FF: Serendipity Concluded Epilogue/Pg 20 - Page 14

One word that came to my mind after the concluding chapter was "Beautiful". Absolutely loved the way the event was described. There couldn't have been any better way for Arnav to thank NK for whatever he did for Khushi and him. It felt so good reading about the achievement of NK. Finally he was successful. The proposal was equally beautiful and the ending was just perfect. Loved the NK story. Thanks for the pm :) 

Originally posted by: Cute6

Awwie
so so intense nd beautiful..
Surprise was just wow..:)
nd i luved the way u described d hapenings of d show..
Could actualy imagine it..
Is dis story complte or more parts are on d way..
I just wish it never ends..:)
amazing update

Aww...That was just perfect ...

Woww! This was a long update and I absolutely loved it! Everything was so perfect in this! The beginning itself gave me an indication that this would be wonderful! I loved the way Khushi forgot everything else once she saw Arnav descending down the stairs, they both have such an effect over each other! And that remark on the red nose, you fit it in your story so perfectly! I also loved the fact that both of the Raizada Bahus were going to be the showstoppers for the AR Annual Fashion Show! The way you described the Fashion show and the minute details of the whole process was amazing! I was quite impressed with that! Finally, everyone got to know what NK had been doing all this while! The whole re-union when everybody congratulates NK, the celebration of the success, the family coming together and enjoying, all these things were beautiful! Such scenes automatically would bring a smile on anyone's face! Great job! I always love it when anyone says that Khushi has transformed Arnav, I have said that before also but every time I read anything like that, I become extremely happy! And he proposed her for marriage in front of everyone, that was so cute! And the romance in the rain, that was breathtaking! The way you described the advent of rains, that part was very well written! Superb job! Everything was perfect, their kiss, the confessions, the fun element, Nk indeed couldn't have had a better day with Maya! This particular chapter was so well written! Amazing! You are a wonderful writer! Keep writing always! Fantastic work! Thank you for the PM! Stay blessed! 😊 😊 

Originally posted by: Drkk

lovd dis update. Beautifuly written. At last nk suceeded. Love maya nk. Hats off 2 d thought of payal's maternity collections. Is d story ending here?

Wow what an amazing conclusion for the story... Indu you are really incredible. What a well written story in every aspect may it be romance, art , nature, emotions..just perfect!! As already I am yet again I became a biggest fan of yours :).

Originally posted by: SPMom

Wow what an amazing conclusion for the story... Indu you are really incredible. What a well written story in every aspect may it be romance, art , nature, emotions..just perfect!! As already I am yet again I became a biggest fan of yours :).

finally I got to the remaining chapters ! 😃

Originally posted by: chatterbug

finally I got to the remaining chapters ! 😃

What a wonderful narration.

loved all the twists and turns of the story.

Very natural and apt. I loved how the whole story came together with all the characters gathered for the finale 😊

My favorite is the narration of the fashion show itself.

That was a smart way to reveal the surprise.

It was indeed a sweet surprise even from a viewer standpoint.

I did not expect the "bharat ki darshan" woven into the surprise !

Bravo 👏

Really nice! 👏