os:"a typical love story" chapter 4( page no 7) - Page 4

Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update  dear ...why is padmini doing this separating ...anyway happy to see Rishbala together and very much in love with each other.waiting for next part.
Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
update next part fast
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by zina.92


Amazing update
update next part fast


thank u😊
i will update soon.
and u will get to see some rishbalicious moments in holi...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by geetrana45


Awesome update  dear ...why is padmini doing this separating ...anyway happy to see Rishbala together and very much in love with each other.waiting for next part.




she fears that he will again broke her daughter heart.so she doen't want to let it happen again...

she is a mother na.so she fears for her daughters 😊

thanks i will update soon.
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by SHINYSHREYA


Very Nice Update.


thanks 😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by zoshad3119


really awesome updates dear...really hating paddo...



hey plz don't hate her.whatever she is doing is for her daughter sake...😊in this story not in show...

ya i hate her in show.bcoz always she uses bad words against rk like "woh rakshash,gamandi...so so..."😑
i won't like anyone to utter a bad word against rk...so i hate herπŸ˜‰

Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written
Love the song selectionπŸ‘πŸΌ
Posted: 10 years ago

chapter 4:

madhu went to sleep.
rk too went to his room and he noticed aryan sleeping...
he slowly went near to aryan.caressing aryan face softly...

he remembered scolding aryan in phone and  aryan saying that he taunted him in phone...he felt bad  for scaring him badly...
rk: i am sorry aryan.i will never repeat it again.
he kissed  his forehead gently.
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MORNING:
someone knocked on the door of rk.
rk: who is that person disturbing me early morning? 😑πŸ₯±
suddenly reality hit him.
rk(to himself): rk u idiot now u r in chawl.so comeon get up go and see who is it?
rk noticed aryan getting disturb bcoz of knocking sound.
so he immediately rushed towards door.befor opening door.
rk doesn't want to reveal his true identity infront of chawl people.so he attached a mustache and beard to hide his true face...
rk: who is it?(he changed his voice slightly)
bittuji: chief it's me.
when bittuji saw a different person with beard and mustache.he was confused. πŸ˜•
bittuji: sorry,i misunderstood that u r my chief.
rk: bittuji aap mujhe chodkar ek din bi nahi hua...itni jaldi meri chehre ko bhool gayi aap.πŸ˜‰
bittuji knew well that only his chief can delivery this excellent dialogues.

bittuji : chief... 😲
rk: ha,bittuji.plz come in.i don't want to create a scene here.so plz come in fast.

bittuji entered in to room.rk closed doors behind him.

bittuji: chief what is this?πŸ˜²πŸ˜•
rk: bittuji i don't want anyone to know my real identity this two months.i don't want to create a scene in public.so plz don't come here again to meet me.and huh plz if any reporter questioned about me.then say that i left to states for peace.
bittuji: but chief why do u want to?πŸ˜•
rk interrupted in between his words...
rk: bittuji aap kyun baar baar sawaal poochna chahthe hai mujhse... maine kabhi aapko sawaal karne keliye paisa nahi diya tha na tho...ab  aap mujhse sawaal karna bandh karogi ya nahi.

bittuji  : ji chief(he is happy that his boss same as before.his daily tantrums became bittuji habit)

rk: ha,bittuji i need a help from u.

bittuji: ji,chief.
rk: join aryan in a big school.school must be very gud and ha environment too.ok.

bittuji: ha,chief.definitely.
rk: ok,thank u.and huh inform me about school  asap.
bittuji: yes,chief.

bittuji left chawl.

aryan: chachu i don't want to go to school.

rk: hey my dear u r awake...why don't u want to go to school?(he asked taking him in to his arms)πŸ˜•


aryan: chachu no one will do friendship with me.πŸ˜”
rk: who said to u?(he asked concernly)
aryan: i knew it well.when i am child.all same age kids used to tease me.
rk: no one can tease my aryan...and i am there with u.ur rk is there.so no need to worry.ok .and from tomorrow u will go to school .bcoz i want to do some work.when i gone to work.who will take care of u?so plz dear u have to go to school...

