She...she...pla...played us. SHE TRICKED US!!!"
the way he said this line made my heart ache
the way u showed rathore expression and mind feeling by making him turn with a pale face
omg rathore crying ...cant handel this dear
chotu is reallty rooted to the ground
this lines chotu said" could she do this to us?" clearly shows how much betrayed he felt
three of them were bound with a tread called riya
now three of him r suffering from emotional ill health
thnx 4 such an emtional part
hatsoff dear
salute 2 u 4 this great part
hey plz dear dont discontinue plzzz
i love ur work plz dont to that
continue soon
thnx once again
will be waiting eagerly 4 nextg update
plz post it soon

Edited by sharmaayushi - 25 August 2013 at 10:32am

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satanslove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged
res...need to catch up on  chapters...will unres in a while

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DivineDarkness IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Looks like Dhamki Queen is back in action!!!!

Awesome update... Emotional One...
What has Riya's lie done to them... if this is Shree's reaction then Arjun's well that will destroy everything...
Shree's feelings are beautifully potrayed...
He will never forgive her!!! Cant blame him also she was his bff *sigh*
Rathore's reaction on hearing  Riya alive!!! That shows how much they cared for her what she was for them... but all they got was cheating and betrayal... How xan she eo this??? 
Chotu he too is shattered... well trio was partners in crime nah... 
I feel really angry at Riya for doing this to the guys and breaking their heart their trust like this...
Well its time to see Arjun's reaction now after the realisation sinks in... Riya will have to answer lot of questions... 
Continue soon me waiting...

Edited by Leki - 26 August 2013 at 3:55am

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jia03 Goldie

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Awesome chapter...Clap
you have beautifully portrayed their emotions...
shree outburst... everything was perfect...

please dont think of discontinuing...
its an awesome FFStar... and i always look forward for its update...Smile
will be waiting for the next chapterSmile

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Aks13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:43am | IP Logged

Comment on part-6A

Fascinating update dr.

Arjun n Riya's POVs were amazingly written.

Yayyy comletely dedicated to Ariya.

You very well described each n every emotion n thought which were going through their heart n mind when they saw eachother.

World seemed to be stopped for both of them at that very moment when they were in eachother arms.

His heart always knw that he loved her so much but his mind denied this fact everytime but at that time his heart overpower his mind.

Wow the way Arjun described her inner turmoil was too adorable.

OMG Till Arjun got the meaning of her last gestur, she ran away from their.

How much hard they both tried to control their heart but couldn't do it coz thy belonged to eachother.

Awww Riya was drooling over him!!!!!

Wow She forgot everything n its quite obvious ashe's world for her.

I hope after this encounter he accepted his feelings for her.

Loved it to the core.

Thanks for such a wonderful piece of work.


For vry vry vryyy... late comments.

Edited by Aks13 - 03 September 2013 at 9:32am

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Aks13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged

Mind blowing n a heart touching update dr.

Wow Riya's one lie turned their world upside down.

I never expected that Shree ever behave like that as he is a easy going person but If he was so much shattered by knowing this fact then we can only imagine the extent of pain n agony that other three r going through.

Its justified to some extent as if someone so close to your heart broke your trust thn you will feel an unimaginable pain that will break u compltly.

All this showed that the depth of relation they shared with her is way much stronger thn anyone can think.

Loved all their POVs dr, especially of Shree.

Hats off to u!!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue as soon as possible.

So so Sorry again for vry vry late comments.

Edited by Aks13 - 03 September 2013 at 10:33am

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mishree IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Shreee Cry

Blv totta hai insan bikher jata hai 

Porrr shree ,chotu and Sam bhaesa me cry it is hrt touchy update

U make me spechless I have no words 

Claps 4 u

Thanx 4 Pm me 

Update soon

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