Ariya SS- Le Jaye Jahan Zindegi [ DC-note pg 33 ] - Page 5

Interesting plot and CS.
Mainu iss story ka pm chaida.
Loved it.

nice cs & prologue
cont soon

fantastic prologue and CS :) loved it

Interesting vampu

interesting prolouge,
i am waiting for first part,
Story concept looking interesting ,
Riya lost her identity.
wow great concept . can't wait more,
continue soon

concept sounds interesting
continue soon

banner added.

How is this????

I know achha nahi hain, kyun ki mobile se banaya hai!

Anku 🤗
Awesum baner
mujhe to mobile par copy paste bi ni krna ata lol
na pm bhejna..!

are nayi story...

@leki
thanksss

@aman

thankss

@didu..
Muha
hugs
mai aap ko sikha dungi..
Bas aaj try kar rahi thi
luck se mobile pe ho gaya...hehe

@kunchu di

finally aapne cmmnt kiya.
Mai kisi ko ni bhulti..
Aur aap katogi toh chalega..

Ps- adhuri kahani ki next updt kab milega??