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PART 27

In the office,

Ram is discussing about some legal formalities to lawyer. Lawyer told him that it will take one month to fulfill all formalities.

Actually the plan is:-

Ram is planning to transfer one of the industries in the name of Priya. He wanted to gift her on her birthday which will due in 2 months. He wanted to do everything in secret so that she will not know about this. Except Ram only Vikram is known about his surprise. Ram is also planning to renovate his cabin and extend it so that Priya can also work with him in the same cabin.

 

On the other side Priya is worried for her father. She saw tension in his face. She asked many times to Ram but every time he changed the topics.

 

It's been one month,

All the formalities are done in regard to transfer. Only the official announcement is left which Ram decided to announce on her birthday.

 

Ram and Priya's personal life is also going in a strong way. They made love almost every day. She skips her medicines.  Every day she lied to Ram that she is taking her medicine timely.

 

It's been 6 month after their marriage,

Day before her birthday,

In fine morning,

Priya is feeling unwell. Her head is paining and feeling to use the bathroom. She vomits and feeling drowsy. Ram helped her and carries her in the bedroom.

 

Ram:- R u ok?????. Mein abhi doctor ko phone kar deta hoon.

Priya:- (immediately) nahi'.mein teek hoon. woh kal raat ko kuch jyada kaa liya tha issliye'..mein abhi teek hoon.

Ram:- teek hai'.ek kaam karo tum aaj ghar par aaram karo, office mein aane ki koi zaroorat nahi. Mein Neha ko phone kar deta hoon woh tumhare paas rahegi aur kuch hua toh tumhe doctor ke paas bhi lekar jaayegi.

Priya:- please Ram mein tee hoon, Neha ko pareshan mat karo.

Ram:- teek hai'mein jaakar taiyaar ho jata hoon. aaj ek jarori meeting hai.

 

Ram left for freshen up. Priya is quite sure about her morning sickness. She even skips her periods. She wanted to confirm it.

 

Ram taiyaar hokar aa jata hai. He sits beside Priya "kuch hua toh phone kar dena".

Priya:- ji'

 

Ram kisses her on her cheeks and left for the office.

 

Priya checks it at home and it shows positive. Now, she is sure that she is pregnant. But still she wanted to confirm it one more time from doctor. She booked an appointment and left to meet a doctor.

Ram in between called her many times in order to know how she is doing.

 

Priya in hospital,

Doctor called her inside. Carry test and confirm it about pregnancy. Priya happiness is no bound. She touched her stomach and cries for some time. Tears are flowing from her eyes. She is happy as well as worried for Ram. She doesn't know how Ram will react. She decided first she will speak to Ram. She headed to office.

 

In the car she thinks "Ram pehli baar meine aapke faisle ke upar jaakar kuch kiya hai. lekin mein janti hoon aap muje samjenge aur muje poora vishwas hai ki yeh bachha hamare zindagi mein aur khushiyaan lekar aayega. Ram aapne muje mera birthday gift pehle se hi de diya. Aur isse bada gift mere zindagi mein aur kuch nahi ho sakta. I love you Ram. I love you."

 

Priya reached office and headed directly to the Ram's cabin. Receptionist told her Ram in meeting and he is in conference hall. Priya is waiting in the cabin. She is looking for some file when her eyes fall on one file. It was the same file which she saw in her father's hand. She keeps her report on the table, and takes the file. She opens the file but at that moment Ram enters into the cabin.

 

Ram saw Priya is holding her father's file. He snatched the file from her hands and shouts at her and told her "don't touch anything without his permission". She feels very bad as Ram never talk like this before. After marriage its nothing there in between yours mine.

 

Ram:- Priya tum yahan. Tumhe meine bola tha na ki aaram karo. Abb kaisa lag raha hai

Priya:- mein teek hoon. actually mein doctor se milne gayi thi.

Ram:- doctor??? Kya hua????kya kaha doctor ne????

Priya(worriedly and slowly):- Ram'.I am preg'pregnant

Ram:- kya????zara zor se bolo tum kya????

