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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 1: 

Beautiful beginning Prach, exactly what you need to begin this story. 'Despite the reasonable number of happy people, the number of disappointed people is more': brilliantly penned and SO freaking true. 

OOO Radhika Shah; why this name though? Awaiyee? Or does it have some significance like Neesha? πŸ˜‰ Oh come on, of course she'd have a story to tell. She ran away on freaking New Year's eve! πŸ˜† And as I've always said before, you have a way with descriptions, you pen down the surroundings so beautifully, that it actually seems like everything is happening right in front of you. Kudos! 

LONDON BABYYY! *Joey Tribbiani voice* πŸ˜ƒ I can't believe that's where she went! And it's a good thing because London's an amazing city to have the best experiences! The description once again, about the London architecture was brilliant and yet, sublimely cut short because of three AM in the morning when Radhika arrives. And you say you don't have talent? Joota maroon? 

WHAT kind of a hotel doesn't do on-the-spot bookings? That's so shitty! And that too at 3AM?!
AND enter our knight in shining armour! Nikhil.Malhotra. πŸ˜ƒ 

Okay, why would you do this? WHY would you make me fall in love with your male leads in every single story you write? WHY!?!?! I don't like you.  Especially with what he's wearing? White dress shirt and a black tie? Man, I've melted. ALREADY. And you haven't even started to describe him fully yet. But I like to think he's hotπŸ˜† Ofcourse he is. πŸ˜ƒ

'What kind of a cheap tactic is that?' HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA, I can SO visualise that happening. Kind of has a Jab We Met vibe to it! πŸ˜ƒ

'Because I fell in love with you at the first sight' πŸ€£ Okay, it's official, I LOVE this manπŸ˜†But he let her take the couch instead of the bed? Brat kahin ka! πŸ˜†

'What?' - That seems to be the word that rings every time she speaks, isn't it?πŸ˜† 'Can I use your toothpaste?' 'Nope' 'What?' 'Just kidding'. πŸ€£ I LOVE LOVE LOVE him. You can already figure out so much about this guy from just this much. He was playing a freaking play station. Vela kahin ka! πŸ˜† I'm SO glad you showed that Radhika was looking a bit messy. I hate it when people show the actress looking amazing even at 2PM in the afternoon. Sheesh! πŸ˜†


'If a tour doesn't show you London, you tour the London yourself'- AAACK! You just HAD to stop it there, didn't you? Onto Chapter 2! πŸ˜†

-Rai

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Originally posted by: Nishalrockerz

Oh Dude! :O um In Second Chapter N um Addicted! 

Its Just Awesome! Cant Wait What Is Next Reallly Liked Nikhil's Character! Now Um Addicted So Please U will Update Quick Lol !! xD n I Have To Complete It Quick Its Wow!! I LoveEd It !!

Originally posted by: Nishalrockerz

Awwwhh!! Love Love Love It!! It Was A Sweeet Updatee!! 
Love The Friends Circle!! Radhika Is Sweet! But Lil Bit Serious too Lol well superb i love it!! N Ya I Love The Mention Of Mr.Darcy!!
Great Going You Keep It Up !! :D

Originally posted by: Nishalrockerz

Lalalalala!! Um Done With Part 5 too!!! 

Lovely Updatee!! The Way He Was Saying k come n u drive the car!!! WoooW!! Now I Want Next Please! :O


Smarty, is this you? Thank you so much for all the amazing comments! I love it when you guys comment chapter by chapter <3 I am sorry Radhika is a bit serious! πŸ˜† Mujhpar gayi hain! Kidding! 

Thank you for awesome comments! Mwah!
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Originally posted by: IAmAaru

Done!

Sowwiefor my previous lame reply.. was  tired but i wanted to be the first one who replied!
Well well well.. The Cornwall trip sounds interesting!

And dont make Nikhil Smile devilishly. Cause each time he does that My heart flutters and stops beating!!! <3

Putting aside my craziness.. Its getting really interesting!
Btw! my suggestion.. I dont know what you have in your mind.. but mere liye.. can you revolve around a chapter on Raj and aisha! i want to know more about them!! pretty please!


