Originally posted by: aditi061Ouch! My cheeks are hurting coz of u. Whole the time i had a big smile plastered on my face while reading the os that nw my cheeks hurt...
Originally posted by: RiDz_roxres
unresed...
this is so damn cute ankie... i was smiling throughout... you are a great writer... Asad actually saw JTJH and dabang .. unbelievable πankie res means reserved... i have edited it... take a look π€Okayyy moi madam! now i understood the meaning of RES π³ π³ thank you once again for being my Savior in this π
Welll serious? you liked it? *jingle jingle* π π³ π π€
Originally posted by: Gurmeet4DrashtiAwww that was so cute :D
Originally posted by: fee-feeI normally don't like reading OS's but this was really good! I liked how you kind of made it a almost post-inner turmoil scene. It was adorable. Keep up the good work.
Originally posted by: shaz2009That was an awsome read!Here I was twiddling my thumbs bored out my brains with nothing to do and voila!... you made my day with this awsome dose of Asya.Loved the humorous style in which you wrote the scenes at good pace with leaving no stone unturned in keeping us entertained.Asad watching Dabaang and JTHJ is something I could never have imagined but nice touch by you as it only made me start daydreaming about Asya going to the movies sand watching it together...Love the ASya nok jhok and the ever so caring attentive Asad..he does it too with such style in his own discreet way so that Zoe doesn't get an inkling of any inner feelings...lol.Zoe trying all the tricks in the book just to spend a little more time with her Jahaanpanah...this is exactly what I picture her doing in the show wehn she does actually fall in love.I thoroughly enjoyed reading that and thanks so much for the pm!
Originally posted by: stacyellowzawesome! loved every bit of it...especially the part "He got out off the bed and tiptoed to Zoya's room as it was the Now Usual Midnight Check for him". my wishlist is that this would actualky become apart of the show. i can onky imagine how cute asad would look peeping in zoya's room at night thanks for the pm. would love to read more of your stuff π
Originally posted by: jazmeenOMG
its was amazing i felling in love wid asya ffs and osi reaaddd arhi ffs and now m so glued to asya ffsman u guys are superb i simply loved dis oswanna read ur first one and ur wishing list is amazing
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