AsYa OS - touch of love - Page 4

Originally posted by: rockstar_kajen

Awesomely written ridz 🤗 if possible continue it as a ff :D
I loved the way u expressed zoya's feelings
And the way asad scares zoya was hilarious 🤣
Thanks for the p.m
Mwah love ya

i am so happy u liked it appy.. thank u 😳

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Awieee
That was so cute
Really loved it
Do write more
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

thank u sooo much for ur awesum comments di 😊

Originally posted by: taanuMohurPRIYA

oh ridz ! u rock man ! so nice !!!

thank u so much priya 😊

" because I because I want your 6 pack

This line had me laughing,smiling and grinning just like a cheshire cat...trust Zoe to come out with something like that!She is just besotted with her Jahapanah's physique and everything about Mr six packs and who could blame her?

I also really liked the fact that Asad is warming up to her nosey,child like,miss Hoity toity ways...Zoe is just too cute and Asad is just beginning to realise that too.Asad pinning Zoe to the wall and Zoe getting all afected by him...gosh... I could sense the tension from here..😆...oxygen is required for me too dear!☺️Super loved this piece of writing by you and hope you give us some more of this and like Asma suggested...would love it if you could turn this into an ff!Also thanks for the pm dear!🤗

superb superb superb
no words from me i hope so tat it may happen in show

Well well well very well written. Lovely. you wrote it as per the real show stages the characters Asad and Zoya.

Originally posted by: shaz2009

" because I because I want your 6 pack

This line had me laughing,smiling and grinning just like a cheshire cat...trust Zoe to come out with something like that!She is just besotted with her Jahapanah's physique and everything about Mr six packs and who could blame her?

I also really liked the fact that Asad is warming up to her nosey,child like,miss Hoity toity ways...Zoe is just too cute and Asad is just beginning to realise that too.Asad pinning Zoe to the wall and Zoe getting all afected by him...gosh... I could sense the tension from here..😆...oxygen is required for me too dear!☺️Super loved this piece of writing by you and hope you give us some more of this and like Asma suggested...would love it if you could turn this into an ff!Also thanks for the pm dear!🤗

thank u so much for the lovely comments shaz... means a lot to me... yup Zoya is completely smitten by Asad ... 😳

Originally posted by: sparkle2985

superb superb superb
no words from me i hope so tat it may happen in show

thank u so much for loving it 😊

Originally posted by: naina2010

Well well well very well written. Lovely. you wrote it as per the real show stages the characters Asad and Zoya.

thank u so much for loving it 😊

Wonderful OS
loved it
thanks for the pm.