It wasn't lame! I like all your comments <3

Even though he smiles devilishly, he isn't really a devil. Well, maybe not :P But kamini, your heart flutter at EVERYTHING! -_- πŸ˜†

Ah, I will try giving a special chapter on Raj and Aisha, maybe the part where they rreunite? pata nahi. I will try. And I have the story in mind, you will see them, don't worry. :)

Thank you! Love you! Mwah!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: NushIsh

So Nikhil and Radhika are going away together. 


Sounds like fun. And I agree with Aaru I also want to find out how Raj and Aisha's story turns out. 

Waiting for Nikhil and Radhika's adventure to unfold, he certainly brings out the best in her. 

True that you posted this before YJHD but it has a bit of a ring of Naina and Bunny and also jab we met how Shahid and Kareena just take off on an adventure of their own. 

Your update was unusually short considering that you usually write extra long updates. So hopefully the next one will be long and we can see more of the devilish grin from Nikhil and more of the wild side of Radhika. 

PS: This post was my 100th post  


I guess they are. I was initially going to make them tour the London instead, but I didn't have time for research.
Raj and Aisha...I will try to give you guys an extra chapter. Plus, the story is not over yet, patience my dear! πŸ˜†
*Sigh* I am sorry. I try to be original, but an amateur is an amateur anyhow!

I posted 2 chapters, it made up one I guess πŸ˜† 
Wild side of Radhika? That's hard, lol! I will try! 

Thank you for the awesome comment again! Love ya!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 2: 

Hayye, main marr jaawan! He's helping her out! But you know what? I really think there is more to this than mes the eye. Why would Nikhil awaiyee help her out? I'm just so curious! πŸ˜†

I love the way he's always there with a Coke - open happiness πŸ˜‰ I really really love the way you've described each and every emotion through the dialogue. And I love how the two of them are already at a stage where they can tease each other and pull each others' legs. LOVE LOVE LOVE. 

Nikhil Malhotra has a black car. Somehow, I'm imagining it to be a convertible. And that makes me fall harder for him. Maybe if it was a jeep?πŸ˜ƒ Hayyeee. 

'I promise you I'm a decent boy. I am not a criminal, nor a pedophile and not definitely a playboy' πŸ€£ THAT was amazing! 

He has a sly smile. He took her to this uber fancy place. WHAT IS THE SECRET? Does he own it? HE SO TOTALLY DOES, doesn't he?! The description was brilliant, as usual, though. 'Welcome back sir?'   HE TOTALLY owns the place.  I agree with Radhika, it is mega creepy. 

'You're about to meet my best friend, do not run'. OH dear, I can totally imagine this happening too. He has a best friend. AW. πŸ˜³

'Saale kamine, suar ki aulad, I told you not to interfere in my business, teri saari mardaangi nikaal dungi main kamine' πŸ€£ OH MY GOD. I SO TOTALLY DIED of laughter when I read that part. It was freaking hilarious. And I was expecting the room to be messy and the girl to be a total rebel. But blue highlights? NICE. I've always wanted to get those. πŸ˜† I'll say it once again, the descriptions you pen down are freaking awesome. I can actually picture a girl like Aisha and a guy like Raj, fighting like cats and dogs. πŸ˜† 

Btw, RAJ. Hayyyeee, the name. JUST the name. πŸ˜³ But his personality. Oh dear. πŸ˜† 'You wanna be naughty, I can help with that' πŸ€£

Aisha cracks me up. Not even kidding. I LOVE her. πŸ˜† WHAT did Raj mean by 'he's that kind of guy'? WHAT HUH? WHATTT?!?! πŸ˜³ WHY are these people SO supremely nice?! πŸ˜²

AWHHH, you have an Arjun in your story too, but I can't fall for him because he's a 7 year old and that would so totally be wrong. 

AAAH, the email from her parents!  SO that's why she ran away. The marriage thing, and before that she needs to find herself, be independent etc. πŸ˜³

On to chapter 3! πŸ˜†

-Rai






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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 3: 

I love the opening of this chapter. 'She had spent the last half an hour showering and washiing her hair which again led her to think how stupid does it look to go to a pool with washed, wet hair'. πŸ€£ That is so totally me. I mean, I hate my hair. 

