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Sandi update kab karogi? ?...waiting..
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Sandi update kab karogi? ?...waiting..

 
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Ok..waiting.. Edited by vironikajain - 10 years ago
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Now now now..yeh kaisa ques hai.. πŸ˜†Edited by vironikajain - 10 years ago
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Part- 10

Ram (holding her both hand) with a smile:- kya tum mere saat mere ghar chalogi???????

 

Priya turns back. Amar gave his acceptance by blinking his eyes.

Ram takes her with him and drives to his home. Both reached haveli.

This time Priya noticed that somebody is waiting for her with a smile on her face. Ram introduces her as "Neeta".

 

Ram:- Priya'.she is Neeta. She will take care of you. Sham tak Neeta tumhare saat rahegi. Sham ko Neeta chali jaayegi.

 

Gopal kaka brings water. Ram "Aur hamare yeh Gopal Kaka yeh abb sirf subah hi nahi har waqt yahi rahenge. Tumhe jo chahiye tum inse bol dena, yeh tumhare liye banakar denge.

                          

Saying this he told Neeta to take her to her bedroom. Ram knows everything is not yet solved. He knows she needs dress to change and in this case he has no idea about it.

He cannot take Priya for any shop as her condition is not right. He cannot say this to Neeta also. Neha is also not here and moreover Vikram don't know anything about Priya.

 

Ram went to her room.

Ram:- Priya'.yeh tumhare liye (and handover his dress to Priya)'thodi badi hai'..aaj ke liye adjust kar lo'..kal mein kuch karta hoon.

Priya:- thanks'.. Ram aap mere liye itna sab kuch'..kyun????

 

Ram:- Pata nahi..mein khud nahi jaanta'haan lekin yeh sab karne mein muje achha lag raha hai'.abb tum yeh sab sochna bandh karo aur aaram karo. Tumhe teek bhi toh hona hai aur uske baad hum dono milkar tumhare parents ko dhundenge.

Mein abhi office chalta hoon sham ko milte hai, tab tak tumhare saat Neeta rahegi'.

 

Ram instructs Neeta to take care of her. He also instructs to give food and medicines in time also make sure that Priya takes rest and if there is any problem just call him.

Saying this he left for office.

 

This time Vikram decided that he will ask Ram about his absence. But, Ram himself said everything about priya.

Vikram:- kab mila raha hai Priya se'.

Ram:- bahut jald. Ek baar Priya ko teek ho jane de phir milata hoon.

 

Vikram somewhere happy that ram is talking about any girl. He thinks "aaj teri zindagi mein ek ladki ne dastak di hai, woh din bhi aayega jab tu pyar karna bhi seek jaayega.

 

Ram is calling and taking update from Neeta time to time. Ram in his office but he is thinking about Priya only.

 

Vikram:- Ram muje lagta hai tuje ghar jana chahiye. Aaj Priya ko tu ghar lekar aaya aur aaj uske saat hone ke bajay tu yahan hain.

Ram:- I think u r right.  Pata nahi Priya comfortable hai ya nahi.

Vikram:- Ram tu jaa mein yahan sab sambhal lunga.

 

Ram reached home. Neeta told him that she has taken her food and medicine in time and right now she is sleeping.

 

Ram slowly peeps into her bedroom. He saw Priya is sleeping very peacefully. He saw innocence in her face. He smiles and left.

 

In the evening,

Ram taking her for a walk in the lawn. He entwined his finger with her.  She likes his presence and caring.

 

Next day,

Ram called 5-6 cloth merchants so that Priya can select her clothes. She is choosing one by one when she hears the voice. She turns towards the door and she saw one girl running towards Ram.

 

Neha:- hiii and straightly goes and hugs Ram.

Priya looked at them. She puts her head down.

 

Ram:- Neha'''..tum yahan'iss waqt'.tum to ek mahine baad aane wali thi na'.

Neha:- tumhe khushi nahi hui'.actually Vikram ne muje tumhare baare mein sab bataya toh mujse raha hi nahi gaya. Aur mein agli hi flight pakadkar aa gayi.

 

Neha turns towards Priya.

Neha:- If I am not wrong u r priya. Right

Priya nods her head.

Neha:- Priya'hii mein Neha'.Vikram ki wife aur fatty ki best friend.

Priya:- fatty???

Neha:- fatty. Saamne toh kada hai. (Looking at Ram)

 

Priya smiles'.

Neha:- muje pata hai fatty ne abhi tak hamare baare mein kuch nahi bataya hoga. Koi baat nahi mein tumhe bata dungi. Aur yeh sab kya hai'.(Looking into loads of dresses) tumne abhi tak kuch bhi select nahi kiya'.chalo mein tumhari help kar deti hoon'..

 

Ram:- Neha tum priya ki help karo mein nikal raha hoon. ek baat aur make sure ki Priya aaram kare.

 

Neha helps her for selecting dresses. They chat for some time.  Priya spend quality time with Neha.

 

At night,

Ram is waiting for priya at the dinner table but, she is not coming. He decided to check her.

Ram knocked the door and entered in her room. He saw Priya is trying to put scarf but found difficulty in doing it. She cannot move her head properly. Ram goes near her takes the scarf from her hand and keeps aside.

 

Priya:- Ram without scarf mein bahar nahi aa sakti

Ram:- Priya abhi ghar mein sirf tum aur mein hoon. aur tumhe mere saamne scarf pahenne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. subah tum nurse se bandwa lena.

Priya:- nahi Ram mein apne aap ko bina scarf ke nahi dekh sakti.

Ram:- tumhe aayine mein dekhne ko kisne kahan. Jab bhi tum apne aap ko dekhna chaho toh muje dekh lena. Mera hasta hua chehra tumse yahi kahega ki tum bahut sundar lag rahi ho.

 

Priya is not convinced.

Priya:- no Ram'mein eise neeche nahi aa sakti.

Ram:- achha teek hai'tum sirf apni oddni se eise le lo. Abb teek hai'

 

Priya becomes emotional.

Ram:- chale..dinner ke liye''''..

He helps her finishing her dinner.

 

Another day passed. Both are in the new world.  Priya is adjusting herself with this new environment. Priya likes his presence also. Every evening she is desperately waiting for Ram.

 

Even Ram likes her presence. Every day he comes in time wrapping up all his work. Every week he takes Priya for check-up without fail. Every day he takes priya for a walk in the evening and shares every small incidence of office with her.

 

Days passed, weeks passed, months passed. Priya is recovering very fast and now she is not much worried about her past.

Every weekend Ram reserves his day exclusively for Priya. He takes her out for shopping, then dinner in a 5star hotel.  Both share a special place for each other's life.

 

But kehte hai na sab kuch ek samaan nahi rehta. Samay ke saat sab badal jata hai. eisa hi kuch Raya ke zindagi mein bhi hua.

 

Priya falls for Ram. Yes, she loves Ram. Jab Ram saat mein rehta hai ,Priya ko kuch aur nazar nahi aata. Lekin jab Ram saat mein nahi rehta, tab Priya ki bechaini badd jati hai, unse milne ki, unse baat karne ki.

 

Par kya Ram bhi yahi sochta hai, Priya ke liye.

No, for Ram, It's just a friendship and not more than that. He loves to take care of her, likes to spend time with her, but, he is not thinking more than that.

 

One day when Ram in office. Priya entered his bedroom. Normally she never entered without Ram, but today she is missing him badly. She entered; she gazes around, she saw everything is in proper place. She is touching each thing and feeling his presence. Smile crept in her face.

She opens his cupboard. She is touching his clothes. She takes one shirt smells and holds near her chest. After sometime she put it back.

 

She opens one shelf, she saw his childhood album. She saw photo of Ram and his mother only. Ram cuts photo of his father with sketch pen. Priya close the album. She opens another shelf. She saw one small box; she opens and saw her one payal. She smiles. She remembers the incidence of her first meet with Ram. She takes and put it back after sometime.

 

Then, she saw his toys and surprised that he is still keeping everything very nicely. Remote control cars, bikes, footballs etc; She thinks "The Ram Kapoor jo badi badi gaadhiyon mein ghumte hai, unhe dekhkar lagta nahi ki woh inn chotti chotti gadhiyon se bhi khelte the.

 

She keeps everything back. There she saw one chocolate box. She opens and saw a doll. First she laugh, but then she becomes upset when she saw he cuts her face with sketch pen same way like he cuts photo of his father face.

 

Then, suddenly Ram calls, Priya attended.

Ram:- Priya'.woh muje ek urgent work se pune jana hoga. Sham ki tickets hai. Gopal Kaka se kehkar mera samaan pack karwa dena. Meine Neha se baat kar li hai tum aaj raat ko Neha ke ghar ruk jana. Jaate waqt tumhe chodte hue chala jaaonga..

Ram hangs up the call.

