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PEHLA NASHA 2...(A-K’s marriage!!!)

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Posted: 17 years ago

hi guys. This is the second part of pehla nasha. It reached 150 pages so i had to make a second part.

here's the link to the first part:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=70965&KW =pehla+nasha

Here's the link to my last part i've written:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=70965&TP N=151

 

keep reading pehla nasha.

-Marz

 

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Posted: 17 years ago

My last part:

Next part:

The next day Angad and Kripa go shopping. At the mall Kripa is at a food court cuz she's hungry. Angad's at a sport's shop looking through sport's magazine. You see the entrance. Karthik and this girl is entering there. Angad sees them and goes over to them.

 

Angad: Hi Karthik. Wat r u doing here?

Karthik: Oh hi Angad. I just thought i'd do some shopping

Angad: Oh i c

Karthik: Ya, well Angad this is Mythri. She works at my office. She's new here to Mumbai

Angad: Oh i c. Hi Mythri

Mythri: hi

Karthik: So where's Kripa?

Angad: She's at the food court

Karthik: Oh ok

Angad: Ya i'll see u guys later then

Karthik: Alrite bye

 

Angad goes to the food court and doesn't see Kripa anywehre. He searches around and then decides to go to the nearby shops. He looks for her in a jewelry shop when he sees her. She's at the shop opposite where he's at. He goes there.

 

Kripa: Angad!

Angad: Kripa where were u? I was searching for u

Kripa: Oh i was done so i thought i'd do some shopping. Sorry

Angad: It's ok

 

They shop around then go back home. At home Naina has the food ready for lunch. She calls everyone.

 

 

I'll update the rest of this part later.

-Marz

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Posted: 17 years ago
i'll update the next part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey guys. i prollie won't be able to write for 2 days. Sorry.

 

-Marz

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Posted: 17 years ago

When everyone is eating, Kripa takes some chillie from a plate. She rly likes chillies. She takes a bite, and for some reason, it's rly hot so she quickly drinks water.

 

Naina: R u ok beta?

Kripa: Ha mummyji (gasping)

Angad: R u sure?

Kripa: Ha Angad. The chillie was just a bit too hot for me today

Angad: Par tum to hamesha mirchi khate ho?

Kripa: I know par aaj pata nehi kyu it was.......excuse me

 

She excuses herself from the table and goes to the washroom. She looks at herself in the mirror and then closes her eyes. After some time she starts to throw up.

Then Angad knocks on the door. Kripa opens it and Angad asks if she's ok. She says she's fine and they go back to eat. When everyone asks she says she's ok.

After lunch, everyone goes to their room to rest. Kripa quickly lies on the bed and falls into a rly deep sleep. Angad comes in and finds her asleep so he also decides to lie next to her, and falls asleep.

Angad wakes up when he hears some noise downstairs. He hears lots of ppl talking, so he gets up. Kripa is still sleeping. Downstairs, there's an old lady n an old man, a man n woman, and two other girls.

He goes up to them and hugs them.

Angad: Kaise ho dadi?

Dadi: Aachi hu, aur tum? Kripa kaha hai?

Angad: Woh soh raha hai

Dadi: Theek hai

1st girl: How r u Angad?

Angad: I'm good Samiya, tum?

Girl answers: I'm fine

2nd girl: Shall we wake Kripa bhabi up?

Angad: Sure go ahead

Girl: ok

 

The two girls run upstairs.

They slowly and quietly open the door, and find Kripa sleeping.

Samiya: Shhh...

They go go Kripa and gently nudge her by the shoulder. Kripa doesn't wake up so Somila nudges again, this time a bit less gentler. Kripa still doesn't wake up.

 

Samiya: I think she's gone into a rly deep sleep. Lets go (whispering)

Somila: Ok (whispering back)

 

They leave the room quietly and meet Angad in the hallway.

Angad: Kya hua?

Somila: She's still sleeping (whispering)

Angad: Really?

