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Posted: 11 years ago
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hahahaha...sach me padh liya mtlb??...ofcourse sach me padha yar wo bhi time target set karke...lol

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HI,U SAID THAT U WILL UPDATE BEFORE THURSDAY.EAGERLY WAITIN FOR YOUR UPDATE.PLSSS
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HI,U SAID THAT U WILL UPDATE BEFORE THURSDAY.EAGERLY WAITIN FOR YOUR UPDATE.PLSSS
UPDATE.AND PLSS LONG UPDATE.PHIR PATA NAHI TUM KAB UPDATE KARO.

 
 
agar thursday tak nahi hua toh tue-wed tak paaka. worry only about network.
 
 
 
 
 
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tomorrow I will give update.
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PART 17

Scene 51

Priya  preparing lunch for Ram

Next morning,

Priya aaj kitchen mein busy hai. waise toh who bahut achha khana bana leti hai, lekin jab se office join kiya hai,tab se kitchen mein kam hi jati hai. aaj Ram ki farmayish par Ram ke liye tiffin taiyyar kar rahi hai. Shipra kitchen mein aati hai.

Shipra:- yeh kya beta, aaj itni subah subah kitchen mein kya kar rahi ho

Priya:- kuch nahi maa. Ram chahte hai ki mein unke liye khana banakar lao.

Shipra:-(happily) wah beta Ram se farmayish bhi aani shuru ho gayi. Lagta hai apni honewali biwi ke haat se khana khane ke liye taras rahe hai. lagta hai bahut pyar karte hai tumse. Kyun Priya!!!!!!

Priya:- maa'.. aap bhi na bilkul filmy ho. Muje kaam karne do der ho rahi hai

Shipra:- lekin beta itni subah subah khana banana se kya faida. Tum toh dopahar ko lunch karne wali ho na.

Priya:-. Meine sabzi bana di hai. roti aur chawal aap banakar lunch ke waqt Ayesha ko office bhej dena..

Shipra:- achha tu jakar taiyyar ho jaa.mein kar leti hoon.

 

Priya nashta karke office ke liye nikalti hai.

Itne din Priya Rajat ke saat office jaya karti thi. Aaj sab kuch badal gaya hai. Priya auto ya cab lene ke liye khadi thi. Tabhi woh Rajat ko uske paas aate hue dekhti hai. Priya darr jati hai, aur jaldi jaldi aage chalti hai. Rajat Priya ka peecha karta rehta hai. uski aankon mein gussa aur badle ki aag dikk rahi thi. Priya pareshan ho jati hai.

Rajat priya ke paas aata hai ,thabhi uusi waqt Priya ke saamne ek bahut badi safed rang ki gaadi aakar kadi ho jati hai. Driver bahar aakar Priya ko andhar aane ke liye kehta hai.

Driver:- maam'.Ram sir ne aapke liye gadi beji hai. Ram sir ne khaha hai ki aaj ke baad aap jahan bhi jaana chahegi mein aapko chod do.

 

Priya relaxed and thank god and Ram for saving her at the right moment.

Priya gadi mein baithi hai. priya jis khushi ke saat Ram se milne jati hai,woh kahi gayab ho jati hai. Priya sochti hai "muje ram ke saamne bilkul aaram se baat karni chahiye,unhe pata nahi chalni chahiye ke rajat mera peecha kar raha tha".

 

Priya office pahuhti hai. Ram abhi tak pahucha nahi tha. Priya abb bhi pareshan rehti hai. thodi der mein Ram bhi aa jata hai.

Ram looked at Priya and wink at her. Priya gave a fake smile to him.

Ram goes to his cabin and asked his P.S. to send Priya inside with so and so file.

Priya entered and found Ram is not in his chair. When she entered Ram tightly hug her from behind. Priya get shocked with sudden reaction from Ram. She doesn't know how to react.

 

Ram:- (still holding her from back) good morning darling.

Priya:- (with little embarrassed) good morning. Ram yeh file jo aapne mangwayi thi.

Ram broke the hug and takes the file and throws it on the table.

Ram:- tumhe kya laga mein yeh file ke liye tumhe cabin mein bholaaya hoon.

Priya said nothing.

After some time

Priya:- Thanks woh aapne gaadi bheji.

Ram:- Isme thanks wali kon si baat hai. Priya tum Mr. Ram Kapoor ki hone wali biwi ho. Mein nahi chahta ki tum auto ya cab mein safar karo. Waise shaadi ke baad mein chahta hoon ki tum sabse pehle driving seeko. Waise ghar mein 24 ganthe driver rehta hai, aur tum jab chahe driver ko lekar kahi bhi jaa sakti hoo. Lekin agar kisi wajah se driver available nahi hai ya phir mein busy hoon, toh mein nahi chahta ki tum auto ya cab lo. Tum apne aap bhi drive karke jaa sakti hoo. I don't want you to depending anybody. Aur iski shuruwat mein tumhe driving seekhane se karoonga.

 

Priya bahut emotional ho jati hai. ek toh gaadi bejkar usse rajat se bachhaya, aur dursi unki baate sunkar aur Ram se gale lag jati hai.

