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FF Arnav and Khushi:Thread 1 My lost family --chapter 21 in Thread 2 - Page 55

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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
but very unfair

you left us hanging like this????

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luckyarshi143 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved it...
I'm a big fan of ua ff n wud b waiting daily fr d update frm u...
Super excited fr d next...
Eagerly waiting fr d story to unfold further...
Thnx fr d pm...
Plz plz do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the lovely update.  so they r meeting formally... can't wait to read more.  story is progressing well. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear...
Please continue this story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really really nice n emotional update.

Well Arnav cannot undo the things he had done to Khushi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
so they meet again
and well he is stuck with doubts aint he
what id she is married
or has moved on etc etc
waise he forgot the main thing
her being pregnant and their baby
how come he dont remember that bit 
or in the excitement of meeting khushi that slipped his mind
well duh she is avoiding you
after what you did you didnt think she would come to you just like that did ya mate
well then her behaviour must have cleared your misconception
she is their daughter
they love like one since they dont have any kids themselves
and after guptas threw her out they gave her home and love that she needed
they were with her when she needed support during her pregnancy and looking after abhay
ahhh she couldnt escape and cant escape him now
hmmm this just got even more intriguing
how will he get throught to her now
cheers for pm and love this story
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Posted: 10 years ago
This content was originally posted by: bs1224

loved it
thanks for pm
hey dont say such 😭...im commenting regularly ...yes sometimes it just loved it and amazing. ..but still I do comment ...πŸ˜†
you can't leave it in a middle 😑...please .😳..and that too at this point ...
I do understand your point I can only tell you to just unbuddy those who dont comment ...I know its too painful when you write and then pm hundreds of friends. ..and still you get such a low response ...

you can give us your expectations like some writers do ...

like update only after 30+likes and 3 pages comments etc...
personally I dont appreciate it much but yes the readers get an appropriate idea of what the writers are expecting

if you do decide to discontinue it we guys are with you ...but I would tell you to continue. ...write it for your own self 😳

and just believe me Im loving it from the core...im just addicated to it ...
the story is proceeding and so is my interest...

 
SO IF POSSIBLE DO CONTINUE

 
 
 
Hi bs1224,
 
Thank you for reading and commenting regularly.
 
coming to the point of statistics of number of likes or number of pages, I dont want to put that kind of demands. I really dont want to get there.
Actually after reading some of your responses, I feel guilty for even talking about discontinuing the story. That was probably too bad a deal that I striked. I shouldnt have. But I already did it.
 
Coming to the matter of who does comment and who does not, and whom to PM, I come back tired from a long day of work, and then I put my house work on stall and type up part of the story and post it( well sometimes I do both parallelly). Beyond that, I did not want to check who is posting from my PM list or not. Too much hassle. Some of the readers, I immediately recognize from their posts, comments or their stories. Some I dont. then I go and check if they commented this time or if they ever commented at all. feels tiresome. so I dont want to keep track of that.
 
I read and comment on one of the author's work. That author has not posted update for 2 months now. She opened a thread with probably an intention to post an update, she never did, the thread closed as it was filled with comments and then she opened another one. Not sure if she is going to post any update there. That looks like her first FF as well.
So  dont know what the difference is from there to here. So I am losing confidence in my work. (agreed there will be a difference in story line, narration , maybe quality as well. Hard for me to accept, but maybe true.)
 
Yet, I understand NOW that i should not have thrown the "discontinuation" in the works after I read some of your comments. You are the people who comment and make me want to post and update.
It was not fair to readers who comment regularly.
 
How much ever I am drawn to post, I will wait this time.
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
This content was originally posted by: gopijimodi

 
 
Hi Gauri29,
Thanks for asking this question.
Yes, Khushi's parents knew that she is innocent. Arnav revealed it to them in his flashback update.
 
I did think about it during Arnav's flashback to add her parent's response. But stalled it for later.
 
Thanks for reading, commenting, questioning.
Regards.


okkkπŸ˜›

update soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow! Wonderful!so interestng.pls pls pls dnt stop writng.waitng for the nxt part.nd thnx for the lngg update. Baas thoda typing mstks zada tha.but never mnd .jst loved it. πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
finally arhi met
waiting for their talks
btw how old is abhay
continue soon