Great part.. Glad taani is coming back can't wait for whn rey n taani come face to face, still wondering y they broke up, but I have a little request, I hope u don't take this the wrong way, but can u start each dialogue on a new line, coz while reading, it gets a bit hard sometimes to differentiate between who is saying what, ur writing is awesome, it's just the layout would become better, hope I didn't offend u
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