|{AsYa FF: Chapter Black}| *HIATUS* - Page 11

Posted: 10 years ago
great update..
very well written
asad doesnt even know his sister's name...?? 😲
i liked noor...she loves najma so much she came to meet asad for her...👏
conti soon..
Posted: 10 years ago
Hy such a lovely update...

Nikhat ko kya hua...

Hy m really dying to read rmntc turn in tis story...

BTwn..very nice update
Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update dr!!!!👏
i simply loved the little yet i may say normal converstion Asya had!!!😳
i just hope that Nikhat was excited abt AAK out of gratitude only...🤔

Im shocked Asad doesnt knw his sister's name!!!!😲
he hate her that much??
eager to knw his reactions abt Najma!!!

Please dont send Zoya with Aayan...Asad wont be there yaar!!!😆

Posted: 10 years ago
That was a beautiful up-date...

How come he don't know his sister...Maybe thats explains why he didn't take her with him when he left Rashid's house...

Loved Asya conv...so beautiful...!!!! 😳 

Nikhaat sounded like a teen-age boy who gave a huge party when his mama and daddy were out of town and then they called him to say that their car broke down and they were coming back without knowing that the house was full of teenage boys and girls...!!! 🤣   

Can't wait for the next up-date...!!! 😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by anushreemishra


Hey no worries dear we can understand...
This was amazing...so many interesting turn of events...
I was intrigued by the relationship dynamics between ayaan and nikhat...i wonder whats the whole story...
Asya car convo was amazing...i was pleasantly shocked to see asad trying to talk to zoya that calmly and i loved how he understood what was going in her mind...i am so happy to see this senstive and understanding side of asad...so zoya is finally regaining some of her self confidence and zest back...it was good to see the glimpse of strong and confident zoya...
Asad listening to his mother's tape was sweet...i can see he is moody person there was a day wen he broke down listening to the tape and today it calmed him...good to see zoya has a calming effect on his life...
Ohk asad doesn't know his sister's name...that was a little shocking😲
great update...will wait for wednesday and i hope everything is fine at home now😊


👍🏼

please continue

really interesting story

Posted: 10 years ago
I wonder why Nikhat was more exited with the prospect of Asad coming to the village than Ayaan. Loved the conversation between AsYa in the car, finally they're getting somewhere. Also loved the end when Noor revealed that Najma was Asad's sister.
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow

This was superb

Wonder wat was up with Nikhat



Awesome work

AsYa were amazing

Is Ayaan falling for Zoya... 😲
Posted: 10 years ago
i just came across ur ff today n i wudnt be lying if i say i luvd it to d core... each & every character u wrote it so beautifully... i sent u a buddy request... pls pm me when u next update :-)
Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the part!
Eagerly waiting to knw Asad's reaction...
Cont soon...

Congrats for 2nd thread...

Ps. Mujhe pm nehi milte 😭
Posted: 10 years ago
That was just amazing. He doesn't even know his own sisters name.. Bad really bad.. I feel sorry for Najma.. Poor girl getting punished for some mistake she haven't committed or say she doesn't even know. I love Noor.. She is such a genuine friend.. A real Best friend.. You know I imagine her as Humaira of QH.. Humaira is beautiful and I think she suits for this role. Its just my imagination.. I am so eager to know Asad's reactions to what Noor told her...

Umm.. Nikhat thought the guest to be Asad Ahmed Khan. Umm.. What does she has in her mind.. Does she has some sort of feeling for her savior. This is turning to be more and more interesting.

Asad and Zoya are trying to lessen the awkwardness between them. Talking to one another normally. I loved the update.

Do continue soon.

Dee

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