FF: Pyaar in the Pink City Pt32/Pg106(Concluded) - Page 84

Amazing story! I love how you successfully made me care about Anjali and Ajay even though the former has not really been my favorite character. Brilliant casting, wonderful new characters - I adore Tashi and Ayan - and a perfect end for Shyam. To finally realize what he lost and to never have it within reach again.

Originally posted by: moomin4455

Amazing story! I love how you successfully made me care about Anjali and Ajay even though the former has not really been my favorite character. Brilliant casting, wonderful new characters - I adore Tashi and Ayan - and a perfect end for Shyam. To finally realize what he lost and to never have it within reach again.

I love Jaipur, so the description of Malhar, the Rajasthani elements was glorious to read about. I have to ask did you base Malhar on an existing haveli or building?

 

I finally started on this FF Indu. I wont apologize - i wanted some contiguous time to read it in its entirety.

Just finished chapter 1.

First of all - i love your choice for Ajay Singh Rathod. Arjun Rampal is one of my all time favourite drool (aka drool-worthy guy 😉). And his entry - so very hindi filmy 😆. But as always - your words evoke the visuals so beautifully.

Ok - i am hooked. Wanna know more about this ASR.

Ah Indu. This was such a beautiful tale. I love angst and coupled with love like this (not to mention my fav drool) - you had my hook, line and sinker at i think chapter 1.

I really should have given feedback chapter by chapter - but i didn't want to stop reading to write. I think my favs are ASR^2 and the Shyam chapter, as well as the last one. I love it when the pragmatics of life are dealt with... pragmatically 😉 in fiction. And you covered that wonderfully in both the ASR^2 and Shyam chapters.

And the last one was so fitting. Not overdone, not saccharine, no detailed marriage scenes. Just - right.

I loved all the characters you introduced. But most of all, i loved your Anjali. You gave a completely believable portrayal and growth for her character. It made sense. 👏 Well done indeed. And i think this story has been the best retribution i have read for Shyam.

Sigh. I hate to think this one is finished. Its probably my favourite of all your stories (and that's quite hard - since i love all of them). I think i will have to re-read. Seriously - send it to me in Kindle format so i can read it again and again at leisure.

Thank you Indu. These were a few hours remarkably well spent.

just read the edit in chap 19... 

superb one

You missed such a cute Arnav-Anjali part 🤣 Ha ha I can imagine Anjali's plight 😃

Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM