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FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2 (Page 97)

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged
amazing story...waiting for next update..

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gopijimodi

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Finally he heard baby's crying voice...
Eagerly waiting for next...

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 5:04am | IP Logged
awesome update...
loved it...
arnav heard baby's cry...Smile

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Loved the update..:) yes arnav heard baby .. Hope to see his love fr his baby on next update..:) thnk u..:)

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Abhay sounds so cute!
Really love this Khushi- It's title lured me in and now I'm addicted!
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!
Your way of writing is just awsome! 

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 5:28am | IP Logged
GRT UPDATE... Khushi has feelings fr hm... Plz gv d nxt update

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
awesome... continue soon

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Posted: 03 September 2013 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rasa23

Originally posted by gopijimodi

Originally posted by Rasa23

Last part was good. It ws nt bd.but i didnt like it much.sry to say.aftr hearingthat a baby is cryng he jst left or shut the door frm inside.m cnfusd.
 
Rasa23,
 
I edited my post to clarify that he closed the door after re-entering the house.
If you had that doubt, I am sure others also had that doubt.
Hence, I corrected that last line.
Thank you for asking for clarifications.
 
Also, thank you for your honest opinion about the update.
What part you did not like Rasa23. let me know.
Well, I gave it my best I think (with my limited time and limited creativity.)
Sorry to dissappoint you.
Thanks once again for honesty. Hope you will stay with the story and give it a try.
 
Regards.
thank you very much for ur reply..and m glad that u took my opinion wholeheartedly.. okk now let me tell u ... jst now again i read the update..nd i must say u wrote it beautifully..actually i was expectng the story in another way..but u showed that  how arnav got attracted to khushi nd also khushi got emotional nd lost control for sm minutes.. but soon the reality hit her... actually u updated it ysterday..that tym if i m nt wrong it was 2 am :p nd i was feeling sleepy but as i got ur pm i couldnt control myself nd started reading it..so i think  that can be a reason i didnt like it much at that tym...but jst now i read it again ..must say u wrote it beautifully..congrats...nd m waiting for the next part..jst try to make it MIND BLOWING :D  nd ofcourse i wont stop reading ur story because i jst love it :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Hi Rasa23,
 
Thank you for replying back.
Thank you for giving it a second try.
I appreciate your feedback.
 
Regards.

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