OS- Aapko derr ho gayi Arnavji (Last Part on pg3)

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Posted: 10 years ago

I am totally new to this WRITING and WRITER
thing. I had many of times to write something but nothing exactly comes up.
Well I am new to IF but IF is not new to me. I had read Arshi FFs there as a
non member but now as you all can see I joined it recently. I wrote this OS
just yesterday. It starts from when everybody especially Khushi was waiting for
her Arnav ji at the Altar. Dear Friends please do at least click LIKE only if
you liked it. It is my first experience so I think at least I can expect this. 😳Do recommend to your buddies too if you loved it. 👏Thanks for reading my chatter
patter. Ignore typos plzzz😉⭐️⭐️


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            Everybody was in a daze. Everything just
happened too fast. Revelation of horrible past, taunts of Dadi, Anjali's cries
and Garima's breakdown. Nobody knows whom to actually believe. They want to
trust each other but when past comes again in your life it always destroys the
moment left sorrowful atmosphere behind. In all these commotions two were those
who were suffering the most, Arnav and Khushi.


           
Arnav was puzzled. He really didn't want to believe his dadi. Because
where his dadi was pointing in that direction his Khushi was also standing. His
dadi was standing for his mamma who he loved the most. He was literally struck
between his past and future. He was in big dilemma. He was bearing so much
pain. The lady who had ruined his mother's life was from past few months before
his own eyes and he never got to know. The day on which he was going to marry
his Khushi his lady love his heartbeat to whom he just last night confessed
that he can't live without her. What will he do now? At another place was
Khushi. She totally didn't know what to do next. She loves Arnav like hell and now
totally dependent on him. She trusted him that he would come. But he had blamed
her before too for ruining his Di's life. What if he didn't come? What if she
would be just left alone waiting at the altar? She also had the same feelings.
She also can't live without him not after what they had shared. Their pain,
sorrow, smiles, laughter, teasing, telepathies were now part of the memories.
She just can't think life without him. She can't see that eyes which hold love
for her will may hold pain, agony. Their destiny plays its game. Destiny always
plays a big role in everybody's life so as in Arnav and Khushi's life. "Destiny
comes upon you unawares and looks at you with frightening eyes, grips you by
the throat and throws you to the ground, trampling upon you with feet of iron,
and then departs laughing. But soon destiny returns, seeking your forgiveness,
raises you up with fingers of silken touch and sings to you a song of hope".


[Credit: Spirits of rebellious by Kahil Gibran]


       When Nani was crying, Shyam was consoling
Anjali, Aakash was handling his Ma and Dadi, Payal and Buaji was handling
Garima, NK was continuously calling his Nanav, Khushi was just waiting,
desperately waiting for her Arnav ji. Nobody knows when she gotta stand on her
own feet from altar towards exit. She was just exiting when her Amma called
her.


Garima: Khushi kahan jaa rahi hai meri bachi


Khushi: amma


Khushi turned back to go for her amma whom Payal
and Buaji were handling. She felt a tug on her veil. When she turned to see reason,
she sees that her Arnav ji was standing holding corner of her veil like
stopping her. She was hell shocked coz may be she had somewhere left the hope
that he will come. Nothing comes up from her mouth besides one word.


Khushi (blinkingly) ' Arnavji...


Everyone got elated by seeing Arnav but many
questions also formed in their mind. The main was that where was he the whole
of time?


NK- Nanav where were you?


Anjali- aap dheek toh hain chotte? Kahan the aap
chotte?


But Arnav had his eyes only on Khushi. There
Garima comes forward was just started to say something, when he cut off
accidently.


Garima- Arnav bet'


Arnav- Khushi! Khushi mein-


His line also didn't completed when Khushi broke
her silence at that time.


Khushi- Aapko derr ho gayi Arnavji.


That was not a question but more a statement. We
all know destiny sometimes play cruel too. This time it played dirty. History
was ready to repeat itself.


She repeated.


Khushi- Aapko derr ho gayi Arnavji. Aapne derr
kyun ki Arnavji?!!


Arnav got in a daze. He did not know why his
Khushi was talking like this?


Arnav- I am here Khushi. Mein aa gaya. I am
sorry Khushi mujhe derr hogayi. But I came only for you Khushi just you.


Arnav came forward to hold Khushi. He holds her
face in his palm. He was in need to feel her close to him.


Khushi- Par aapko derr hogayi Anavji.


Buaji- Ae sanka devi par Arnav babua toh tumhare
liye hi aye hain naa. Chalo wakt kahe barbad karein Nandkishore.


Everybody nodded because if Arnav wants to
accept her then everything is fine.


Payal- Haan Khushi chalo ad tumhein aur Arnavji
ko derr nai karni chahiye.


Arnav again wanted to say something but Khushi
again repeated same while crying bitterly. Payal and Arnav got hold of her when
she sat on ground devastated.


