FF:-RAYA- Anjana Anjani updt prt 24 pg 145 - Page 90

Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 22

Scene 62

Anjaana Ram weds Anjaani Priya

Day has arrived when two soul going to become one. Today is there marriage. Both are looking extremely beautiful in their bridal costume (just like in BALH).

 

All these days Ram is desperate to get married, but today he is nervous and unwanted thoughts are coming into his mind. He is checking himself into the mirror many times before leaving.

 

Mandap is beautifully decorated. All the relatives and family, friends were presented to witness their marriage.

 

Photographers, news channel were giving live information about marriage in all new channels, radio etc.

 

Marriage was started and it is completed following all the rituals.

Priya becomes emotional and touch her mangalsutra.

 

Now, it's a time for bidai.

Sudhir:- Ram meri beti ko hamesha kush rakna. Meri beti har choti si baat par badi badi khushiyaan doondh leti hai usse hamesha kush rakna.

 

Ram:- mein wada karta hoon papa ki mein Priya ko hamesha kush rakunga aur uski aankon mein kabhi aasoo aane nahi doonga.

Ram aur Priya gaadi mein baiththe hai and herd to five star hotel.

 

Thodi door jaane ke baad Priya rona shuru kar deti hai

Ram:- arre kya hua priya tum ro kyun rahi hoo

Priya:- muje maa papa ki yaad aa rahi hai

Ram:- arre isme rone wali kon si baat hai. tum unhe chodkar door thodi jaa rahi ho. Bas 15 se 20 min ka raasta hai KM se. tum jab chahe mil sakti ho.

 

Priya aur zor se rona shuru kar deti hai.

Ram:- abb kya hua Priya. Dekho Priya mein jaanta hoon ki kitna mushkil hai apna ghar chodkar aana.

 

Ram gave his hankerchief to priya. She wipes her tear.

Ram:- Priya tum roo mat. Tum janti ho ki mein tumhara rona handle nahi kar sakta. Common Priya muje vishwas nahi hoo raha ki meri shaadi ho chuki hai.

Priya(wiping her tears):- hamari shaadi hui hai.

Ram:- haan hamari shaadi and both started laughing.

 

Ram:- muje toh idea achha laga first night hotel mein rakne ka. Koi disturb bhi nahi karega aur hum dono'.. and giggles.

Priya:- first night hotel mein issliye rakha kyunki aaj koi achha shubh muhurath nahi hai gravpravesh ka.

Ram:- pata hai par hamare liye toh achha hai na and winks.

 

 

They reached hotel.

 

Scene 63

First night

 

Ram and Priya reached the hotel room. Neha and Vikram already made all arrangements.

Neha:- Priya yeh lo kamre ki chabi hum chalte hai

Priya:- Neha andhar chalo na

Neha:- nahi Priya hum bas yahi tak hai, andhar tum dono jaaonge,jyada darr lage toh humhe matt bhulana, tum dono ek dusre ko kass ke pakad  lena.

 

Both Ram and Priya feel embarrassed.

 

Priya:- Neha!!   Chai ya coffee toh peeti jao

Neha:- Nahi Priya'bahut neend aa rahi hai, baby chalo na

Vikram:- accha Ram hum chalte hai. Raat bahut ho gayi hai. kal milte hai.

Neha:- dono ko shaadi ki pehli raat Mubarak hoo. Yaad hai na kal subah 10:30 ka muhurth hai gruapravesh ka''''''' jaldi aa jana.

 

Both Neha and Vikram left.

Ram and Priya enter into the room. Room is fully decorated with red color heart shape balloon. They lit candle in all the corner of the room. Bed is decorated with balloons and rose petals.

 

A small vanilla sponge cake is kept on the center of the t-table with a message on it "welcome to the Loveland".

Ram becomes exited he likes cakes very much. Ram cuts the cake and starts eating. He also feeds Priya.

 

Priya goes to washroom, when she came back she saw Ram had finished eating the cake then Ram goes to washroom to wash his hand and Priya is sitting on the sofa leaning her head back.

 

When Ram came back he saw Priya is sleeping. He tries to wake her up and shakes her, but, she is in deep sleep.

Ram:- ho gaya Ram teri suhaagraat.!!!!!chal abb Priya ko uthkar kamre mein le chal

Ram carries her and puts her in the cot.

Ram again tries to wake her and tries his luck but, Priya is very tied and in deep sleep

 

Ram:- (running his hand over her head) bechari Priya, subah ke bhagdodh ki wajah se takk gayi hai.

 

He removed her sandals. She is sleeping innocently with a smile on her face. He sits beside Priya and bends towards her. He slowly without waking her up removed her ghunghat, and then slowly removed her earing followed by her bangles.

 

He touches her cheek then slowly comes down, and runs his hand all over her body. He touched her waist and kissed on her belly button and then came on top and kiss on her forehead then to her cheeks and finally her lips.

He goes near to her ears and said very slowly" good night darling. U r mine only mine.I love you"

He sleeps next to her hugging her.