 

Priya becomes upset. Ram ko dheke bagair Priya ek pal ke liye bhi nahi reh sakti thi.

She keeps all his toys back and closes the cupboard.

 

In the evening,

Ram is already late. He calls calling Gopal Kaka.

Ram:- Gopal kaka''.Gopal kaka'.

Gopal kaka'comes

Ram:- Gopal Kaka'aapne mera samaan pack kar diya na

GK:- konsa samaan saab!!!!

Ram:- konsa samaan matlab. Tumhe Priya Madam ne bola nahi ki mein Pune jaa raha hoon,samaan pack karne ko..

Priya:- Ram GK ko kuch matt poochiye, meine aapka samaan pack kar di hai.

Ram:- thank u lekin tumhe yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi. GK ko bol deti woh kar dete.

Priya:- mera karna aapko pasand nahi aaya

Ram:- nahi'.mere kehne ka woh matlab nahi tha'.

Priya:- Ram din bhar akele ghar par bor ho jaati hoon. toh socha mein hi aapka samaan pack karwa du.

 

Ram smiles and said OK mein change karke aata hoon..arre lekin tum abhi tak taiyaar nahi hui.

 

Priya:- Ram'.mein Neha ke ghar nahi jana chahti'mein yahi rahoongi..

Ram:- Priya'.yahan tum akele'

Priya:- Ram'please mein teek hoon. muje kahi nahi jana. Agar kuch hua toh mein Neha ko bula dungi'lekin please mein wahan nahi jana chahti'

 

Ram is not satisfied but he said OK

Ram taiyaar ho jata hai.

Ram:- Priya'..mein chalta hoon'

Priya:- eisa nahi kehte '..kehte hai mein jaakar aata hoon

 

Ram:- ok''mein jaakar aata hoon and smiles''''Priya'.tumhe yeh sab kisne bataya

Priya:- Maa'hamesha papa se kehti thi''jab bhi ????????

Ram:- haan'.bolo''

Priya:- (thinking hardly keeping her eyes closed) pata nahi'.bhool gayi

 

Ram goes near to her and give her a side hug .

Ram:- koi baat nahi'sab yaad aa jaayega'

 

Priya surprised with his action.

Ram:- mein chalta hoon. apna khayal rakna'

Priya had tears and but, she managed to escape it from Ram.

Ram left to pune.

 

Precap:- Entry of Amarnath and niharika Kapoor, siddhanth,Natasha,and Rishab,

Ram agree to marry with Nisha and Priya agree to marry with Kunal,

Realization of love.

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Awesome update... raya sath mai bhootiya haweli mai...πŸ˜‰ oye hoy...koi etna khyal rakega to bhai kisi ko bhi pyaar ho jaaye...😳😳😳 priya ji kaise bhi ho...badi achi lagti hai πŸ˜›πŸ˜› hayyy priya ji ko ram ji ho gya hai pyaar ☺️☺️ oye sandy ye kya precap hai... ram aur neha...kunal aur priya 🀒🀒🀒 continue soon !!!!Edited by Mini1991 - 10 years ago
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Thanx for the early update.. πŸ€—
Nice update sandi..
Loved the way ram is taking care of her, did everything to make her comfortable nd spends time with her..
So priya has fallen for him nd he is unaware about her feelings..shayad jab yeh duriya bechain kare toh ram ko kuch ehsaas ho.. 😳
But why he has cut the photos of AK..another suspense in tale.. πŸ‘ nd looking forward what will happen with the entry of AK in next update..
Confussing precap ram agrees to marry with neha.. 😲 tumhari ff mein 2 neha hai kya?? Bcoz yeh wali neha toh married hai..but one relief realization of love in next update.. πŸ˜ƒ
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..
Edited by vironikajain - 10 years ago
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Hi.. 😊

Loving the bond b/w Ram-Priya.. 😊
Superb update.. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ..
Very well written..
Precap is scary..bt i knw u will clear it too.. πŸ˜‰

Thanks for pm 😊
Why only Priya relizes love first.. πŸ˜‰ in serial too..
Continue soon
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lovely, toh finally Priya ko realization ho hi gaya ke she is in love with Ram, but when Ram will realise that Priya has fallen for him, one thing is not clear for me is that where come this second Neha come in the scene, aur yeh baki Kapoor khandaan kahan tha itne dino se, well will wait for the next part but yeh Kunal mahashay kahan se aa tapke, isse hatao yaar, I don't ant anyone come between Raya, continue ASAP