'Now that isn't a charming way to socialise' - Oh Nikhil, he's everywhere, isn't he?πŸ˜† Not that I'm complaining and I don't think Radhika is either! πŸ˜† So even she noticed huh? That he drinks Coke all the time? Is there some weird reason behind that or is it just cause he likes it?πŸ˜† 

I have said this before in the last chapter and I'm going to say it again. I LOVE the relationship the two of them share and how close they've become in such a short span. 

When I read that Raj punched that blonde guy, I knew it was because of Aisha. I swear, it's taking me everything not to confuse Aisha and AditiπŸ˜†. AND I WAS SO TOTALLY RIGHT. Oh Raj, you're not 5 any more! 

'You mean about the fact that she might have a hardcore, possessive lover boy?' - Is that the reason? Or is there something else? When it comes to you, Prach, I know better that to take everything at face value, so..tell me, what is it?! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

'You're not coming to the party!? - Aisha yelled' - I WAS TOTALLY expecting that. I can really relate to Aisha. Well, Radhika too. But you know, WHY couldn't you name one of them Raina? Just to show your love for me? Name Aisha, Raina, please? πŸ˜†

YOU must not describe how the guys look, because I'm falling for more fictional characters and that's not good! πŸ˜† WHY is he going to Cornwall? What are they hiding? WHAT IS IT!?!?! And I love how she is already missing him! And he isn't even gone yet! And I love how he's taking care of her! AAAH, my poor romantic dil! πŸ˜†

'He was her knight. It wsn't his fault that his armour wasn't exactly shining' - SO FREAKING TRUE. Hayyye Prach, you're awesome. 

'B.S Enterprises - BULLSHIT enterprises?' πŸ˜† I'm SO immature. πŸ˜† And what is Raj's problem? Ab why is he walking away? And why did Nick glare at Aisha? (I've nicknamed him Nick) πŸ˜†

AAAH, 'like many other things she had found out about them, their friendship wasn't perfect either and still, she found herself craving to be a part of this little group'. WHY DID YOU STOP IT THERE?! 

On to chapter 4!

-Rai


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Posted: 10 years ago
Kamini, main tujhe nahin chhodungi. This is why I hadn't read this until now. Because I was pakka se sure that I would fall in love with this story and when you wouldn't update it for ages, I will feel lost. Damn you.  

Anyway, chapter 4: 

Aisha cried. AISHA CRIED?! πŸ˜² I couldn't believe it. If it were me instead of Radhika, I would go into a full on panic mode and start going all 'are you okay? OMG what's wrong' kinda thing. But the thing that shocked me the most was when Radhika said 'I don't want to jump to conclusions but I think that was an act rather hard for you'. 

OHMYGOD. She was acting? She hurt Raj's feelings on purpose? WHY WOULD SHE DO THAT? I can't believe she started telling Radhika everything. Anyway, on to Aisha's story. 

AWWW. (Btw, I love how Radhika was all 'grammar error!' in her head! πŸ˜†), but Aisha and Raj were in love!? They still are but what the hell? THEN WHAT WENT SO WRONG?! 

Raj's DAD. RAJ KE DAD?! What a freaking asshole. I don't like him. AT ALL. What a retard. Who judges people like that? Well, I know there are a lot of people who do that but what the hell!? ARGH. I don't like this man. AT ALL. But I really liked how Radhika took care of Aisha. It was really beautifully penned. 

I KNEW IT! 'She had a goal here and it was to find herself. Not in a true way, just to find where she belongs'. AHA! Maine kya kaha tha? I KNEW she was on a mission to find herself! πŸ˜ƒ

Arey! If she went to boarding school and can take care of herself aise, why do her parents think she isn't independent enough? Thoda ajeeb laga. Anyway, I don't know why but I'm just weirdly thinking that Nikhil is the guy she was supposed to be marrying in the first place and she ran away and he was there and I don't know, this is a weird thought. πŸ˜†I doubt that his family is the 'dowry-eating' type. πŸ˜†


NIKHIL AGAIN! He's omnipresent, I swear. I love him. I love love love him, and them together. YAY! He asked her to come with her?! How did he read her so easily? I mean, he was all 'is it because I'm going away?' I CAN'T BELIEVE HE KNOWS HER SO WELL ALREADY! AAACK! πŸ˜ƒ


'What is it like?' 'What is what like?' 'Running away from home' - AAACK could you have left it at a worse point?! I don't like you. UFF. Thank God for me there is one more chapterπŸ˜†

On to chapter 5! 
-Rai

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Tu kamini hai. Bas. 

