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Originally posted by: LekiSuper Duper update...
Riya's lie have affected guys really bad... i dnt think it will be easy for them to forgive her easily watever reason she states...Very true...their forgiveness is not to be won so easily🤢Shree he tried to keep himself busy so that he will forget her memories but its not that easy especially when she was so special... Shree understood what Arjun is going through...The team is going to be Arjun's biggest support in this tough time.*SPOILER ALERT* What will happen if Shree and Chottu team up with him against Riya, and how will she feel? 😉Arjun he is really in miserable condition... he can't beleive person he have started to love again have lied about her existence... that's hard to digest... he is having nightmares of Roshini's death and now Riya's... how much more pain will he go through...Rathore he is in no better condition... he diverted his anger towards pub people...Both Arjun and Rathore are dealing with things in their own ways, and I wanted to show that.Aisha and Lisa understood something big have happened that affected the guys really badly... Lisa's thought abt Shree was good... More of them in the upcoming chapters.one thing i'm happy about is the way you concentrate on each and every character and addressing minute details also... Well Done👏Thanks! One of my grouses about the show is that the other characters are not given screen space enough. So I wanted to present their sides as well.So Rathore got clue about the case... Loved the way he confronted that guy... True to chief's role👍🏼 Thanks😊So now NIB is gonna take care of Arjun's protection... well i want to know his reaction when he knows it... but the way things are shapping up i dnt think that will happen...More on that later!!!The meeting of NIB Cheif and Commissioner was cool...Riya's reaction on knowing Arjun's life is on danger well that was predictable... her thoughts feelings about Arjun well potrayed...so except Arjun every one is aware of Riya's feelings!!!!Yes, Arjun can be so stupid sometimes😆OK Arjun going to meet Commissioner and demand some answers regarding Riya...Finally Shree found out that secret RIYA ALIVE!!!! well what toofan will this bring????oh he called Arjun but before Shree could drop the atom bomb Arjun got shock of his life... HE MET RIYA!!!!! 😲😲Ariya meeting was epic... the way you set the whole scene was just WOW!!!!You liked it? Me too. The scene just flowed, and I typed down whatever I visualized on my mind.and you ended as i predicted and No Precap😡precap in 10 mins, esp for you😛CONTINUE SOON...P.S : i thought not to comment but... now update soonish otherwise be ready for KBB's lobb😈Me scared now
Originally posted by: Vampire-queenHey how are you first tell me? 😳 Feeling better, thanks for asking😊
i always need a peaceful time for reading and commenting on my favs , so sorry for the delay 😛
I loved the progress in the case, and waiting for you to unfold more pages of the case😉. Me too, I am loving this journey already.
Ah, it was awesome reading about the tough red faced chief sameer rathod and his leadership!😉
The way he treated with the trio one; the manager two; the bartender and three , siddharth gupta😡 * iss kamine par sabse jada gussa aata hai..🤢😆 *.
Handling siddharth gupta was very brilliantly written! Sam losing his temper , chotu and shree controling him and also the nervousness of the suspect . Well written! Rathore is one under-appreciated guy on the show, and I wanted to show more of his skills as a cop and a leader😊
Finally they got a lead for the case , i am very happy 👏 .
The expression of arjun's painful night and his pain, and also those hurtful nightmares of his dead wife is portrayed well. Aww, thanks😊
Commissioner agreed to meet him😲. That was shocking! Not really but, it was nice to read the concern for his officers.
It was also awesome reading the character of Anita shukla, riya's boss! She is the officer in true sense! Nationla security is much much more important than anyone's life ( sorry just my POV ). And i am really appriceating her objection to both commissioner and riya! 😃 Your viewpoint is very correct indeed. I wanted to show that there is an objective person other than Riya, who is worried about Arjun, and the Commissioner, who is worried about the ETF and his officer.
and now riya. You are right, how can anyone sit idle knowing that her love is in danger! Loved the way she was ready to cross the boundary apart for her love , her arjun☺️. But i am feeling proud that she followed the protocol of NIB. Instead of going herslef she alloted her man behind him!wow.. I just had to put that in *blushes*
The inter-relationship between anita and riya is also commendable. Aww, I am glad that you liked it. More of Anita and Riya in the future updates.
One more thing about this story,
the time ploting is most important for any story, and i noticed you are managing this fantasticly this job! Thanks a ton!!!!
Arrival of arjun at the resurant and at the same time shree calling him, and alos in that time span you described the story . Really its a brilliant job! I wanted to make the scene dramatic, after all it's a high point in the story. I am a big drama queen, ask my parents😆
Then the moment riya pushed him and saved him from the bullet! Ah, ths will be the the scene of this chapter😉..
Ah, this scene is the most favourite scene ! I just loved this last part! Thanks again😃
It is like he got heaven with her. The man always frustrated with the suffering of immense pain , how hurriedly grab the little source of solace. ❤️ and he hugged her, not let the thing go away from him, which is comforting him right now. Haha...dekhne se pehle hii samajh gaye ji woh hi hai. Jab pehli baar mile toh aisa hi hua na? 😳
At the same time shree said, that she is alive❤️😳.. And then..then u made a full stop..agrr😡🤢😆Eeks...scared of Vampu's bite!😲
uff i am falling more for this☺️
question- the sharp shooter must be following him? Umm ! How he'd get to know that arjun is coming here? This q will be answered later, suspense.😉
M.K and tim supposed to be there but how come riya knew noticed the shooter? Reveal this soon! I really wanted read the expression riya held when she found arjun at the gun point, her fear, her uneasiness everything.. Please please.. The next chapter starts like that only. 😃
and sorry tht was just a silly question!😆 Not at all😊
Don't made me wait a loong this time. The real story starts now i guess😉 Absolutely😛
wonderful job *claps*. 😃 Thank you, thank you and thank you😳
Originally posted by: devildiva21favorite devil???😉 ji hum bas badia ap btao? howz you now??@green... hmm answer later haan pkka riya hi hai phr to😆😉liked it nah... me loved it...😎precap plz😈
Originally posted by: Aks13Splendid work swthrt. Hats off to u!!!!!!
Loved Sam in his rowdy rathore mood.
OMG thy both were in killer mood n that manager was provoking thm. Oppsss wrong move.
You provide a great scope to Rathod's character to demonstrate his capabilities as a ETF chief, which he never get in the serial. Not only Rathod but u gv equal space to each n every character.
Loved the way Rathod shut the mouth of that manager through his straight frwrd talks.
Yeyyy thy got the lead coz of Rathod n that Sid malhotra is a piece of crap.
Wow Arjun's sleep was again disturbed by a nightmare but this time its about Riya's death in place of Rosh. May be coz his mind was clouded by her thoughts but where is the gunshot n that too in musty godown was cme frm????? Is this some kind of indication???????
Finally he decided to clear all the mess by talking to commissioner. That's nice thought.
The interrogation of Sid malhtr was damn exciting. He looked like a hard nut to crack but our very own rowdy Rathore showed him his true place. I wish I can saw his expression at that time.
Waaooo Riya can go to any extent to save him. That's amazing n this is wht called true love!!!!
OMG hw cleverly she assigned the task to safeguard Arjun frm any kind of threat to M.K. n Tim.
Wow Shree was shocked beyond limits whn he saw Riya in the footage. I m glad that he didn't get fainted. Wht happened whn he see her face-to-face??????
Oh gosh!!!!!!! Somebody aimed at Arjun but Riya saved him in the nick of time.
Awww he felt that he was familiar with the touch.
Finally thy cme face-to-face.
Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!
Waiting for the fire works.
Continue as soon as possible.
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