Somila: Ya (whispering)

Angad: Well let me try to wake her up. You girls go on downstairs. There's snacks (whispering to them)

Both: Ok (whispering bak)

 

Angad quietly opens the door and Kripa is still sleeping. He closes the door and locks it. he goes over to Kripa and lies on the bed.

He leans over to her and kisses her cheeks and brushes his hands through her hair.

 

Angad: Kripa (whispers)

He whispers her name twice more. Kripa stirs a little and smiles a little. Angad smiles back and kisses her cheeks again. She looks so cute! He hugs her and falls asleep for a little while.

Kripa wakes up and finds Angad holding her. She calls him and he hugs her tighter. She calls him again. This time he wakes up and lets her go.

Angad: Oh sorry Kripa

Kripa: it's ok

They get up and sit in bed.

 

Angad: Oh my god! We have guests downstairs Kripa

 

He looks at the clock. It's been half an hour since he fell asleep.

Kripa: Kaun aaya?

Angad: My cousins and aunt and her parents

Kripa: Aur chachu?

Angad: Woh bhi aaaya

Kripa: Oh i c, aur tum yaha kya kar rehi ho?

Angad:  Mai yaha tumse jaagane ke liye aaya tha par tum tabhi bhi soh raha tha so i fell asleep too

Kripa: Well we have to get up now

Angad: Ya let's go

 

Before Kripa gets off the bed he brings her to him and kisses her cheek again. Then he lets her go.

 

They get freshened up. Angad leaves the room, while kripa is still getting ready. She's wearing a blue sari, golden bangles, her hair is down, and she's wearig a manglasutra and sinndoor.

Then she leaves. In the hallway Samiya and Somila are coming to her.

Samiya: Hi Kripa bhabhi

Kripa: Hi Samiya, kaise ho?

Samiya: We're fine, aap?

Kripa: I'm fine beta

Somila: Bhabhi aap bohot dheer se soh raha tha

Kripa: Jaanti hu, sorry

Somila: It's ok (laughing)

 

Kripa smiles back and the ep ends.

 

-Marz😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry to say but that was a very boring part put some romantic scenes
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Posted: 17 years ago

This content was originally posted by: pink sky

sorry to say but that was a very boring part put some romantic scenes

wat's the deal with romance?

i don't like it 😛

anywayz i'll try

Edited by PopPrincess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

kripa goes downstairs and finds everyone watching tv in the living room. Angad is coming from the kitchen and goes up to her.

Angad: hi Kripa

Kripa: hi angad

Angad: come on

Kripa: ya

 

She goes and says hi to everyone. Then she goes to the kitchen and bings everything out for dinner. Kripa cooked the food today.

 

This is wat they're having:

Everyone rushes to the table to eat.

 

Kripa's having vegetarian food becoz she's finding everything hot nowadays. Angad asked her abt it, and she said she just felt like it.

It's 12 now and Kripa is sitting in bed, thinking. She seems dazed. Angad comes in the room, goes behind her, and hugs her. Kripa is still thinking.

Angad: Kripa sweety

Kripa: Hmm? (out of her daze now)

Angad: Wat's wrong?

Kripa: Nothing

Angad: You've been acting strangely since a few days

Kripa: Nothing, it's nothing. i guess i'm just tired, that's all

 

Angad turns her around and Kripa hugs him, smiling. Angad hugs her back and he kisses her neck.  kripa hugs him tighter. He lays her down and starts kissing her neck, then her lips.

Kripa: Angad, get off me

Angad: What? Why Kripa?

Kripa: Get off me first

Angad: Ok

 

He gets off her.

 

Kripa: Angad......woh....i think i'm pregnant

Angad: What? Kab? Kripa r u sure? I'm so happy!!!

He hugs her really tight.

 

Kripa: Angad

Angad: Oh sorry

 

He lets her go.

 

Kripa: I was going to, but there was so much to do and just guests and Karthik's b-day u know. i got busy

Angad: oh rite. we'll go to the doctor first thing tomorrow morning

Kripa: Ok

 

They go to sleep.

 

Edited by PopPrincess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice..!! keep it up!!
de food is mouth-waterinG.....YummYYY..hehe!! 😆 😆