Chapter 5: I can't believe I'm at the last chapter of the story so far! I wanna read more! πŸ˜†

'So she felt it would be easier to ask the question than give the answer, like it had always been'.- This line was beautiful, utterly beautiful. And the way you describe things is brilliant, I'm telling you again. 

I can't believe he's noticed stuff about her so much! HE WENT THROUGH HER luggage!? πŸ˜² Besharam kahin ka! I can't stop laughing at this. At least he gets it that it is creepyπŸ˜† 

Aw, I love how he's sharing stuff with her. I LOVE IT. 'I was stuck between both so I ran away to Rome'. - I LOVE THIS GUY. He's reckless, he's carefree and yet, cares a LOT. I LOVE HIM. I get reminded of Bunny-Naina. And I picture Ranbir-Deepika. And with Aisha-Raj, I picture Aditi-Avi. I'm so weird. But you did post this before the trailer even, so yeahπŸ˜†

'Come to Cornwall with me' - HAYYYE, THIS IS SO UTTERLY ROMANTIC. I love him. I love the comfort level between the two of them, I swear, and it's been what? 2 days since they've met? Oh of course she'll have the time of her life. DUH. 

And this is so romantic. A long drive. Hayye main marr jaawaan! πŸ˜³ And I'm saying this for the nth time, but you really are amazing at describing things!! 

HE LET HER DRIVE?! He's amazing. And reckless. And amazing. I really hope they don't get into an accident. πŸ˜† But this was SUCH a short part. WRITE. WRITE. WRITE. 

Now I can finally say - NIKE Prach, NIKE. πŸ˜†

-Rai

P.S - Ab toh khush hai? Comments dekh le tu! πŸ˜†
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People! I have a VERY busy schedule, so I am REALLY sorry for all the mistakes and late update.
Okay, read and bye.

2000 words.

RAINA! Do you know how much I love you MeenaKumari? Who spends time giving such elongated comments on EVERY chapter in this zamana? I LOVE YOU!!! I really want to reply, but time hi nahi mil raha yaar! 8 hours of academy a day tires the eff out of me! But anyways, I love you love you and LOVE YOU! Because all your comments made my day a FABULOUS one! And I couldn't tell anyone why I couldn't keep the smile off my face! :D <3 Mwah! 


Chapter 6

Nikhil looked at Radhika uncertainly, but then grinned anyways. Radhika pressed down on the gas and the car accelerated.

 

"With the little speech you gave me, I though you were going to cross hundred today." Nikhil said after a while. Radhika was just following the speed limits.


"You have a death wish." Radhika replied laughing. "I am sorry that I can't help you with that."

 

"Come on! There's barely any car around! It's a golden chance to..." He paused to think of a word. "...Explore your adventurous wishes."

 

Radhika laughed at his poor attempt. "Okay, let's say I speed-up and we don't reach on the other side safely. What does it have in for me?" She glanced at him. Nikhil cocked his head in amusement.

 

"You want to place a bet?" He asked. Radhika shrugged.

 

"Why not?"

 

"Fine!" Nikhil waved his hand. "If we don't reach Cornwall safely, I will..." He scrunched his eyebrows and tapped his chin rhythmically. Too bad, Radhika missed those facial expressions. "...I will cook you something." He finally said.

 

"Cook me something?" Radhika scoffed. "You can cook?"

 

"Try me!" He grinned.

 

"Fine! Indian food." She said. "If we do, I owe you a coke."

 

"Hey! That's not fair!" He exclaimed. "I can buy my own addiction, thank you very much."

 

"I was just kidding!" Radhika laughed. "How about you tell me what I have to do."

