Ariya FF:"Deception,Intrigue..."#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 - Page 28

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

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ps megh should be thankful to me😆 

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OH MY GOD😲

u should add this line before ur update

caution- this update can cause heart attack. author is not responsible for any kind of thing like that.🤢

i am seriously in plain shock and disbelieve at this update...where i was so excited and now i am...i am on my way to hospital to check up my BP. gosh girl, another update like this and then RIP Riya Sarkar🤢 now i know why my heart was beating like i am on gun point😆 i was literally scared at this update...especially the last part⭐️

ok, enough of my shits, now back to update

update starting from commissioner's pov, nice...from his pov arjun riya's journey, arjun's individual journey from a  cop who had dreams to a cold ruthless man waiting for revenge was touching. and also his helpless feeling that he cant provide any gd to arjun was also touching...and then, riya entered. 

youth...really, being reckless, to live each moment. to live for the one u love...

then cut to arjun ...omg. he was so shocked and he was in dazed state when driving. then the transformation...maybe i was expecting disbelieve, or devastating, but rage and anger was so unexpected. like he got another reason to live now...and what does those lines mean? finding riya mukherjee and ...??? he will rip her in half kya?😆 pls no...already choree is ready to do that thing😆 and also rathore too...Riya need some support and this time her madam wont also support her.😆

then...arjun entered, went to rathore's cabin...and i was dead.🤢 i had left my heart in that cabin, if u dont update what happened next then u will be responsible for my death. maybe i am becoming drama queen, hormonal teenager😆 but really i am literally begging u to update this ASAP. pls. pls pls. update this thing. i dont know how i survive till u update...what will happen to riya arjun when they meet? ETF reaction? oh nooo😭😭😭

pls update...pls pls pls🤓

ps, did i tell u this? u are fabulous writer? no? 

👏👏👏 no other writer, except someone else and u, can make me feel like this. u are just rocking.⭐️ i was serious when i said why something like this cant happen in show and gorky should read this...it deserves a big round of applause👏👏 keep it up⭐️

pls, one small request, update soon, and pls no cliff hanger in next part. i know i myself want to wait for ariya reunite, but trust me i just cant handle this anymore. so pls, if u are going to show their meeting in next update, pls show it fully in next update pls pls pls i beg u.😃

Originally posted by: Live-life

wow you are back!!!!!!

I really missed you and you updates!!!!!

but now that you are back you shall rock the floor again!!!! hehehe😆

Yes you are right youngling!! we are the children of april and aries!!!! 

hail the children of aries!!!!! mu ahahah 🥱

and thank you for the birthday wish!!!! 

And update soon!!!! 

missed you!!!! 😃