Ram ko pata nahi chalta ki eisa kya keh diya ki Priya itni emotional ho gayi aur gale lag gayi. Jo bhi ho Ram ke gale lagi hai, ram toh kush hoga hi.

 

Ram broke the hug and looked at priya and asked very naughtily "kya hua aaj tumhe mujpe bahut pyar aa raha hai. Subah subah gale lag rahi ho".

Priya give a sherni look at Ram and smiles.

Priya:- Ram kya mein aaj jaldi ghar jaa sakti hoon

Ram:- kyun kya hua????

Priya:- woh maa-papa aur Ayesha M.P jaa rahe hai. wahan hamare kaafi rishtedaar rehte hai. sagai ke liye phone mein invite kiya tha. papa chahte hai ki shaadi ka invitation woh seedhe wahan jakar kare.

Ram:- kya tum bhi jaa rahi ho????

Priya:- nahi. Meine socha ki unke aane se pehle thodi packing kar loo. Do char din mein rishtedaar bhi aa jaayenge phir inn sabke liye waqt nahi milne wala. Aur waise bhi kya aap muje jaane dete.

Ram:- ohh!!! Toh tum yeh kehna chahti ho ki tum mere liye nahi jaa rahi hoo. Toh kya tum yeh chahti ho ki yeh do din mein tumhare saat spend karoo.right???

Priya:- aap phir shuru ho gaye''''. Meine ye kab khaha.

Ram:- kehna toh yahi chahti hoo naa.

Priya:- nahiii'.

Ram:- No problem priya. Yeh do din mein tumhare saat tumhare ghar par spend karne wala hoon. Ghar mein sirf tum mein aur''.

Priya:- Ram no way' raat ko mere saat bilkul nahi.

Ram:- arre kyun nahi. Mein abhi ghar se apne kapde mangwane wala hoon.

Priya:- achha aur ghar par kya kehne wale ho

Ram:- simple keh doonga ki mein meeting ke liye do din ke liye bahar jaa raha hoon.

Priya:- No Ram.. yeh teek nahi hai.

 

Priya yeh soch ke pareshan ho jati hai ki kya ram sach mein uske saat rehne wala hai. Aur Ram yeh sochkar kush hai ki yeh do din woh sirf Priya ke saat rehne wala hai. isse priya ko aur achhe se samajne ka mauka bhi mil jaayega.

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Sid Ayesha ko milne ke liye kehta hai. Ayesha kehti hai ki woh nahi aa sakti hai uuse priya dii ko tiffin dene office jana hai. Ayesha yeh bhi kehti hai ki Ram ne priya se apne haato se khana banakar khilane ko khaha tha issliye woh yahi dene jaa rahi hai. Sid uuse office ke baad milne ko kehta hai. Ayesha yeh kehkar mana karti hai ki aaj woh do din ke liye M.P jaa rahi hai,apne rishtedaaro ko shaadi ke liye invite karne aur yeh bhi kehti hai ki Priya di nahi chal rahi.

 

Scene 52

Lunch time

Ayesha lunch lekar aa jati hai. Priya Ayesha se kehti hai ki woh chaar baje tak ghar pahuch jaayegi. Ayesha chali jati hai.

 

Priya Ram se bahut comfortable ho jati hai. Abb who Ram ke saat baat karna Mazak karna sab pasand karti hai. lekin jab bhi pyar ki baat hoti hai thodi uncomfortable ho hi jati hai.

Ram aur priya khane ke liye baithte hai. menu is simple lekin khane ki kushboo bahut achhi aa rahi hoti hai. this time priya has to feed ram.  She place one plate and served everything.

Ram:- Priya jaldi karoo. Khane ki kushboo bahut achhi aa rahi hai, muje bhook jyada bad gayi hai.

Priya:- ek minute Ram. Pehle sab serve toh kar loo. Jaise hi ek bite lekar Ram ko khilane jati hai tabhi wahan par Sid aa jata hai.

Sid:- sorry'.mein baad mein aata hoon.

Ram ko uske aane ki timing par gussa aa raha hota hai, lekin uuse bhi khane ke liye invite kar deta hai.

Ram:- aao Sid baito. Khana kaya???

Sid:- nahi'.

Ram:- toh chalo milkar khate hai. waise bhi aaj teri bhabhi ne apne haato se khana banakar laya hai.

Sid:-(sid iss tarah behave karta hai jaise ki uuse iss baare mein kuch pata hi nahi tha) achha tab toh mein bhi khana chaahoonga.

Priya uuse bhi serve karti hai.

 

Ram aur Priya ek hi plate se khate hai lekin apne apne hatoo se khate hai. Ram thoda frustrate ho jata hai aur Priya ram ka reaction dekhkar muskuraati hai aur apna lunch finish karti hai.

 

Sid:- bhabhi aapke haato mein jaadu hai. kya khana banaya hai aapne. Ek kaam karna shaadi ke baad aap hi hamare liye  khana bana diya karna.

Ram ko yeh sab dekhkar gussa aata hai.