 

Next morning,

Priya open her eyes, stretching her hands. She feels one hand on her waist. She turns and saw Ram is sleeping and his hand is on her waist. She came back to her sense.

She smiles and slowly removed his hand from her waist. She gets up from the bed and goes to the washroom for freshen up. She came back wearing a very beautiful netted red color sari which is given by KK as shagun (this is a custom in our place that bride will wear sari given from sasural at the time of grahpravesh).

 

She goes near to Ram and tries to waken him when he suddenly hold her hand and pull towards him very vigorously.

Ram:- good morning darling'..pata bhi hai ki tum hamare first night ke din so gayi. Mein toh kitna excite ho raha tha ki hum hotel mein hai aur hame koi disturb bhi nahi karega. Tumne toh poora popat kar diya first night ka.

Priya:- I am sorry. Patahi nahi chala ki meri aankh kab lag gayi. Aapne muje uthaya kyun nahi???

Ram:- koshish ki thi madam phir laga shayad tum takk gayi hongi.

 

Ram puts her down and came on top of her and kisses on her forehead.

Ram:- muje yakeen nahi ho raha jiss ladki se mein itna pyar karta hoon aaj woh mere saat hai, mere pass hai. tum meri ho Priya aur muje iske alawa kuch nahi chahiye.

 

He rubbing his cheeks with her when Priya stops and said" Mr. Ram Kapoor 8baj gaye hai,taiyyar nahi hona??? Yaad hai na 10:30 baje ka muhurth hai.

 

Ram:-common Priya sirf 8 baje hai bahut time hai and again starts nuzzling her neck.

 

She closed her eyes and leans her head back for clear access. She holds his kurtha for grip. He kissed all over her neck, then to her forehead, followed by her eyes, then cheeks. She is breathing hard, slowly he touches her lips with his and sucking her. She runs her fingers through his hair. After some time both broke the kiss. He is getting closer to her and moves his one hand on her back and start unbutton her blouse and moves his head in between her cleavage.

 

While doing this somebody knocks the door.

 

Priya:- Ram darwaze par koi hai.

Ram:- abb iss waqt kon aa gaya.

Priya:- Ram uthiye aap jaakar fresh ho jaayiye mein dekhti hoon kon hai

 

Ram goes for freshen up. Priya set her sari correctly and opens the door. She saw the boo key and a man is hiding his face behind that boo key. Man keeps aside boo key Priya is surprised to see him here. It was none other than Sid.

 

Sid:- hii bhabhi shaddi Mubarak ho aur yeh aapke liye. (Giving her boo key)

Priya:- hii good morning thank u'.itni subah subah????

Sid:- haan ghar se bheja aap dono ko saat mein lekar aane ko khaha hai.     Bhaiyya kahan hi???

Priya:- tere bhaiyya naha rahe hai. andhar aa '.kuch lenga mein mangwati hoon

Sid:- nahi bhabi aap kyun takleef kar rahi hai

Priya:- takleef ki kon si baat hai. waise bhi hamne abhi tak breakfast order nahi kiya hai. saat mein breakfast karte hai

Ram(from bathroom):- kon hai Priya???

Priya:- sid hai''''. lene aaya hai

 

Ram thinks" Sid itni subah subah hame lene aaya hai. Sid itni concern kyun dikha raha hai.zaroor koi aur baat hai. muje Priya se baat karni hongi. Lekin kahunga kya ki Sid se door raho aur woh kya sochegi hamare baare mein. Nahi muje khud hi handle karna honga.

 

Ram change karke aata hai. sabhi ek saat nashta karte hai aur ghar ke liye nikalte hai.

 

Ram and priya are sitting at the back seat of the car and Sid is sitting in the front.

Ram put his left hand around her shoulder and pulls her little more closer and entwined her other hand with him. He knows that Sid is looking at Priya from the front mirror. Ram is controlling his anger.

Both reached KM in time.

 

Scene 64

Grahpravesh

 

Ram and Priya were welcome by all the members of KM family and friends. Priya ka grahpravesh poori riti riwazo se hota hai.

 

Priya is surrounded by ladies whereas Ram is struck in between his friends. Ram wanted to spend some time alone with Priya. He wanted to take Priya where nobody will disturb him. He is becomes impatience.

He keeps looking at Priya whereas Priya knows very well Ram is desperate but, she ignored him purposefully.

 

Ram takes the help of Neha

Ram:- Neha tum meri help karongi???

Neha:- pata hai yahi na ki mein Priya ko kisi tarah se wahan se lekar aao

Ram:- tumhe kaise pata ki mein yahi chahta hoon.

Neha:- woh iss liye ki mein tumhe kafi time se notice kar rahi thi tumhari nazar priya se hatt hi nahi rahi hai.

Ram:- haan toh uuse mere kamre mein lekar aao yaar

Neha:- Ram mehmaan aaye hue hai unn sab se kya kahonge

Ram:- tum uski chinta mat karo woh sab mein handle kar dunga.

 

Neha kisi tarah Priya ko Ram ke kamre mein lekar aati hai aur darwaze tak chodkar chali jati hai.