Priya:- Ram I am Pregnant.!!!!!!

 

Ram is numbed. He is standing there for some time. He doesn't know what to say.

Priya again called Ram and said " Ramm' aap yahi soch rahe hai na'..

Ram cuts her in between'.no no'sorry he holds her from her shoulder and made her to sit on the sofa. He kneels down and facing to Priya.

 

Ram:- Priya''koi baat nahi eisa hota hai'...kabhi kabhi. Precaution lene ke baat bhi Pregnant hone ke chances hai'..

Priya:- Ram''.meine precaution nahi li thi.

 

Ram in shock.

Ram:- kya?????tumne precaution nahi li thi.!!!!!!lekin kyun Priya?????

Priya:- meine pichle do mahine se tablets leni bandh kar di thi.

Ram(shouting):- but why?????

Priya:-shouting) because I wanted to be pregnant. mein maa banna chahti hoon. I want this child.

 

Ram:- (controlling himself) priya'. Humne pehle hi decide'.

Priya cuts him in between

Priya:- humne nahi Ram'aapne'.aap chahte the ki bachha do saal ke baad ho. Aapne kabhi mujse poocha hi nahi ki mein kya chahti hoon.

Ram:- so what's wrong in that Priya. Do saal koi bahut badi baat nahi.

Priya:- mere liye hai Ram. Mein wait nahi kar sakti.

 

Priya holding him (making him to understand):- Ram aapko eisa kyun lagta hai hum yeh zimeedaari nahi le paayege. Ram'.yeh bachha hamari pyar ki nishani hai. yeh bachha hamari zindagi ko khushiyoon se bhar dega. Ram'.please meri baat ko samjo'..

 

Ram:- Priya'abhi agar tum muje kuch bhi samjaaogi muje nahi samaj aayega. Achha tumne yeh baat kisi ko batayi??????

Priya:- nahi'.mein yeh khabar samse pehle aapko hi batana chahti thi.

Ram:- Fine'. Jab tak mein na kahu tum yeh baat kisi ko bhi nahi bataoongi. Apni maa ko bhi nahi

Priya:- lekin Ram!!!!!

Ram:- Priya mein jaisa kehta hoon tum waisa hi karo''.abhi muje ek aur meeting ke liye jana hai. tum abhi ghar jao'.

 

Priya left without saying anything, but she is sad. Ram saw she forget to take the report. He opens the report, read and then scratch the report.

 

Scene 80

Ram wishes Priya

Priya is waiting for Ram at home. She is impatient; she doesn't know what Ram has decided. But that day Ram came very late from office.

 

Priya:- aaj aap badi der kar di aane mein'.aap jakar change kar lijiye mein aapke liye abhi khana garam karwati hoon.

Ram:- tumne khana kaya????

Priya:- nahi

Ram:- Priya tum khana kaa lo muje bhook nahi hai'.aur ek aur baat mere liye itni der wait karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Tum khana kaa liya karo.

 

She said nothing but she is waiting for an answer. Ram said nothing and goes back to his room.

After some time Priya came to her room and found Ram is not there. She looks into his study and found Ram is taking nap there. She came back to her room and sleeps.

 

It's 12 o clock ,

Ram came back to his room holding a plate in his hand. He kept food on the table. He wakes up Priya and say happy birthday Priya and kisses on her forehead and hugs her.

 

Priya:- aapko yaad tha!!!!

Ram:-  mein kuch nahi bhoolta.

Priya:- thank u

Ram:- Priya' mein janta hoon ki tumne khana nahi kaya. Pehle tum khana kaa lo'

Priya:- aapne bhi toh'

Ram:- pehle tum kaao, muje bhi kila do

 

Priya takes her food also feeds Ram.

Ram:- priya kal meine Dr. se appointment li hai. hame kal 10 baje tak clinic pahuchna hai.

Priya:- Dr'.lekin kyun Ram'mein dr. ko dikka chuki hoon aur Dr. ne kaha ki sab teek hai.

Ram:- yeh uske liye nahi hai'tum kal ready ho jana. Uske baad ghar mein birthday function ki taiyaari bhi toh karni hai.

