My dear friend...please continue!!! This deserves to be an FF!! please please please!!!!
If u decide to make it an FF I wud be putting it on my list of must read redemption FFS...😉
The writing was so beautiful!! So much of angst, emotion and intensity... How mysterious that Shyam's dead body was found while Khushi was missing... And were they her belongings in the police station? And the super strange phone call...Why does something tell me its about Khushi?
And even if he does find Khushi,, she shouldn't return to him or forgive him so easily..He has to beg, plead and prove his love before she comes back to him...
Arnav deserves the pain...Even drowning in alcohol is no respite for him... She is everywhere...
'I hate you. You'you are the cruel, heartless,
ruthless one. .not me'you, you,'
I can feel the angst in here!! Breathtaking!
Keep it going please and update soon!!!!
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