Virika OS: Superman (UnRes) - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
no words to describe it ws dat awesome
loved it
out standing
fab story
written brilliantly 
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿค—
kiss in air  
tooo good  
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by KryRan14


First of all its meow and meaw! ๐Ÿคฃ

The story was terrific!
I felt like i was seeing a superman movie!
The way you beginned it only i knew this is going to be one awesome story!

Jeevika always had a doubt that viren is the superman!
Aww viren loves jeevika so much!
I loved the way you showed the flashback part!

Aww the way she wiped that single tear which left his eyes!
Jeevika was so confused about her feeling! ๐Ÿ˜†

But the confession part was my most fav in they story!
...
"That's it Viren! I cant take it more! I
know you are Superman and if you
love me, you'll save me!" With that I
stood on the platform and jumped
down the terrace. I closed my eyes and
left my body loose. I felt his arms around me! The same
feeling of safety and being secure. It
was him! It was superman. I slowly
opened my eyes. I was in his arms, we
were flying across the sky. His eyes
were red and had tears. "What the hell do you think of
yourselves Jeevs? What if something
would have happened to you? Have
you lost it? Do you have some sense?
What would I do without you?" " Nothing will happen to me till you are
there with me! I love you Viren!" "I love you too Jeevika! Please never do
that again" He pressed his lips against mine and
kissed me. His hands were around my
waist and my feet on his. Yes! We were
kissing in the middle of the sky! What
else would a girl want? I wanted it to
be never ending. At last, I got my Superman! My Viren!
...
โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

I just love such intense confessions! I can even put it in words how much i loved this part!
Take a bow meow!
Amazing!

Thanks for the mention! It really was refreshing!
Love you lots meow! โค๏ธ

Awwie Nano..
Love you loads too!!!
Thnks so much dear!!
So happy tht you liked it...!!๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by KtYammie13




Awwie Nano..
Love you loads too!!!
Thnks so much dear!!
So happy tht you liked it...!!๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ

Liked it? I loved it dumbo!
Lol i forgot to tell this before!
Omg the last kiss in the air! That left me blushing ๐Ÿ˜ณEdited by KryRan14 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by KryRan14



Liked it? I loved it dumbo!
Lol i forgot to tell this before!
Omg the last kiss in the air! That left me blushing ๐Ÿ˜ณ

haha Nano!!
Thnk...
happy tht you loved it.. :D
Love you Nano ji!! โค๏ธ
Posted: 11 years ago
Just loved dis os my dear

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by mgera3024


Just loved dis os my dear


Aww... ๐Ÿค—
Posted: 11 years ago
It was really an amaing story
I really love it๐Ÿ˜›
Posted: 11 years ago
Yammie dear sry I am late.
But u did a fantastic job๐Ÿ˜Š
It was just awesome.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Once again had a 1000 watt smile reading it๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Jeevika understood tat her savior was viren๐Ÿ˜ณ  She is really clever๐Ÿ˜›
And viren as superman, he would hav been hot even in tat costume๐Ÿ˜Š

Luv u Yammie. I was waiting to read this update.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Just luv it๐Ÿ˜Š
Hats off dear๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Once again sry for the late comments. Really sry๐Ÿ˜ญ
Posted: 11 years ago
BEAUTIFULLY, AWESOMELY and AMAZINGLY WRITTEN 
Posted: 11 years ago
The story was a terrific one as usual.. bichare Viren ki superman banne ki kammi thi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Loved the whole idea so much, superman, and the dialogs were so well written!

BEAUTIFUL โค๏ธ

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