Priya:- Ram'muje function mein koi interest nahi hai. mein chahti hoon ki kal hum dono kahi bahar spend kare.

Ram:- priya'shaadi ke baat yeh tumhari pehli salgirah hai iss ghar mein, toh party toh zaroor hogi'..abhi tum aaram karo..kal ki baate kal dekhenge'hum ghumne phir kabhi jaate hai

 

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Scene 81

Ram takes Priya to hospital

Next morning Ram and Priya getting ready for the clinic. They reached dr's clinic. Dr. called them inside.

Dr:- Yes, Mr.Kapoor'come inside'sit'.aapne kal phone kiya tha''so u r Priya'.right!!!!

Priya:- yes, doctor

Dr.:- Priyaaa'..Mr.Kapoor ne kal muje bataya tha '..ki abhi aap dono ne  bachha ke liye plan nahi kiya hai'

 

Priya is shocked. She didn't realize Ram taken her to hospital to abort this child'''.

 

Dr. continue'

As an doctor mein aap dono ko yahi salah doongi ki aap dono phir se ek baar apne iss decision ke baare mein sochiye.

Mere paas kahi couples aate hai unka bhi yahi kehna rehta hai ki woh abhi bachha nahi chahte aur yahi couples baad mein ek bachhe ke liye taraste hai. eisa zaroori nahi ki eisa har couples ke saat ho aur aapki ki toh yeh pehli Pregnancy hai'issliye'.

 

Priya is listening all this and had tears in her eyes. She gets up from her seat and move out of the cabin.

Ram also gets up and excuse himself and said " doctor woh Priya thodi emotional ho gayi hai'mein abhi uuse bhulakar lata hoon"

Ram called her from behind and Priya is going fast wiping her tears.

 

Ram stops her near the gate and clutches her hand.

Ram:- yeh sab kya hai Priya!!!! Tum eise kaise wahan se chali aayi'

Priya:- chodiye muje'..muje pata nahi tha Ram ki aap muje doctor ke paas abortion karane ke liye lekar aaye hai.  Ek baat bolu aapne muje birthday par bahut achha gift diya hai Ram'.

 

Without waiting for an answer she left from there. She reached KM; she goes to her room and started crying.

Neha called her in her mobile. She wipes her tears and attended the call.

Priya:- hi'Neha bolo

 

Neha:- kya bolu'tumhara mobile aaj subah se off kyun aa raha tha. kahan thi tum. Meine fatty ko bhi phone kiya tha..uska bhi switch off aa raha tha'..ghar par phone kiya toh pata chala ki tum aur fatty kahi bahar gaye ho.

                                                                           Lo mein bhi kya lekar baiti hoon'meine tumhe wish karne ke liye phone kiya tha. many many happy returns of the day. Tumhari KM yeh pehli saalgirah hai na. fatty toh kafi exite hoga na'.achha yeh batao fatty ne tumhe kya gift diya.

 

Priya:- thank u Neha. Fatty ne jo muje gift diya uuse mein kabhi nahi bhool sakti.

Neha:- how romantic???? Batao na kya gift diya tumhe fatty ne.

Priya:- chodo na Neha. Tum bhi

Neha:- o o oh..secret hai. achha mein nahi poochti. Achha hum sham ko aa rahe hai. byee'''.

Scene 82

Priya's birthday celebration

In the office,

Ram has given half day leave for all the staff. Ram has invited his staff, colleagues, friends group for the party.

 He is sitting in his cabin when vikram enters and asked"Ram tu idhar kya kar raha hai, tuje toh abhi ghar par hona chahiye. Ghar mein party rakki hai, wahan sab taiyaariyaan bhi karni hai na.

Ram:- wahan log bheje hai'..woh sab handle kar lenge'' Muje whan jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.

Vikram:- haan lekin Priya toh tumhara wait kar rahi hogi na

Ram:- vikram tuje jana hai toh tu ja. Mein yahan thodi der aur rehna chahta hoon.please'.