 

Scene 53

Around 4'o clock

Priya has taken short leave and came back home. Everybody is busy in packing. Priya is helping her mother in the kitchen.

Around 5'oclock

Everybody is ready to go.

Shipra:- beta hum chalet hai. apna khayal rakna. Hamare jate hi darwaza bandh karna. Koi aaye toh dekhkar darwaza kholna.

Priya:- haan maa. Mein bachhi thodi hoon muje pata hai.

Sudhir:- beta apna khayal rakna, aur kuch bhi hai toh phone karna. Hum pahucte hi phone karenge.

Priya:- ji papa.

Both papa and daughter hug. Shipra kisses her on her forhead. Ayesha hugs priya. Everybody left. Priya close the door and doing the left over work.

 

 Its 7'oclock in the evening,

She completes all her work and relaxing in the sofa. She is watching t.v when there is a knock on the door.

Priya thinks" iss waqt kon aa gaya. She opens the door and shocked to see Ram standing. She thinks " ram sach mein aa gaya".

Ram:- kya soch rahi ho. Bhahar khade karne ka irada hai kya.
Priya:- ohh'. Sorry. Aayiye na.

Ram:- sure na?????

Priya:- was the option.

Ram:- eisa lag raha hai ki mera aana tumhe kuch pasand nahi aaya.

Priya:- nahi ram eisi koi baat nahi hai.aap baithiye. Mein aapke liye paani lekar aati hoon.

Ram deewaro par lagi tasweero ko dekhta hai. Priya paani lekar aati hai.

Priya doesn't know how to react. There is awkwardness and silence in the room.

After some time Ram said " photos achhi hai"

Priya smiles. Slowly slowly both started talking. Priya showing her childhood album, then telling him about her likes and dislikes. She also asked Ram about his childhood acts, his likes and dislikes etc.

Ram ko yeh dekhkar achha lagta hai. Priya ki baato se jyada Ram Priya ko dekhte rehta hai.

Ram is completely falls on her and continuously looking at her which is disturbed by her hair which comes in front and disturbs her view. Ram tugs her hair flips behind her ears. She is feeling shy.

Priya(slowly):- aap kya sach mein aaj raat ko yahi rukne wale hai.

Ram:- haan kyun. Tumhe office mein bola toh tha. waise ek aur wajah hai yahan aane ka.

Priya:- kya????

Ram:- wahi aaj tumne muje apne haato se khana nahi khilaya na. toh issliye

Priya:- arre mein kya karti. Aapke bhai aa gaye  the. Uske saamne thodi hi khilati.

Ram:- toh phir abhi khilaa do. Abhi koi disturb bhi nahi karege.

Ram came very close to her face. She pushes him little and ran to her kitchen.

Priya serves food. Ram sits her on his lap.

Ram:- wahh!!! Aloo ka paratha. Tumhe kaise pata tha ki muje aloo ka paratha pasand hai.

Priya:- muje nahi pata tha. bas aaj banana ka mann kiya toh bana diya.

Priya feeds Ram. This time she is very much comfortable aur bahut pyar se ram ko khilati hai.

 

After having dinner Priya cleans the kitchen and came back. Ram is watching T.V when in one channel soft music is going on. He forwards his hand for dance.

He holds his one hand with her and other hand on her waist. She puts her other hand on his chest. Both started in the tune of the song. She is smiling and supporting him.

Ram pulls him little more inside and closes the distance. He is caresses her on her back. She is feeling tingling sensation on his touch and closes her eyes. She is breathing heavily and surrenders to him.

He goes very near to her lips. She is parting her lips. He smiles and goes very near and suddenly moved back. She opens her eyes.

Ram:- it's very late Priya. Mein jaa raha hoon.

Priya:- aap toh aaj yahan rukne wale the na????

Ram:- nahi mein tumhe ched raha tha. mein jaanta hoon ki tumhe pasand nahi aayega.

 

First time she feels ki woh Ram ko rokke aur uuse jane na de.

Its 11'oclock. Ram said goodbye and kisses her on her cheeks. She responds and closed her eyes. Said goodbye.

Ram left and priya closed the door.

 

Ram starts his car and left.

Rajat and his two friends waiting for Ram to go. They entered into her building. They knock the door. Without thinking second priya opened the door and shocked to see Rajat in front.

 

 

(Sorry It is short, lots of mistakes but, no time to update more, as I promise I given this update. Sorry once again.)

 

sorry for the mistakes
please read and comment.

 

Edited by sandhyasn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
what is this sandyyy?

pehle showed raya scenes aur sid hadii now rajoo😑😑😑😑😑😑 i am damn sure ram will come abck as he must have left something or he saw rajjo in side mirror or he would have instinct of rajjoo doing something so come there with police please update soon
Edited by shamavi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...continue soon !!!
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update was too good... priya n ram's romance was very nice...worried for priya...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: shamavi

what is this sandyyy?

pehle showed raya scenes aur sid hadii now rajoo😑😑😑😑😑😑 i am damn sure ram will come abck as he must have left something or he saw rajjo in side mirror or he would have instinct of rajjoo doing something so come there with police please update soon

sab pata toh hai aapko. phir itna gussa kyun???