Priya slowly opens the door and peep into the room. Ram pulls her inside and bolts the door. He hugs Priya and crushes her in between his arms. He carries her into his arms and laid it on bed.

He comes on top of her; movement he bends to kiss her KK calls him.

 

Ram:- pata nahi jab se shaadi hui hai sab mere dushman lagne lage hai pehle toh tumhari neend ne poora first night kharab kar diya. Phir subah subah Sid ne aakar deemak kharab kar diya aur abb inti mushkil se tumhare saat time mila toh maa bula rahi hai.

 

Priya started laughing and said:- teek hai abb jao nahi toh maa kya sochegi.

Ram:- Priya tum hass rahi ho; tumhe jitna aaram karna hai kar lo lekin aaj raat ko mein tumhe sone nahi doonga.

 

Both gets up from the bed. Ram opens the door.

KK:- kya kar rahe hoo tumdono''''' mehmaan aaye hue hai sab log tumhe pooch rahe hai

Ram:- maa''.mein''mein  priya ko cupboard dikha raha tha'.uuse bata raha tha ki samaan kahan rakna hai

KK:- Beta woh tum Priya ko baad mein dikha dena abhi tum dono neeche chalo.

Ram:- ji maa

Ram aur Priya neeche aate hai.

 

Precap:- marriage party in KM, pagphere ki rasam, raya talk about work, sid marriage, 6month leap

 

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Sorry for the mistakes

Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
omg?
shaadi hogaya achha hain fast forwarding without dragging๐Ÿ˜† u dint waste time achha kiya
btw groom nahi bride get sari na๐Ÿ˜†
btw fulltoo copied balh๐Ÿ˜† kya yaar ekta mata aur tum dost ho kya suhaag raat hone hi nahi diya๐Ÿ˜† bechara ram..

jaldi se suhaaag raat manado unhein

btw ye kya sid ki nazaar teek nahi hain๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ not liking

waiting for next update
continue soon
Edited by shamavi - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by shamavi


omg?
shaadi hogaya achha hain fast forwarding without dragging๐Ÿ˜† u dint waste time achha kiya
btw groom nahi bride get sari na๐Ÿ˜†
btw fulltoo copied balh๐Ÿ˜† kya yaar ekta mata aur tum dost ho kya suhaag raat hone hi nahi diya๐Ÿ˜† bechara ram..

jaldi se suhaaag raat manado unhein

btw ye kya sid ki nazaar teek nahi hain๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ not liking

waiting for next update
continue soon
fast forward kiya because jo shaadi hamare yahan hoti hai woh lik diya toh kafi saare sawal honge.
yes I know its bride,but kya karu edited ke liye forum open nahi ho raha tha. last one hour se yahi try kar rahi thi. thanks for noticing.๐Ÿ˜Š
update dekhkar muje bhi lag raha hai ki ekta ka copy kiya ek first night hone nahi diya aur dusra leap๐Ÿ˜†
mana lenge suhaag raat ekta ke samaan wait nahi karaungi.
dont worry about Sid he will become good boy.
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sandhyasn


fast forward kiya because jo shaadi hamare yahan hoti hai woh lik diya toh kafi saare sawal honge.
yes I know its bride,but kya karu edited ke liye forum open nahi ho raha tha. last one hour se yahi try kar rahi thi. thanks for noticing.๐Ÿ˜Š
update dekhkar muje bhi lag raha hai ki ekta ka copy kiya ek first night hone nahi diya aur dusra leap๐Ÿ˜†
mana lenge suhaag raat ekta ke samaan wait nahi karaungi.
dont worry about Sid he will become good boy.


i did not mind fast forwarding yaar i told na achha kiya๐Ÿ˜†
hmm dekte hain sid  achha hain ya bura?

bechare raya ๐Ÿ˜† waiting for next update
Posted: 10 years ago
Finally shadi ho gyi...yayyy...
Ram's plan got spoiled...
Lol poor ram...
Why sid is behaving like this...
Update soon...
Posted: 10 years ago
Ur update reminds me of RaYa first night, I loved it, poor Ram, trying to romance with Priya but someone or somehow he is been disturbed, anyways aaj ki raat hain, dekhte hain kya hota hain, continue plz ASAP, but u haven't send me a PM, or is that my inbox is full, don't know, next do PM me dear
Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderfull update sandi...Hotel mein first night,decoration,cake..everything reminds me the first nightof raya in balh...poor ram is trying to romance priya but everytime for some or other reasons he is been disturbed.. ๐Ÿ˜†
Ram very well knows about sid's intentions is a big relieve.. ๐Ÿ˜›
Precap looks interesting so ram will talk about sid's intentions also kya??
Cont soon..
U havent send pm this time nd also not edited the part nd page no in topic..whats wrong?? ๐Ÿ˜•
Edited by vironikajain - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
No PM .?? no prob i think u forgot

Well nice update..
I don't understand how can priya sleep when ramji was so naughty..was she Taalli?
Kumbhakarn ki neend hogayi ye to๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

wht is Sid upto yaar??

Aur ye LEAP kyon hai FF mein..? Ekta ko competition de rah ho kya?๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰




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