AsYa OS: Nightmare - Page 5

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

I simply LOVED this one!!! How I wish this was exactly what had happened in the show too!!! You are such an amazing writer dear!! Loved this story to bits!!!

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

waoo...yr kya baat hai...its really sweet...good one...i guess fire seq is on the way & might be zoya say all these o asad  in the same way u right...thnks 4 d awesome pm dear

pari

Originally posted by: Enchantress

I loved the scene when appi tells about zoya's past and asad's reaction towards it... I loved it more when he entered her room and asked for a sorry, because I din't wanted him to ask for a sorry on a coffee atleast this time coz this was really a big matter and an heart felt apology was needed , not that coffee apology is not heart felt but I was a quite bored with this routine sorry buisness. 

 But still their was something missing in that scene which you completed over here. Loved it , my dearie... Loved this OS.

You actually completed the entire scene.. 

Dee

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

oh God dear, why did u take so long to write dis, this is just just PERFECT. how I wish this wud have happened in QH too, at least ab soyi hui Zoya se to Asad iqrar kar hi sakta hai.

I loved it, plz don't take long to write next time.

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Having Zoya imagine Asad in a fire too was really something different and good. Loved how Asad felt bad when he realised Zoya was dreaming about him in the fire too.

Originally posted by: IIdewaaneII

That was Fantastic!!!
Finally read a great OS after a While!!
Amazing job! 👏