aryan: ok,but with one condition.😊

rk: wat?πŸ˜•
aryan: u have to pick up me from school and drop me at school.
rk: ofcourse i will do it.😊
aryan: hmm ok.
rk: comeon go and get fresh up.

aryan left to bathroom to fresh up.
rk prepared milk for aryan.

aryan went out from bathroom.

rk: comeon drink milk like gud boy.
aryan: no chachu.i won't like milk.
rk: aryan ...come on drink it.u r a gud boy na.gud boys will drink milk...
aryan: plz chachu...i won't like it.
rk: if u drank it then i will bring chocolates for u.πŸ˜‰
aryan: chocolates...really πŸ˜›
rk: ha,really...πŸ˜†
aryan: promise me...πŸ˜›
rk: promise.😊
aryan: ok,then.
he taken glass in to hands and finished milk in minutes.
madhu saw this whole scene from entrance.
aryan: madhu maasi...

madhu: hmmm,today u finished ur milk gud boy...

aryan: ha,madhu.rk promised me that he will bring chocolates for me.

madhu stared at rk.rk too...

madhu: ok,now.i am leaving.
aryan: where r u going madhu?
madhu: i need a job.so i am going to search a job for me.
aryan: ok,bye.
madhu: bye.and wish me best of luck.(while staring at rk.she wants him to wish her.)

rk knew it well.so he decided to wish her.

rk: all the best...aryan...
madhu

rk

madhu

madhu wants to bring food for aryan.but padmini refused her.


rk :aryan,go and sit there.i will prepare something to eat .ok...
aryan: ok.
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madhu is walking on road side.
she almost tried in all parlours for a job.

now she is feeling weak.she is losing her energy due to heat.
her head started spinning around.
her eyes r shutting.
when she about to touch ground.suddenly two strong protective pair of arms saved her from falling.

rk: madhu...😲
he almost got worried.
he tried to make her open her eyes.but all his trails gone in vain.he brought a water bottle and splitted some water on madhu face.
madhu slowly opened her eyes.
rk: madhu have some water.
rk made madhu to drink water.

rk: madhu r u alright?wat happened to u?
madhu: nothing.one minute how do u know my name?and who r u? (rk is now in with mustache and beard.so madhu is not able to recognize him.but his voice she can recognize it.his voice is familiar to RK.)
madhu:rk...😲

rk 😊:hmmm biwi...wow u recognized me.

madhu: wat is this?(pointing her finer toward his beard and mustache...)

rk: for u biwi...

madhu πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

rk: don't laugh biwi...present i am staying in chawl to prove my luv.but i don't want it to show to the world.i don't want to become more famous so...i changed...

madhu  🀣🀣: u r luking so weird...

rk:biwi...πŸ˜”πŸ˜‘

madhu: ok i am sorry...
she tried to stop her laughing but again she started laughing loudly🀣


madhu: rk u r luking handsome...

rk: biwi plz stop teasing me.otherwise u will have to pay for it.

madhu: no,rk i am not teasing u.πŸ˜†

hope u like it...

plz do comments...ur comments r really valuable for me.hit "like" button.


precap:

rk walking on roadside.he was tired completely in search for a job.suddenly a girl running towards him and bumped in to his arms mistakenly...
rk on ground and girl on top of rk...


guyzzz now a new girl is entering in to rk life.

so u have to bear her for some days.i am giving a little character sketch.

she is ms.zoya farookhi.she is a naughty girl.
she luvs to talk nonstoply...
mostly she luv rk so much.her wish one day she want to meet him once and want to propose her luv.
she hates madhu .being rk wife is her mistake.
even
she don't know madhu face.

guyz i want ur suggestions...
with rk who will luk cute?

1.surabhi jyothi

2.sanaya irani
3.krathika senghar.
4.jennifer winget.


guyzzz already sanaya irani is introduced as zehra in another ff.so i don't want to introduce here too.
i prefer surabhi jyothi but i want all of ur suggestions.plz suggest me will surabhi and vivian pair will be gud?

again i am saying she is another important character in rk's life.😊



sorry for mistakes...😊



Edited by sai.janu350 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
it awesome
thanks for pm
Posted: 10 years ago
Awsome update
cont soon
surbhi

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