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Ariya SS:Vishwas Tootne Ka Dard,ch9,pg54.precap-pg55

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello peeps.

This is my favorite SS which I wrote in my previous IF account,which got deleted.

This SS is also my Kaveri Di's personal favorite.
As she is back,this is my gift to her.
I am starting this SS on her request.
I hope u like it.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Ch 1.

Riya was walking aimlessly on the road.She was hurt,heart broken.Fresh streams of hot silent tears were flowing down from her beautifu doe shaped eyes.The tears left their marks on her pink rosy cheeks.

She was shocked...

Shocked at the outburst of Arjun,whom she loved unconditionally.

Today,his words broke her heart into thousand pieces.She didnt cry because she was hurt.She was crying because,Arjun didnt believe her words.

She pleaded infront of Arjun to trust her,but,all went vain.

Thus,she was rendered as the person who doesnt value the feeling of breaking somebody's trust.

"Kyun,Arjun? Aap kaise uss larki pe vishwas kar baithe? Aapne aur Rathod sir ne kaise vishwas karlia ki main kisiki jaan le sakti hu? Kaise,Arjun?

Maine aapse be intehaan pyaar kiya,aur,badle mein mujhe aapka gussa aur nafraat mila.Pehle,Maa aur Baba chal base,aur,aaj aapne mujhe chhor diya.Akeli ho gayi hu main.Koi nahi hai mera iss duniya mein.Anath bacche ke koi nahi hote hai.Vishwas uth chuka hai pyaar se.Aapne chale jaane ko kahaan hai aapke zindagi se.
Thik hai...
Kal main chali jaungi,aap sabse dur,aapse dur.
Aaj aapne pyaar se mera vishwas utha diya hai."

Soon,she reached her house.The watchman greeted her,but,as usual,he didnt get his reply from Riya.
He noticed her swollen eyes,her silent tears.

She went inside her house and locked the door.

She didnt know what she was doing.

She was hurt...

She directly went to her washroom and closed her from inside.

She turned on the shower and slumped on the floor,very loudly.

At last,she cried...
Riya cried very loudly...
But,there was no one to hear her out.
She hugged herself and curled her up like a woolen ball and cried her heart out.

She was crying so loudly,that,she didnt notice her phone was ringing.

It was her cousin brother,her mentor and guide,Rohit dada.

ACP Rohit Bannerjee,chief of Kolkata ETF...

Rohit kept on calling her.
He thought,maybe,she was sleeping,thats why,she didnt pick up her phone.

But,he didnt know,what actually happened with his baby sister.
What kind of pain she is going through.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome

Loved it

Feel really bad for riya

Pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
Continuation of ch1.

Next morning.

Riya got up and freshened herself.
The memories of last night was playing in front of her.
She was very hurt.
Riya,now,was not the chirpy soul.
Now,she was the broken soul.

She wiped her tears and took her phone to call the DIG of Mumbai Police.

DIG Ashutosh Bannerjee,Mama of Riya.

She typed her Mama's number.

Soon,the DIG picked up her call.

DIG: Hello.
Riya: Riya bol rahi hu,Mamashree.Kya main aapse aaj milsakti hu,aapke office mein,10 baje? Kuch important baatein karni thhi.
DIG: Thik hai,beta.Aajana. Beta...
Riya: Ji,Mamashree.
DIG: I know you are innocent.Main janta hu ki tumne kuch nahi kiya.Main tumpe vishwas karta hu.
Riya let out a faint smile.
Riya: Mamashree,iss Vishwas se hi mera vishwas uth chuka,jo kabhi nahi aana wala hai.Khar,choriye.Main aapse 10 baje aake milti hi.Jai Hind,Sir.

She disconnects the call.
Soon,she sits down with her laptop and writes her resignation letter from ETF.

She didnt want to write it,but,she had forced herself to write it,because,if stayed infront of Arjun,it would have made her remember the previous day's events.

*Scene changes to DIG's office*
Riya knocks the DIG's door and comes inside.
She saluted the DIG and took her seat.
DIG: Riya,kya hua?What is this envelope?
Riya presented the letter to the DIG.The DIG was shocked..
DIG: You want to resign from ETF? Why,Riya? You are such a brave officer.Senior most encounter specialist ho.Itni acchi records hai tumhari,par,why?Main janta hu,ki,Arjun ne jo kiya,woh maafi ke layak nahi hai.He shouldnt have slapped you like that.
Riya:Its ok,Mamashree.Aapka koi dosh nahi hai.Woh thori na jante hai ki aap mere Mama lagte hai.Agar main Arjun ke samne rahi,toh,unko dektehi mujhe uss din ki yaad ayegi,jo main nahi chahti.Vishwas uth chuka hai unse aur pure ETF se.Shree aur Chotu ne bhi mera vishwas nahi kiya.Mamashree,mere paas time nahi hai.Main aaj ke aaj hi Kolkata jana chahti hu.Please,aap jaldi se yeh resignation letter sign kardijiye aur Mashimaa aur Boudi ko inform kardijiye ki,main aarahi hu.Main ab aur yahaan nahi reh sakti.Rohit dada ko bhi bata dijiyega.
DIG Ashutosh signed her resignation letter.
Riya: Thank you,Mamashree.Ab main jaake yeh letter ETF ko deke aati hu.ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod ke signatures bhi chahiye.
Chalti hu.Jai Hind,Sir.
DIG: Jai Hind. Aapna khayal rakhna.
Riya: Sure.

Saying this,Riya left for her house.
Within,this time,DIG Ashutosh informs Rohit and Mashimaa about Riya...

Within 15 minutes,Riya reaches her house.She took half of the day,packing her bags and getting the house cleared.She talked to the appartment owner about her leaving this house.She handed over the keys of her house and left that place with a heavy heart.
As she left her house,many memories played infront of her.Fresh streams of hot tears flowed from her eyes.

Precap: Riya resigns from ETF and shifts to Kolkata.
Posted: 10 years ago
amazing start :) loved it
feeling so bad for riya ðŸ˜­ poor girl
nobody believed her not even arjun :(
oh so dig is riya's uncle
riya resigned from ETF :(
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing start.. pls update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing dear...feeling sad for Riya..update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
feeling bad for riya
continue soon
luv it
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
riya's mama is DIG & Kokata ETF chief is her cousin bro great
poor riya😭 what happened to her? why no one is believing her?
feeling bad for her😭
who is the other girl that they believe?😡
glad that her mama informed rohit immediately
waiting for his entry to bbb etf team😈
cont soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing one zebbie di...
 wat?? he slapped!!! ohh...poor girl..
omg..shez gonna resign??😭😭
bu i guess decision sahi bhi hai!! wat could she do?