 

"Alright." Nikhil said, his face never losing the bright grin. "You have to go rock-climbing with me."

 

"Rock climbing?" Radhika asked, unsure.

 

"Yes." He said. Radhika stole a glance at his excited face, uncertainty tingling her heart. Then she thought back to why she was going to Cornwall in first place. "Alright then." She said finally. "It's a deal."

 

"Then what are we waiting for baby?" Nikhil straightened up in his seat. "Let's go!"

Radhika took a deep breath and stepped on the accelerator. She couldn't wipe the smile off her face as the car zoomed through the road built in the middle of mountains. There were low hills in the distance and half green half yellow grass laid across the fields to them like a carpet. Radhika's heart fluttered as the car sped up. Thankful that no other vehicle seem to cross their path, she let her foot dare press the pedal beyond hundred. It was like an addiction. The more you have, the more you want. Slowly, the nervousness faded and she felt happiness excite her nerves.

 

"Radhika." His voice was low, as if he was dreading what was coming. "Slow down."

 

"Why? Scared?" She said, her eyes still on the road.

 

"Idiot!" He said with his teeth clenched and a second later, Radhika realized why. Above them in the sky, a helicopter was making its way close to them.

 

"BLACK CAR. PLEASE STOP ON THE LEFT SIDE OF THE ROAD. BLACK CAR!"

 

Radhika instantly slowed down on the left side of the road. "Shit!" She cursed. Nikhil nodded and repeated her word. Then as the helicopter above started to land, Nikhil turned to her.

 

"Switch places, hurry up." He said, leaning towards her.

 

"What?" She asked, flabbergasted.

 

"My dear, I know it's your favorite word, but let's do the questions later. Now come on!" He said. Radhika opened her mouth but Nikhil was already leaning in to move in her seat, so she had no choice but follow his act. With much difficulty, too many tangled positions, and undesirable amount of breath compressing, they both finally made it to each other's seat. Radhika patted her hair as she settled in her seat with a heavy breath. She turned to look at Nikhil and found him glance at her and then turn to look at the helicopter, which was making its way to land. For a moment they thought it would land on the side, but their eyes rounded when they saw it landing right in front of their car, safe distance away.

 

"Is this normal?" Radhika whispered, as if the policemen can hear her even so far away.

 

"I doubt it." Nikhil said, frowning. They waited as one of the policemen stepped out of the helicopter and ran towards them with a walkie-talkie clipped on his waist and a small computer in his hand. Nikhil rolled down his side of the window as the guy arrived.

 

"Your name?" He asked in a clipped tone.

 

"Nikhil Malhotra." Nikhil said coolly. He opened his laptop and flipped the screen, and closed it back on the keyboard. It was a touchscreen laptop. After Nikhil spelled out his name for him, he looked at Radhika. She stared back for a moment before shaking her head.

 

"Uh, Radhika Shah." She said. She was going to spell it out for him but Nikhil was already saying it. She bit her lip and sit back.

 

"Mr. Mal-ho-tara," He read off from his machine. "Are you a citizen here?"

 

"I am a permanent resident here." Nikhil replied. He reached for his pocket and pulled out his wallet. Then showed him two of many card stored in there: his driver license and his residency card.

 

"And Miss. Shah?" He asked.

 

"I am on tour, sir." She said nervously. Her heart was still beating a rapid rate. Maybe the effect of speeding had still not worn off.

 

"Your passport and visa please." He said curtly. Radhika nodded and reached for the purse in the back seat. After everything was checked and done, and made sure that we were not aliens, he went back to the helicopter and came back with a piece of paper. Nikhil had to pay the charges on in two months.

 

"You have been charged for driving at the speed of hundred and twenty on a road of seventy five. Two points will be taken away form your driving license, and this means that your driver license can be revoked if caught again. Do I make myself clear sir"? He asked. Nikhil nodded in return, and signed off on the fancy laptop with a smart-pen.

 

"Well, that went well." Nikhil said with a chuckle as the helicopter started to take off.

Radhika turned to look at him. He smiled down at her, and there wasn't much she can do to bit back the smile that followed. A moment later, they both burst out laughing, and Radhika's heart eased along with the atmosphere.

