Jodha Akbar SS:The Undying Love Story Ch 2 Section B Updt 9\1\14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Prologue
One Glimpse of Jodha, and he knew she was meant for him, only for him.She belonged to him and no one else, Not even that Suryabhan, whom he defeated.
 
 
And Jalal gets what he wants.
 
 
"Shehen-Shah Ji"a meek voice of some daasi entered his thoughts.
 
He turned to look, what was so important that she had the courage to enter when he had ordered no one to do so.
 
"Ji..wo Maharani Ruquiya Ji ne aapke liye yeh..yeh Patr bheja hai"she spoke with fear in her voice, she feared, that one mistake and Shehen-Shah Slamat's Shamsheel at her neck, just one second before her neck slits.
After handling the Letter, she quickly gets out fo the room, still trembling with fear.
 
 
But notices something, something very new in the Shehen-Shah. Something she couldn't put a finger on.
 
 
Maybe Ruquiya Begum will be able to...
Same Day in Amer:
"Aap aisa nahin kar sakte hain" Meinavati was shivering with fear
 
"Ham bhi asia nahi karna chahte par majboori hai, Hamari sena Jalal ka muqabla nahi kar sakti, usne Raja Surybhan ko bhi parajit kar diya hai" Raja Bhar-maal said with stress and sadness evident on his Royal face
"Par Jodha, jara sochiye Jodha ka kya hoga?"
 
"Jodha hamari bhi beti hai, Meinavati hame bhi unki chinta hai, Par hum unke ke liye saare Amer ko toh saza nahi de sakte"
 
"Chinta mat kijiye Bapu sa"Jodha interuppted the conversation
 
"Jodha, aap yahan? Apko apne kaksh me hona chahiya tha
 
"Bapu sa! Ham Jalal ka prastav sweekar karte hain, Amer ki Bhalayi ke liye ham uss Jallad se vivah karne ko tyaar hain"Jodha said with a determination in her voice
 
"Jodha par.."Meinavati could not digest the fact
 
"Par-war kuch nahi maa sa, hamne faisla kar liya hai, and she was gone before anyone clould respond to the Sky-crashing decision
 
For a moment Raja Bhaar-mal wished what Jodha wished earlier.
He wished that Jodha wasn't a Royal princess, then she woudn't have to sacrifice for the sake of the state
 
Meinavati dropped to the ground, with tears glistening in her eyes, just about to fall.
 
 
"Maharani banegi wo"
 
"Itihaas ka Naksha badal degi wo"
 
"Pyaar ki ek Anokhi kahaani lighegi wo"
 
 
"Bikkhre huye baal, Mitti ka sindoor. Aaj tu peheli baar uaka naam sunegi Jiske Ghar ka deepak Jodha Jalayegi"
 
"Teri Jodhaa Mughlo ke ghar jaayegi"
 
"Yahi honi hai, aur yahi ho kar rahega"
 
 
Shaguni Bai's words kept ringing in Meinavati's ears,She thought she could change the fate by marrying Jodha to Raja Suryabhan..
 
Jodha is going to get married to Jalal.
 
Shaguni bai's predication is coming true!
 
 
How was it? This isn't related to related to real history!Leave you Reviews. No PMs for this. Do you wish me to continue?
 
 
Edited by ApurvaLovesARVI - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome yaar!
Very beautifully written & plzzz do continue!
Simetimes i feel that jalal matches RK's character,
Though i luv RK more!actually,d most!
Anyways,gud to c u in dis forum as well
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb! Very nice concept dear. Please update soon. And add me in ur pm list if u can.
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Posted: 10 years ago
a yes please!

:D

Arz hai:


Undercurrents of passion.

Undercurrents of anger.

Undercurrents of love.

Unbelievable amounts of intrigue.


I believe, ladies and gentleman, we have a great FF in the making. 👏 

Best wishes for the FF,

Shalu Jaan. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
update soon seems really interesting and plz in bigger fonts.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plz cont. Soon

Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Starting 👏 ⭐️ 👏


Edited by yoga23priya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it and was awesome! Plz pm me when u update!