THE LOCKET (1)

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😊 Edited by heytal - 11 years ago

😊 Edited by Onir - 11 years ago

Okay... so I have this habit of following saving the  best for the last quote, and I thought to read this prologue in a fresh mood hence and I have read it now and damn it to hell, I want to catch your shoulders and shake you violently until your teeth chatter. How can anyone make us feel for characters in such less lines. How? HAUU?

Needless to say I am hooked and I am going to stalk this thread big time. Hmph.

Edited by .Maggie. - 11 years ago

First of all, congratulations for the new story! I'm glad to have something from you to read. 😊

My stomach dropped like a pinball when I read the prologue. I already felt for him when he tried to act normal for the sake of his family and covered the anguish he was going through.

I'm curious about his case though. Was his love unrequited? Did he never confess or did she not accept him?

I'm not going to say either way if the girl in his twin brother's arms is the lead or not. But personally, I wouldn't want her to be the one he'll end up with. Creates a lot of family mess!

And, you didn't mention his name anywhere. Any special reason ya aise hi? I guess, aise hi since Dadi is happy to have 'both' her grandsons back, and one is Dev so the other one is Maan. Yes yes, ignore my blabber! 😆

Thanks Avi! 🤗
(Maine kaha tha na 'thank you' ke baghair main nahin reh sakti! 😆)Edited by mayyo13 - 11 years ago

dgno1 aise naam dekhkar first thought comes to my mind what is it's meaning??

then i saw somewhere written Devil queen..

but then i thought how can it be???
i'm still solving this puzzle..

nice start..
pahle hi update me dhamaal kar diya ji...

hey here you are my dear  😃 and that too with a new story...another thread to stalk...reallyy excited about the story...cant wait to read more😊

This content was originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

dgno1 aise naam dekhkar first thought comes to my mind what is it's meaning??

then i saw somewhere written Devil queen..

but then i thought how can it be???
i'm still solving this puzzle..

nice start..
pahle hi update me dhamaal kar diya ji...

accha hua i landed on first page at least..!! warna.!! :|

This content was originally posted by: sweetkj

accha hua i landed on first page at least..!! warna.!! :|

points finger at AAshu and laughs.!! 

tujhe toh woh bhi nahi mila.!! aur bhi bahut logo ko nahi mila.!! 🤣