FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2 - Page 71

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb part
Even after so many years khushi cannot resists her arnavji.
Waiting to see arnav's reaction on seeing abhay
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow that was a very intense update.

So finally Arnav knows about the baby.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: gopijimodi

 
Rasa23,
 
I edited my post to clarify that he closed the door after re-entering the house.
If you had that doubt, I am sure others also had that doubt.
Hence, I corrected that last line.
Thank you for asking for clarifications.
 
Also, thank you for your honest opinion about the update.
What part you did not like Rasa23. let me know.
Well, I gave it my best I think (with my limited time and limited creativity.)
Sorry to dissappoint you.
Thanks once again for honesty. Hope you will stay with the story and give it a try.
 
Regards.

thank you very much for ur reply..and m glad that u took my opinion wholeheartedly.. okk now let me tell u ... jst now again i read the update..nd i must say u wrote it beautifully..actually i was expectng the story in another way..but u showed that  how arnav got attracted to khushi nd also khushi got emotional nd lost control for sm minutes.. but soon the reality hit her... actually u updated it ysterday..that tym if i m nt wrong it was 2 am :p nd i was feeling sleepy but as i got ur pm i couldnt control myself nd started reading it..so i think  that can be a reason i didnt like it much at that tym...but jst now i read it again ..must say u wrote it beautifully..congrats...nd m waiting for the next part..jst try to make it MIND BLOWING :D  nd ofcourse i wont stop reading ur story because i jst love it :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Posted: 10 years ago
good going...great update...again another cliff hanger.. guess u r master in that... pls update soon. waiting for the next part.  Edited by harshdb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing story...waiting for next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally he heard baby's crying voice...
Eagerly waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
arnav heard baby's cry...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update..:) yes arnav heard baby .. Hope to see his love fr his baby on next update..:) thnk u..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Abhay sounds so cute!
Really love this Khushi- It's title lured me in and now I'm addicted!
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!
Your way of writing is just awsome! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
GRT UPDATE... Khushi has feelings fr hm... Plz gv d nxt update