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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

😳😳Oh!!how much i love a story with a happy ending😃😳😳Finally fighting all the odds they are together😃
Maine kuch nai kiya😆

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sunshine_94

@sunshine_94

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

super,,,.,.

u seem to write so beautifuly tht i was glued to my comp...

without a wink i read this,.,.,.

n yeah the most likd part was sakshi tryin her best to be shy,.,.,.

p.s thanks for pm

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nilaksh

@nilaksh

Newbie

Posted: 10 years ago

wow vidzi muuuaaahhh luved ur BDM btw pad ke mera dil bechain hogaya hhehehehehe lolz the way u cropped up story on arjun's childhood was like show me bhi kuch aisa hi batane waale hai u made sure all the flashbacks which gave us hint of arjun's past were used the way u nailed the reasons behind everyones behaviour be it rathod arjun or sakshi it was superp
the reaction wich arjun gave on everything was lol hahaha😆
u know wat wen i read ur stories im so glued to the comp screen that at times i forget wat im doing n end up droping food while eating lolz😆 but for such beautiful stories n writer it doesnt matter to me ok bas yaar mujhe words nai mil rahe hai isliye yahi rok rahi hu 😆

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Maya

@Harshamara

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome updt.
Sorry 4 late cmmnt.
Thnks 4 pm

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Well, well, Vidzi, part two of the epilogue was unexpected but fantastic.

Thank you for this bonus bonanza update.

Very well written part, loved the way you made them so comfortable with each other without altercating their personality to much.

Once again a wonderful ending to a wonderful story,

Will miss this Arakshi.

P.S. Sorry for the late comment. Thanks for the PM.

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 10 years ago

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priyanka

@priyu03

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Awosme update

this is not fair di... aapka devil hamesha galat time pai kyu jaag jata hai 😉

waiting for next part

loved the update

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diw9

@diw9

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

a perfect end to this story.

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️...

I only had the epilogues to check up on this time... I'm actually in a revision lecture being bored to death so was on AF reading a lot of updates😃😃... Tahi di's update made up ROFL, avantika di's made me choke my cry & yours made me hot under the collar☺️.☺️. So basically i have been looking like an idiot with a lot of mood swings😉🤣...

Anyways... love love love love love the epilogues!! hai... what a cute couple they make... but part 2 of the epilogue actually killed me😆😆... ☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️.☺️. This is actually me right now... Thank You for a lovely SS! It was just beautiful! Went from sooo emotional and intense to romantic & passionate😳😳... Thanks once again👏.👏.👏...

Maybe I'll be able to catch up on ZEP as well.. Maybe.. fingers crossed😃

PS: How you come up with such different different ideas?! I still think you need to write a book like now!😃😃

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

just finished reading all the update

honestly i dnt know if ive told u this before but if i havnt ill tell u know... i LOVE UR WRITING!

All the updates were very well written and I loved how u ended this on a very happy ending.

Than u so much for writing such great stuff

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sakshiarjun

@sakshiarjun

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

No words to compliment you...Awesome huh...👏

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