 

Vikram didn't understand why Ram he is behaving like this.

 

In the evening,

Guest is started coming. Priya is ready. She wears red color sari with an open hair on one side. She is looking extremely gorgeous. Everybody wishes Priya. Vikram is welcoming the guest.

 

Neha:- Priya fatty kahan hai'mehmaan aane shuru ho gaye hai'..

Priya:- pata nahi Neha tumhi phone karke pooch lo

 

Neha called Ram but it's switched off. All guests were present. Everybody is waiting for ram but, Ram is nowhere. Vikram is continuously calling him in his mobile.

 

It's been very late. Neha suggested cutting the cake, otherwise it's too late. Even guest are waiting for the long time. Priya denied said sorry to everybody and goes back to her room. Guests are leaving one by one from the party. Only Neha and Vikram and Priya's parents left in the house.

 

Neha told shipra to go back home if they get any information about Ram she called her. But at that moment, Ram enters into KM. He is drunken but, in his sense.  He called priya'

Ram:- Priyaaa'.Priyaaa'

Vikram(trying to hold him):- Ram' tu baith

Ram:- mein teek hoon. itna bhi nahi piya hoon. thodi der ho gayi''arre koi aaya nahi'aaj party hai'sab log kahan hai'..Priya kahan hain'.

Vikram:- Ram'sab aaye the'tumhara wait karte karte sab chale gaye'.

Ram:- sab chale gaye aur yeh cake nahi kata

Vikram:- priya tere bagair cake kaise kaat sakti hai..

Ram:- kyun???? Kyun nahi kaat sakti' usne kya mujse poochkar yeh sab kiya

Vikram:- priya ne kya kiya????

Ram:- Priya ne itna bada decision mujse bina pooche kiya, toh'

Vikram:- kya kiya Priya ne

Ram:- kuch nahi'.tum sab meri party mein aaye uske liye thank u' Maa 'Papa aapki beti ki party kharab karne ke liye maafi chahta hoon. Vikram tu apni biwi ko lekar jaa.

 

Ram goes from there. Shipra and Sudhir also left. Neha and Vikram also left from there.

 

Precap:- priya left the job, left KM and planning to leave the place.

 

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Sorry for the mistakes.

Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome updt sandy 😛
i loved it 😊
i read the updt in 1 go
ur an amazing writer
who writes so well
ram is right in his point of view
that he want to enjoy his life with priya
even priya is right
but situation is not right
hope mu clear btw them
and again things become normal
ye kya hogaya
precap is so scary
mila dho dear raya ko jaldi
thanks for pm
cont asap
Edited by .sangs123. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
nyc update but y Ram is behaving that way😕
waiting for next update eagerly to knoe reason
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Bhagwan Ramji took priya for abortion? so bad.
Why is he so adamant to not have kids at this stage. Dr advice was very well said yaar. People who get aborted for the first time will face the problem. Nicely portrayed.
Aap bhi Ekta se kam nahi , Poori apni priya ki Bday ko barbad kardiya.
Aisi koun si mazboori hai jo ramji aise react kar rahe hai...?
Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
The story is interesting and gripping.  For now Ram is not right towards Priya.  Lets see what reasons he has for his behaviour.  Eager to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nicely u written and a scary precap make dem enjoy their parent hood pls 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi 😊

For u 👏 👏 ⭐️
Very well expressed .. 👏
Some where both r rite... But both need to understand each others views...
Specially Ram...
Priya too shld hv handled it with patience..

Thanks for pm 😊
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superbb update sandi..very well written 👏
I agree ram doesnt want child right now but what about priya he didnt thought once before taking her to hospital for abortion even after what she said that she want this child..both of them should have talked atleast once on this issue..
Dr's advice u have incorporated is very true most of the couples do face these kind of problems.. 👏
What's the secret regarding sudhir ji?? 😕
Interesting precap...looking forward to how they gona handle this now..
Cont soon nd thanx for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
what a wonderful update.please update soon.why priya leaving KM ,like BALH u have also separation track.plsssdont separate them.why ram don't want child.