FF: Pyaar in the Pink City Pt32/Pg106(Concluded) - Page 12

And the villain makes his entry. And what does he want to do in Shantivan? It's not like he has an inside source who he can privately meet. I hope it's not to kidnap Khushi! or kill Arnav! or hurt Anjali! She's already going through the if only's and now, just when she's on her way to healing, she will blame herself again for any complication. 

Amazing chapter. Actually for me the story becomes a little bit uninteresting if any other characters apart from the ones from the show are introduced. I kind of can't relate to those characters. But in this case it didn't happen. U have given so much details that it became a lot more easier to relate to the new characters. Loving the way the story is progressing. Do give us some Arshi moments as well. Thanks for the PM :)

Lovely update , liked the interaction between the small family ...

entry of the snake!!!!

Heey,
Sorry couldn't comment like i said before!!!
But what can i tell you that you don't already know?
You are an amazing, epic writer and i know for a fact that you're one of IF's best writers!! :D
Keep Calm and Carry On Writing!! <3

Cheers,
Tasneem :)

Reserved! 

Unreserved!

I'm so sorry for commenting so late on this update, after you have updated the next part as well. I really am very sorry. I may comment late but I would always comment on each and every update.

I loved the kind of father Ajay is. It must be very difficult to single-handedly bring up a child, both the parents are inevitable in a child's life and not having a mother is the most painful thing. But Ajay is doing a wonderful job and is acting like both a mother and father. 

I also loved the relationship between Ajay and his uncle. Virendra Pratap seems to be a very smart and caring man who wants to bring all the happiness in the world for Ajay. He loves Ajay a lot and wants him to settle down with a genuine and wonderful life partner. It's very difficult to stay alone and loneliness makes a person even more sad. He loved his previous wife with his heart and soul and it is very difficult for him too to settle down once again with any other woman and also he should be able to provide her with love and affection that that person deserves, so Ajay is also right at his place. 
Whatever story is cooking up in Virendra's mind is fascinating. I would love to see the efforts of the elderly folk to try their hands at match-making. 

The next part was very happy and nice. Dhruv going for his project, his wonderful relationship with Khushi, Arnav smiling looking at them and the usual hustle bustle that goes on in the Raiazada mansion. Great!

I hate Shyam, he is so creepy and disgusting. Some people really can never do or think good of others. He needs to be taught a lesson. I liked how you mentioned about the Will papers. 

The story ahead is going to be so interesting and amazing. I find this whole concept of two new men and the return of Shaym in Anjali's life very intriguing. Wonderful! Very well written! Stay blessed!  Edited by srishti_jain - 11 years ago

Whattay superb chapter Indu...!! This one gave us a peek into everyone's lives. 

Hey dear, I finally got a chance to read this awesome SS of yours! First and foremost, I apologise for not being able to come here earlier because I was sooo busy with exams at school (ergh 👎🏼) and second of all I want to thank you for continuing to send me PM's even when I couldn't comment and also for being a faithful reader to me! Now it's my turn to make it up to you!! ;P

Originally posted by: aruni50218

I'm loving this story more and more every day! 😃

Ajay's chacha ji sounds like Nora Roberts' Daniel McGregor 😆. And I absolutely LOVE Daniel's matchmaking efforts, how his children and grandchildren think they are too smart for him, but eventually end up marrying the ones he chose for them 😆 😆. Chacha ji's promise of not initiating matchmaking, but helping already started ones strongly reminded me of that.

BTW, as only nani ji and Anjali are visiting, A-A love story will have some time & space to proceed without our dearest chote inteferering, wouldn't it? 😃

Somehow the most exiting part in the update for me was the last part. Waiting to see what our Shyamu's next mad-scientist scheme would be. After all, he's The Villain We Love To Hate. the story only gets more spicier with his not-so-divine interventions.

Originally posted by: inajnar

Whattay superb chapter Indu...!! This one gave us a peek into everyone's lives.