SwaRon OS:Unmasking The Love..SwaRon Rainy Romance - Page 4

well nw i m dead as swaron ka bukhar abi tak utra nai h...
jase hi jinda houngi unres kr dungi...
abi ke liye res..
unres...
oohh god wat a hot n sensious os...
luvd it...
plsss do continue ur ossam piece of writing...
luvd it...😉
Edited by vrushaan - 10 years ago

Well an awesome os me zyada keh nai skti coz me already loss of words

Deep u want us swaron want to die? Cux after yesterday episode v r already half dead n nw dis os tat to hot 1 OMG... I love ur every piece of writing n this one is amazing...

awesome one!

loved it...

too magical...

fabulous os👏

amazing os...⭐️

super duper hawtt 😉

kya description diya hai sharon ka.. & her getup  😛

sexy white saree... majnu to vahin dead  🤢

both are big celebs. . . . . confession hoga bhi toh kaise😳

thanx to movies itself ... jo itne hot sequence & songs hote hai  😃

superb song selection 👏

swayam to full mood me aa gya h  😎

I wonder kisi ne inhe dekha nhi vanity me jate huye...😆

beautifully described 😊

swayam's reaction .. expected..

its gud... that they poured out their feelings ultimately 👍🏼

This is simply WOW!!! 'Hum Tum', I think, is such a delicate song and you have so seamlessly molded it into Swaron story. Its truly commendable. Each word held so much love. There could not have been more beautiful way of telling their story. The other thing that I liked about this story was, we saw Swayam from Sharon's eyes and Sharon from Swayam's eyes. We knew what he felt about her and what she felt about him. And I am glad you didn't post it in parts...

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SoRry!! . I know i am unreserving it very late but actually i am too much busy with studies these days. . So now coming to this OS. . This one is egg-straw-ordinary beautiful OS. . Loved the song selection. Swayam's love and sharon despite of being well aware if her feelings was avioding her love. Then their rain dance. It was all hotty hot. . ;-) and atlast they accepted that they love each other. Mesmerizing. . Last but not the least. You are an amazing writter. . (Am i repeating this line? If yes then i can't do anything. Your every write up make me do this). Edited by rinkubathija12 - 10 years ago

y all of u wants to kill me huh? first yesterdays scene..i m still nt able to behave normally aftr seeing tht😳..n nw ur OS...gosh...m seriously gonna die in swaron land..

deep..luv u sweety fr dis super duper awesome os..song selection, writing, rain everything was perfect..👏

hw do u manage to write so good everytime..trust me swathi is gonna be super happy😃..she is gonna love it..sach mai..gr8 work yar..

 

ps- i knw its a vague n stupid thought, bt while reading os, i started imagining vrushan instead of swaron😳..dnt beat me fr dis..bt it happened automatically...bt aftr d pack up scene, whn dey went to vanity, i cm back to swaron😃..i knw i m lil weird..bt cnt help it..