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FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2 (Page 110)

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Superb update.
Arnav is suddenly transformed into fatherhood.
Did not he expect this? Since Khushi was pregnet 15 months before so he should have think about the baby also. It is clear that Khushi hide every thing from Arnav and his family because he harassed her and dumped her with out considering her love towards him from childhood.  Even if he forgot the recent things after the accident, he recognised Khushi as Payal's sister and their family friend. He accused her with out considering this fact also. So what will she do? How do she contact him and inform him about the baby.  Instead of getting angry he has to apologise to Khushi.  Just because of him, she has to gone through the hardships and lead a life hidden from her family and friends.

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by foesb

Arnav came to know about his baby! that whole scene was nicely written, starting off from Arnav showing his dominance nature by entering the room without a single query and the way he peeped in and checked out the baby was simply fantastic. I really adore the way you have described the baby from Arnav's point of view it was truly amazing, I love babies so the description you gave was just so sweetSmile again I like the fact you are keeping Arnav with in his character, still he has all his characteristics which makes him ASR. And the manner he straight away claimed himself as the baby's father that was yet another superb scene. As you have mentioned now truly the dynamics have changed, now along with Khushi he has someone else who is equally important and the only plausible way he can have that precious bundle in his life is if only Khushi forgives him. Arnav was questioning Khushi about why she chose not to disclose such an important thing, and the answer Khushi gave was really good! Was expecting Khushi to behave like this after all the things she was subjected to even though it wasn't intentional.Now I'm sure Arnav wouldn't want to procrastinate in ensuring he has his Khushi along with the baby,so eagerly waiting to see how he will do thatBig smile  Great update!
Hi foesb,
 
I like your prespective and your words of how you took the story.
I see a baby picture on your profile. Smile
Thank you for reading the story and commenting.
 
Regards.
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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rasa23

heyy gopi m going outstation for two days..so dnt stop pming me..thankss..byeee..tc..goodn8 :)
Hi Rasa23,
 
I will keep sending you PMs about updates.
Take care and enjoy.
Thank you so much for investing your time and effort in this story.
 
Regards.
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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kannansangee

didi , I told you this chapters were the most expected chapters...
 and now I say you justified each and every character ...
 no one was right or wrong...
 I loved  the way you expressed arnavs emotions ... and I would like to read khushis point of  view too ...about him getting angry at her ...
 I just loved the update ...
 thanks for pm .
 waiting for the next update
 
 
Hi Kannansangee,
 
As always thank you for your kind appreciation.
Thank you for reading and commenting Kiddo.
 
Regards,
didi
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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Goshhh u protryed each and every emotion sooo welll...waiting for this forrr sooo longgg finally here it is and u worte soo well that I just cant stop myself imgining this scene...Arnav inner fighting khushi's bitter words very well done job...
I really appreciate ur effort...beautifully written...i really loved each abd every word of this chapter...
Cant wait to read further...
Super se bhi bhut uper wala update thi...hats off...brilliant work...

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by renjus

thank you very much for a wonderful update you words were so good that I was picturing it in my mind.  Great keep going.
Hi renjus,
 
Thank you.
 
Regards.
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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hira_arnie

Goshhh u protryed each and every emotion sooo welll...waiting for this forrr sooo longgg finally here it is and u worte soo well that I just cant stop myself imgining this scene...Arnav inner fighting khushi's bitter words very well done job...
I really appreciate ur effort...beautifully written...i really loved each abd every word of this chapter...
Cant wait to read further...
Super se bhi bhut uper wala update thi...hats off...brilliant work...
 
 
hira_arnie,
 
Thank you.
 
Regards
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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sarita_barun

You updated!!!!!!!! hehe...
Arnav's raw emotions on full display.
His reaction to his son... PERFECT!!
Made me tear up, from not knowing about this human being to knowing that you are partially the reason for this tiny creature to be alive.  Its just wow.
Khushi's anger is justified.
How could she have known he wouldnt have insulted her again.
Both of them were wrong in some instances but they were also correct.
Its good that Arnav was willing to forgive, because the one that matters is his son.
He already missed out on the entire pregnancy and Abhay's first 6 months... Arnav won't let his son out of his sight now.
Waiting patiently... take your time love Smile

Hi sarita_barun,
 
Always nice to hear your perspective.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
 
Regards.


Edited by gopijimodi - 05 September 2013 at 12:05pm

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