AsYa OS: Nightmare - Page 4

Oh wow this is sooo goood!! You write so well, Monica! I'm in awe!!!!'

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Oh wow this is sooo goood!! You write so well, Monica! I'm in awe!!!!'

It had this beautiful feel the whole time! Zoya scared of losing him, Asad's confession! Tooo beautiful!

-Faiza

Aww Faiza thanks!!! 😳 just a random idea i had of what wished had been done with that scene. Maybe not the confession, but at least him seeing her nightmare first hand :)

BTW when you updating 😆

superb👏👏👏heart touching OS❤️

I simply LOVED this one!!! How I wish this was exactly what had happened in the show too!!! You are such an amazing writer dear!! Loved this story to bits!!!

waoo...yr kya baat hai...its really sweet...good one...i guess fire seq is on the way & might be zoya say all these o asad  in the same way u right...thnks 4 d awesome pm dear

this is superb dear 🤗

tis is really awesome...

I loved the scene when appi tells about zoya's past and asad's reaction towards it... I loved it more when he entered her room and asked for a sorry, because I din't wanted him to ask for a sorry on a coffee atleast this time coz this was really a big matter and an heart felt apology was needed , not that coffee apology is not heart felt but I was a quite bored with this routine sorry buisness. 

oh God dear, why did u take so long to write dis, this is just just PERFECT. how I wish this wud have happened in QH too, at least ab soyi hui Zoya se to Asad iqrar kar hi sakta hai.

wowww...this was beyond wonderful...loved it!