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FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2 (Page 107)

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Very well written chapter. Arnav's emotions came out really well. I could visualize each and every change on his face. What Arnav felt is justified. He had every right to know about his son's existence. But it was not Khushi's responsibility to inform him. Khushi's reaction was apt too. She was thrown out by him and he had refused to accept the baby as his back then. So Khushi did not have the duty to inform Arnav. They both were the victims of fate's cruelty. The responsibility laid with Buaji who knew about both Arnav and Khushi's condition. She knew Khushi was suffering and struggling in Lucknow to support herself and the baby. She also knew Arnav's memory came back and he was more than willing to bring back Khushi with the respect she deserved. But she chose to remain mum. She decided for Arnav, Khushi and Abhay all by herself without giving a thought to what the consequences will be. It was her responsibility to inform Arnav atleast that much that he now had a son. She did not need to tell anything else to him if she did not want to. If she was punishing Arnav for the mistake he did when he lost his memory, she was also punishing Khushi and their baby at the same time. So no matter what help Buaji did to Khushi, she is very much responsible for their current state. I am very excited to see what happens next. 

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
amazing updates
loved them..

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:19am | IP Logged
wow awesome...
the way Arnav felt the way Khushi's reply... really awesome...
Arnav did blame Khushi 15 months ago without even think twice...
how can he blame an innocent girl like that... because of his one action... Khushi's life ruined... living as a single mother in a society is very much impossible thing to do... but she had buaji and her relatives... if not what will happen...
it is really difficult to forgive arnav b;case before he throw rude words on her face atleast he need to think that girl is also has to live
awesome... update
waiting for the next part 

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:54am | IP Logged
awesome update...
realllyyy fantastic ...
finally arnav got to know about his baby...
i love the way Khushi answered back arnav he deserve this...
i think arnav will now won't sit quietly ,he will surely controlling khushi life in coming trace, it might b forcefully or loving... its my guess , lets see...
thanx a lot for pm.. :)
loved it...
n as alwaysss i ll wait for more update... :) :)

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged
Part 18

Loved how you described arnav's emotion
and i have a feeling he is gonna hurt kiushi again for  abhay

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Chapter 19

Lets see what arnav is gonna do now...
awesome update

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heyyy gopi ! thanksss a  lottt yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was awesome...loved it! loved it! loved it  so so muchhh...
superbbb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!jsttt wowww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u r a  v v v v good writer,,,,,,,u write sooo well...m really impressed wth ur writing ...too good...this is wht i was expecting from you...:DHeart  ...tk cr..

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