Khushi- Aapne derr kyun ki Arnavji? Aapko esa
nahi karna chahiye tha'


Everybody was puzzled and got tensed at Khushi's
state because Arnav was already here now what? She started crying bitterly
while sitting on ground. She had closed her eyes then she got some flashbacks.


'Washroom'


'Phenyl bottle'


'Hamein maaf kardijiye Devi Maiya'


Arnav tried to console her but she didn't stop.
Coz she had realized that she had did the biggest mistake.


Nani spoke then.


Nani- Khushi bitiya uthiye. Muharat abhi bhi hai
bitiya.


Everybody nodded. Aapki aur chotte ki shadi'


Khushi realized that
may be she did that crime nothing can't gat changed now. But she can marry her
Arnavji. She will be married when she will left this world, her family, her
Arnavji. She felt happy at that instance. But energy was also draining out of
her. She get stand by getting hold of payal's arm and her Arnavji's support.
That was all needed to her.
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I will post its next part in few days😛I am feeling very happy while posting this.
Thanks for reading. Please scroll down for next Part
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice concept
awesome start
loved it
hope khushi is fine..
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohmygosh! What had khushi done?? :O
No,no! It can't be true...! :(
Update soon!!!
Pleaseee...! What will happen next? Looking forward.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow! Can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Khushi is okay!
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Posted: 10 years ago

2nd Part

Khushi hugged Arnav tight so he did. She wants to feel the moment so as he. Arnav forgives Garima. He did know that fault is of only his Dad who betrayed not only his mother but Garima too. Arnav wanted to left behind his past but he didn't know that this if his past came then will left more pain more sorrow than before.

              Arnav and Khushi were sitting at altar. All the rituals were going on for sacred bond. Khushi was feeling too much weak but she tried to remain fine. She was in guilt from inside but now she also can't help it. And now she just wanted to feel the moment. Priest told them to stand for the vows. Khushi felt weak but Arnav hold her. He looked into her eyes and tried to assure her that everything is fine and he is here with her but God knows. Khushi gains energy from Arnav's smile which appeared on his face only for her. After completing all the rituals like 7vows, manglasutra and sindoor, she felt completed. Arnav was elated coz now Khushi just belongs to him. No one means no one can separate them now. Priest declared them married.

Priest- Ab aap dono pati patni jaise pavita bhadhan mein bhandh chukein hain. Yeh Agni aur aapke sage sambhandhi is rishte ke shakshi hain.

Here priest said the words Khushi wanted to hear, she felt her energy absorbed. She was too much happy and fainted there. Everybody was happy and hugging each other. But now they got tensed by seeing unconscious Khushi. Arnav was standing there holding her and trying to wake her up.

Payal- she is too much cold. (While checking her wrists)

Arnav- Khushi! Khushi open your eyes. Khushi!

NK gave him glass of water. Arnav sprinkled water on her face. Khushi opened her eyes little bit. She knows that she didn't have too much time.

Arnav- Khushi Are you fine Khushi? What happened? Here take water.

Arnav tried to make her drink water but she refused.

Khushi- Aapko derr ho gayi thi Arnavji par ab sab dheek hai. Hum Khushi hai. (Arnav smiles so everybody) Humein maaf kar dijiye Arnavji.

Aranv- No No Khushi! Ssh! Ssh! Everything is fine Khushi. I just know that kisis bhi cheez ka matlab nai Khushi sirf Tum!!

Arnav smiled and carried Khushi. He thought that Khushi was stressed and weak. But in a minute, Khushi's hands left Arnav's collar and her head got rolled in his arms. Everybody got terrified that something is really fishy with Khushi. She again fainted.

Checking her wrists fast. Aakash- Bhai Khushi ki pulse...!

Arnav's breathe got hitched at this. He gulped strongly. He got a fast flashback of unconscious Khushi at cliff but he brushed it off.

Arnav- Doctor! Lets go to Doctor. She is fine Aakash. Khushi bilkul dheek hai kuch bhi nayi huya. Kuch nahi! Like he was reassuring himself time to time.

              Khushi was in emergency two senior doctors and one junior doctor were attending her. Case was serious. The junior doctor came out and exclaimed before anybody question him.

Doc- Patient had swallowed a high amount of phenyl. We are trying to take it out through our medical procedure but it had spread too fast in her body. Means her condition is very serious.  Mujhe puchna tha k kya patient na suicide kiya hai? ( Everybody's eyes popped out to this) Agar kiya hai then it is a police case. Aapko police ko bta dena chahiye!

If doctor had said some other thing they all should had pounded on him for futher questions but SUICIDE. Suddenly Payal literally screamed.

Payal- Aap dheek toh hain, Khushi aur suicide!! Aisa ho hi nahi sakta. Meri Khushi aisa kabhi nahi karegi. Vo itni kamzorr hai hi nahi!

