Originally posted by: aruni50218
Haila!! That was DOWNRIGHT HOT!! ☺️
So.. Its Sugar Queen Says I Love You Dammit huh? Minus Dammit, but nevertheless a perfect love confession.. 👏
agree with psarada... you write this stuff very well. And its getting better and better... 😳
What I loved the most was the part about Alladin. I was reminded of the song "A whole new world" of Alladin, which is one of my childhood favorites - And is suits A-A union really well! Were you thinking of that too when you wrote this? Here goes my fav part:
I can show you the world
Shining, shimmering, splendid
Tell me, princess, now when did
You last let your heart decide?
I can open your eyes
Take you wonder by wonder
Over, sideways and under
On a magic carpet ride
A whole new world
A dazzling place I never knew
But when I'm way up here
It's crystal clear
That now I'm in a whole new world with you
Now I'm in a whole new world with you
A whole new world
That's where we'll be
A thrilling chase
A wondrous place
For you and me
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