 

"Thank you." She whispered to him. Nikhil blinked in acknowledgement, perfectly understanding what she was so greatfull for. Radhika was glad she didn't have to explain him.

 

He just understood her too well.

 

 

 

They had reached Cornwall by evening. The sun was low in the mountains, ready to call it a day in an hour. Cornwall was a peninsula, a piece of land surrounded by water on three sides. The English Channel and Celtic sea surround its perimeter. The people of Cornwall speak Cornish language, something that both Nikhil and Radhika found very fascinating.

 

"So, where are we staying?" Radhika asked, dragging the suitcase behind her. They were walking through a market center, which mainly sold the sea-items. Nikhil led the way through the market, while Radhika wondered where they were going. They couldn't get the car through because of narrow streets.

 

"Just follow me." Nikhil replied.

 

"As a matter of fact, I have no choice." Radhika replied. Nikhil turned to her with an amused look.

 

"You know, you have turned a bit too sassy since yesterday." Nikhil remarked. Radhika's face turned blank at that. She wished she had kept her attitude in check. That was on of many factors in her personality. Once she gets closer to a person, and lets them step inside her personal space, she turns carefree, and unconscious of what she is saying to them. Most of the time, unaware of what might offend them.

"Oye!" He said when he saw his face. "I didn't say I didn't like that."

 

Radhika glared at him sideways and hitting him with the elbow, walked ahead.

 

"Hey!" He said after her. "Do you know where we are going?"

 

 

 

"Nikhil!" Radhika shouted across the sandy land. Nikhil had stopped by a shop to do something "important" and was left behind. He raised his hand as he acknowledged her shout and with the bag slung over one shoulder, he jogged across to her.

"What are we doing here?" She asked, turning to look at the water field that expanded towards the mountain edges before her. The night was falling, and the sun had already bid its final good bye. The grey sky reflected the water, or the grey water reflected he sky, she couldn't determine.

 

"It's not that hard Einstein." He said, dropping the bag and taking deep breaths. "We are staying here."

 

Radhika turned to look at him with the sharpest expression of anger she could muster. "Stay? Here?" She trailed her eyes around the sandy area. It was completely empty, and Radhika doubted they would be even permitted to stay here for five minutes, let alone spend a night. "Is that the empty stomach talking?"

 

"Now that you remind me," He said, turning away. He bent down and started opening his bag. "We should start building the tent. I am really hungry."

 

Radhika opened her mouth, but was distracted by the three men walking through the sand over to where they were standing. They were standing at the edge of the beach where the concrete two feet wall bordered the area. One of the man, small and round was walking with a lightened cigarette in his hand. Behind him, a skinny boy was dragging a crate with a box in it. Another man was walking along with them. He was a normal size, but with a huge belly.

 

"Who are they?" Radhika whispered. Nikhil looked up from his bag and at the three men. He stood up.

 

"Hello Mr. Neal. I am Park. I received your secretary's call this morning. The beach is all yours for two days. And Josh here will help you with all the little rounds." Park talked straight to the point. Radhika turned to Nikhil with an expression that could be undermined if termed as shocked.

 

"Thank you Park, I am glad you could make the arrangements. I will need two tents set up and fire wood please. Rest, we will take care of it." Nikhil smiled back.

 

 

"YOU RENTED THIS BEACH?" Radhika turned on him as soon as the three men left their sight. Nikhil hissed at the shrill and flinched away.

 

"Not really. I didn't rent it." He said, his tone small and defensive. Radhika glared at him. "I had already rented it, you joined in late."

 

"Well, you could have warned me! I didn't even bring any money that can buy a freaking beach!" She growled.

 

"I didn't buy a beach! For god's sake woman, what's your problem? "Nikhil said angrily. The atmosphere that had built up between them since past forty-eight hours quickly thickened. Radhika stared at him with her mouth slightly open. Her eyes filled with guilt and something else that Nikhil couldn't determine.

 

Nikhil put his palms on his face and rubbed it. How could he mess this up? He wasn't going to get this chance again! He dropped his hands and turned to Radhika. She looked away at the ocean and then instantly dropped her eyes to the ground.

