Arjun

ariya {@ piya o re piya@ } chapter11 -pg33 4jun13

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Posted: 11 years ago
guys I m going to write on ariya should I continue or not ???
in this one we have all the same characters including riya but sorry to arakshi fans I m not going to include mrunal in it if u all want then in that case she will be seen as little villan or may be dead ( if she is dead then definetly she is having same statua that of roshni in the serial) so plz tell me what u want :) 😊
ur comments r really important so plz dil se commnt kijiye n plz give ur opinion plz plz 😉


? ? guys jitna jaldi response hoga utni jaldi update bhi so plz guys share ur views n tell me what u all want because with out u guys I can't do anything so plz hurry up ? ?

Character sketch - pg 1
Chapter 1 (a) -pg 1
chapter 1 (b)- pg2
Chapter 1 (c)-pg4
NOTE:pg5
Chapter 1 (d) - pg5
Chapter 2-pg6
Chapter 3 pg 7
Chapter 4 -pg9
Chapter 5 -pg11
Chapter 6 -pg13
Chapter 7 -pg17
Chapter 8 -pg21
Chapter 9 - pg24
Chapter 10 - pg28
Chapter 11 - pg33
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz guys bear me with all of these because I m updating from my phone ...


Charactar Sketch:
^^^ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte -- no words to describe him hot,sexy, handsome moreover bold n courageous.
^^^ACP Riya Mukherjee -- not like show totally opposite but bold n courageous expert in marshal arts n encounters, ,    have very horrible past but no one nows that 😭 related to sikander
^^^ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathore-- ETF chief , best friend of arjun n roshni's bro, ishq wala luv with his sweetheart Ayesha Kapoor 😳
^^^Ayesha Kapoor--encounter specialist, luvs rathore 😳 best friend of shre chotu n liza
^^^Shreekant Sen --technical expert bff of chotu n Ayesha, luvs liza
^^^Chandrakant Patil --Commando bff of Ayesha shree n liza
^^^Liza D'cruz--luvs shree n bff of Ayesha n chotu; forensic expert
^^^Sakshi Anand -- dead but she is having a connection with one EtF member (sorry if I hurt some one's feelings) 😭
^^^Roshni Arjun Rawte-- dead wife of acp asr n sister of sam 😭


Everyone in the team is having relation with sikander n go to any depth to kill him but all of them doesn't know anything about riya as she is totally different even more than arjun



definitely I will update part 1 by tommorow

PRECAP-- someone meets someone; fighting; romance; flash back of all of them 😊

it's my request guys plz post ur commnts as this is my first post... 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey nice cs n concept do continue soon. Hey give pms as well.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 1(a)

time around 5 am a sweet beautiful girl is having her morning walk with her headphones in her ears but doesn't have sound in them having revolver tuck inside her back n in her shoes. On the other side 3 Person one girl n two boys r having their morning walk they are relaxed but are exteremly alery about their surroundings after all they are our 3 main etf officers" dammit" "samje ja samjaun" "jangli billi". 😃 😆
unknown to all of them one more person is there for the evidence n to act on the situation. shree is in office instructing all3 of them and spending hard time with liza bbecause both of th had fight last night due to the case n chotu is bzee on phone with his khabris . Suddenly they all heard bullet firing as all three wants to act but get shocked after seeing a girl shooting on a group of 15- 20 people alone with revolver in both of her hands .she is hiding behind a trees but unfortunately the three become totally numb after watchi ng her (she is bold n fight ing all alone) they all come out of there terance with a loud scream of the girl they just heed towards the girlwithout even bothering about the goons so they choose this time to run away from there.

n then is the most beautiful moment of two lifes when they saw each other faces with the first ray of the sun making it's way out of the sky indicating the beginning for two luv birds n blessings from god. 😳


precap - romantic moment; shocking news for all team; flahback; first ariya hug 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey this concept is nice so riya is differnt from the show. She is very bold and an acp and a haunted past which related to sikender nice. Precap seems interesting. Do continue soon and plss pm me. Ariya rocks
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome concept and CS :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow

nice concept.. cs n update... loved it... i am so glad its on ariya..

please write ff on the title.. as first i didnt think it was an ff post.. looks like a normal post..
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow nice concept.

lookng frwrd to it.

continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyy nice concept and superb start dr...
wow loving riya's character... bold and different from show...
firt part was awsum...is the girl riya??
precap is interesting...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.. 
continue soon..