Doc- But yehi sach hai and I just wanted to let you all know.

Arnav was in a daze. This day happened to be his happiest day of life but happiness. His Khushi just can't suicide because he had told her about his mother's suicide. He was in so much pain then. And his Khushi can't even think of giving him any type of pain. When doc's hand was on handle of OP door, Arnav stopped him. Doctor was somewhat scared to see a furious Arnav. But Arnav was in rage.

He punched doctor. Aakask and NK stopped him somehow when he was screaming.

Arnav- Don't you dare talk bl**dy shit about Khushi. Voh suicide kar hi nahi sakti. Khushi can't even think of giving me any pain. You heard me. Tumhara kaam use bachana hai so vo karo.

Doc- Whatever I said is truth Mr. Raizada. Your wife did try suicide.

He is a doctor. They never lie to patient's family. Being a doctor, he understood that this man seriously needs to know truth. After doctor left, Arnav was devastated. He can't believe that his Khushi will do something like this. He knelt down besides OP door. Anajli can't see her chotte like this.

Anjali(crying)- Chotte uthiye... uthiye chotte sab  sab the..ek ho jayega. Khushiji ko kuch nahi hoga.

Arnav's head shot up in direction of Anjali. He hugged her legs while silently crying.

Arnav- Di vo dheek ho jayegi naa. Plzz Di say something. Do something Di. Di kahiye naa, aap kahiye Khushi ne suicide nahi kiya naa. Mene use bataya tha ke mein uske bina nahi reh sakta, phir vo esa kar hi nahi sakti Di.

Everybody was in pain by seeing Arnav's pain. They had never seen Arnav so devastated, in so much pain and helpless.

Arnav- Mein uske bina nahi jee paunga Di. I... I ca can't breathe Di.

Anjali was herself crying bitterly while seeing his chotte like this. His chotte hadn't even cried at his mother's death who he loved the most.

Anjali- Chotte!  Cho...

Nani- Kuch nahi ho sakta ab! (Her next shattered Arnav's soul and world) kuch ho hi nahi sakta hai kyunki itihaas apne aap ko dohra raha hai. Pichli baar hamari bititya chor kar chali gayi thi. Ek baar phir uhi itihaas lot kar aaya hai aur phir hamri bitiya ko le jayega.

Arnav was breaking with her every word. Everybody's eyes popped out by hearing those words from Nani's mouth which no one can even think. Nani was not crying like her tears had vanished. He just can't see all this so he screamed and left.

Arnav- Nooo How can you say this Nani? Aapne esa socha bhi kaise. Vo Khushi hai Nani Mumma nahi. (slowing down) mum.. mumma selfish thi but Khushi nahi hai. Khushi is not selfish.

He backed down his steps and left from there. They all started crying bitterly then. Anjali wanted to left after Arnav but Aakash stopped her and himself left for his Bhai.

         Aakash found Arnav sitting outside hospital on a bench. He was silently crying. Aakash didn't know how to console him because his bhai was always who gave everyone strength, upon whom everyone depends always.

Aakash- Bhai!  Please sambhaliye Bhai! Aap ese kaise umeed choe sakte hain. Aap aap bhool gaye Bhai aap Arnav Singh Raizada hain.

Arnav- Haan Aakash mein Arnav Singh Raizada hoon par pehle Arnav bhi hoon. That Arnav who was unable to save his Mumma. Voh Arnav jiski Di ke saath itne kuch huyaa aur vo dekhta hi reh gaya. Di ka.. di ka baby chala gaya.  I don't have strength anymore Aakash. I will not be able to see if...

He chocked upon his own words. He can't utter those words for his Khushi.

Arnav- This time may be Nani was right Aakash.

Hearing these words Aakash's head shot up towards Arnav. He can't believe his Bhai is talking like this and believing his Nani is so far.

Arnav- Kyunki Khushi nahi toh Arnav bhi nahi. (Tears were not stopping from Arnav's eyes) Ek baar phir do jaanein jayengi!! Maybe maybe history was repeating itself really.

Nothing came out from Aakash's mouth. He was totally silent so was Arnav. Arnav was in his own memories like Khushi teasing him, Khushi winking at him, Khushi laughing with him. All memories were rewinding in front of his eyes.

Arnav- Shayad mujhe sach mein derr ho gayi thi Aakash.  Bahut derr... 

Thanks for reading. 😊

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Edited by starsarun - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
great update
feel bad for arnav..
please save khushi..
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I Hope Khushi Is Okay :( 
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Posted: 10 years ago
simply amazing
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just read the 2nd part. Really good - I really hope Khushi is okay though. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it 
Feeling terrible to see arnav in a shattered form...
I hope doctors save khushi...
I know this is an os but please pretty please DO CONTINUE ...
Do pm me if you continue
UPDATE as soon as possible 
Edited by bs1224 - 10 years ago