FIRST NIGHT OF NIKAH: ASYA FF.. pt7,pg24

FIRST NIGHT OF NIKAH..

ASAD WAS SITTING NERVOUSLY ON SOFA THINKING THAT HOW SHOULD HE SAY 3 MAGICAL WORDS TO ZOYA..
ZOYA ON THE OTHER HAND, SITTING NERVOUSLY, THINKING THAT THIS IS THE RELATION OF COMPROMISE FOR ASAD.. DILSHAD CUMS IN, PRAISES HER INNOCENCE N BEAUTY, KISSING HER FOREHEAD.. ZOYA FELT RELAXD NOW!!!

DILSHAAD TOLD ASAD TO GO IN AS ZOYA IS W8NG 4 HIM!!!
AS ASAD CUMS IN N CLOSES THE DOOR, ZOYA CLOSED HER EYES!! AS ASAD WENT NEAR HER, ZOYA JUMPED FROM BED N SAYS THAT SHE KNOWS THAT ASAD HAS AGREED TO THIS NIKAAH JUST BCUZ OF HIS AMMI..!!

ASAM GOES TO HER N IS ABOUT TO SAY SUMTHING!! ZOYA AGAIN JUMS ON BED,.. SHE SAYS THAT SHE KNOWS THAT SHE IS UNBEARABLE FOR HIM BUT...

ASAD AGAIN MOVE TOWARDS BED, ZOYA AGAIN JUMS FROM THERE, N SAYS THAT ALLAH MIYA WHATS WRONG WITH U MR. KHAN, AAPKO EK JAGAH SUKOON NHN HAI KIA..??? ZOYA SAYS THAT NOW ASAD WILL SHOUT AT HER, UNNECESSARILY!!! ITS BETTER TO DIE THAN THS SLAVERY LIFE!!!
ASAD HOLDS ZOYA TIGHTLY N SAYS THAT ATLEAST THNK TEN TYMZ!!!
ZOYA SAYS WHY IS HE AFFECTD SO MUCH????
ASAD SAYS THAT ANYTHNG RELATD TO HER AFFECTS HIM BCOZ...
ZOYA SAYS BCOZ WHAT MR. KHAN
ASAD SAYS THAT BCUZ HE LUVS HER!!! NT FROM NOW BT WHEN HE SAW HER FIRST TYM, SHE MADE A LIL PLACE IN HIS HEART.. N HAS INCREASED DAY BY DAY
TEARS ROLLED FROM ZOYA'S FACE..!!
ASAD SAYS NOT ANYMORE!!!!

ASAD STARTS TO TAKE HIS STEPS BACKWARD, N THIS SURPRISED ZOYA..!!
HE SPREADS HIS ARMS, ZOYA SMILES, HOLDING HER LEHNGA, RUNS TO HUG HIM..!!
THEY SHARED A LONG HUG, WHILE TAKING HER ARMS OUT OF ASAD'S NECK, HER BANGLES STUCKS IN HIS SHERWANI..

ASAD SMIRKS N SAYS THAT IS SHE GIVING ANY HINT TO HIM!!!
ZOYA SMILES N SAYS HE N UNDERSTANDS HER HINTS???? HUH!!!!!
AS SHE STARTS TO LEAVE HER PATH IS BLOCKD BY ASAD, HE STARTS CUMING TOWARDS ZOYA...
ZOYA GETS SERIOUS, WIDENING HER EYES.. SAYS THAT I I I WAS K K KIDDING..!!
ASAD SAYS BT HE'S SERIOUS..!!! ZOYA WHILE GOING BACK SLIPS N FALLS ON BED!! ALL THE ARRANGEMENTS MADE THERE FALLS ON ZOYA..

ASAD REMOVED ALL ROSES FROM HER FACE N CARESNG HER HAIRS..!!! KISSES HER ON FOREHEAD..
ZOYA SMILES N SAYS THAT SHE SHULD CHANGE NOW!!!
ASAD SMIRKS N SAYS THS IS THE 1ST N LAST TYM, HE IS LEAVING HER!!!
ZOYA SMILES N LEAVES!!!



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part 2: page 4
part 3, page 7..
part 4, page 11
part 5, page 15
part 6: page 20
part 7: page 24Edited by KaBhi-FAN - 10 years ago

Sweet and short...one suggestion for ur further works...Dont use caps while typing...use it only when required just like we normallly do while writing on a paper...small letters soothes the eyes and gives a good feel while reading...

Nice i like the end most !! but you should give us dialogues rather than to narrate for the real effect of the story 😊

i kno bt while typing it was on caps, thanx 4 ur advices guys😊Edited by KaBhi-FAN - 10 years ago

arre...rabi🤗...its sweet😉y u stopped there?continue...😉

Originally posted by: niharikapriya1

arre...rabi🤗...its sweet😉y u stopped there?continue...😉

nihu nyc to c u here..!!! wl cntinue soo!!!! 😉 🤗

Sweet one...Do continue it...

Originally posted by: pinkstars

Sweet one...Do continue it...

sure dear 😊

its really nice👏

Zoya's reaction was hilaruous😆

Asad's confession
(Y cant this person do nythin seedhe seedhe🤣)

In all had a nice tym reading it🤗

Only one thing if u cud write in small letters its better!😳
(Thats just an opinion😳)

Waiting for mre frm u😃




Luv Ani❤️ Edited by aniiee - 10 years ago