 

"I am sorry!" She whispered. "And thank you."

 

Nikhil stepped closer to her. He put his hands on her face and made her look up at him.

 

"I know you find this all a bit strange. I am nothing but a stranger to you." He said to her. He pushed her fringes away from her eyes. "But trust me, this isn't a burden to me. I am just trying to help you, and be your friend. I like doing it for you, so just accept it. Okay?"

Radhika nodded. Seemingly hypnotized by his dark, shining eyes as the night fell over them.

Edited by .Destiny. - 10 years ago
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What the *beep* pyjama is this?! 

HOLYSMACKREL. (I think you'd have missed thatπŸ˜‰) 
*reserved for an incredibly long comment because there is so much I have to say*

But for the time being, I love you too! πŸ˜ƒ

*unreserved now* πŸ˜†

 
Nikhil Malhotra, do you have a freaking death wish?πŸ˜† Oh, hahaha, that's exactly what Radhika said too! πŸ˜† He is SO totally a child, I'm telling you. Who does this? 'It's your golden chance to explore your adventurous wishes?' πŸ€£ 

Okay, so if they DON'T reach the other side safely, he was going to cook for her. I don't know how that works since they won't reach the other side safely but what the hell. HE CAN COOK. HE CAN COOK DAMMIT. *falls more in love with Nikhil Malhotra*. Is there anything this man can't do? And she's going to owe him a coke? REALLY!? πŸ€£

OHMYGOD, I know he said that as a phrase and whatever, but HE CALLED HER BABY. HE CALLED HER BABY. OHMYGOD my poor romantic dil. MY DIL!!! πŸ˜² 

Of course she couldn't stop smiling, she was breaking the rules and living for a change and she was in this amazing car and amazing guy. WHO WOULD wanna stop smiling, hein? 

Plus, I'm gonna add my standard line here: Your descriptions are amazing. Beautifully penned, the way you've described the view from their car is simply amazing. 

'Radhika, slow down' 'Why, scared?' 'Idiot'. - HAWWW kamine panti ki hadd hoti hai! Ek toh he insisted that she 'explore her adventurous spirits' and fir ab he's calling her an idiot? πŸ˜† 

AND HE CALLED HER MY DEAR (yes, I know that's a British thing to do but WHATEVER, I'm taking whatever I can get) πŸ˜† And he's saving her, and asking her to switch places. Hayye, main marr jaawaaann! MERA HERO! πŸ˜³

'Is this normal?' 'I doubt it'? REALLY NICK!? You didn't know this was gonna happen? Liar liar, pants on fire? πŸ˜† But whatever, I love how he can stay so freaking calm and cool in this predicament. I bet she's nervous as hell. But I'm so glad she had her papers and everything. 

He did understand her too well. Aisa kaise possible hai?! My poor romantic dil! Hayyee. πŸ˜³ And she has a sassy attitude. WOOOHOOO, go Radhika! πŸ˜ƒ 'I didn't say I didn't like that' - HAYYE MERA DIL. Rehem kar ispe. πŸ˜†


MY REACTION EXACTLY. HE RENTED THE BEACH!?!?! OHMYGOD. And I love the way she says 'I didn't even bring any money that can buy a freaking beach'. πŸ€£ They are SO amazing together. 

'It said 'I didn't buy a bitch' - I think you should have kept that because I laughed my guts out at that one. πŸ˜† HE HELD HER FACE. *mera dil, overwhelm ho jaaeyga* But what did he mean by 'He wasn't gonna get this chance again?' Was my wild, crazy theory right? Was Nikhil the guy she was going to marry? Fir dowry ki baat kahan se aati hai? Yaar, this is confusing. Raaaz kholo, but till then, I'm just gonna love my Nikhil-Radhika ke moments. HAYYYE. 'I like doing it for you'  Hayye main marr jaawaannn. OF COURSE she was hypnotised by the way he was looking at her. HAYYYEEE. 

WHY would you stop it there? NIKE Prach, NIKE πŸ˜†

-Rai



Edited by CutielovesChocs - 10 years ago