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Originally posted by: jyothim78
Hi Radz,
I am a new reader and read all the 31 chapters over yesterday and today..Can't believe I missed out on such beautiful deep intricate story for so long...What an amazing PLOT...I LOVED IT..BUT I LOVE CHIPPU AND RINNIE the most...The bonds shared by Arnav, NK, Lavanya, Anjali, Akash, Diya , Khushi, Shashi, Chris...are so above any blood relations showing how superior HEARTS bonds are.I can't believe Khushi and Arnav have not yet uttered CHIPPU and RINNIE even when they were dancing...will they ever come to know..?ONE IMPORTANT QUESTION.. Was Arnav and Khushi not their names back at sunshine..? If not then who gave them those names..?Another one.. Was Shyam Anjali's ex-boyfriend who was from the Sunshine and was responsible for the murder of Anjali's parents..? Now we know he is after Dia..but he is real pervert...he repulses me sooo much that though I hate Payal equally for quite long...I felt spec of sympathy for her after reading the last update...
Now that I can see pairs of AK-Diya, Chris-La, Vinay-Anjali, ARSHI, may be even EVIL Shyam-Payal,poor NK is left all alone...hope we get someone equallu cute and mature and understanding for him too...
Originally posted by: the_breeze
Hey there! I was browsing through IF for something to read and I came across your story and let me tell you that I didn't stop till I read all 31 chapters! π You have a real talent for writing, and the suspense and intrigue in the initial chapters was simply superb! I love the characterization of everyone. Really... You have kept it quite realistic by giving everyone a grey shade and that was very refreshing to read... π π πI was really spellbound by the extent of thought processes of the characters that you have managed to tell us, on one hand we get to see Vinay as a obsessive husband whose world revolves around his wife, the mistakes he does and his best part is when Arnav tells him off for making Anjali weak, the way he realises his follies and his repentance are a treat to read. La was really sweet here, more than the show and I was so happy when she found Chris! I like how she realises that being friends with Arnav is better than pining for him forever, that is one very strong woman! Salute! Chris and Amanda with their own back stories are wonderful people and I am amazed at how you have treated each and every character no matter how small with such care. All of them have plausible back stories and pasts which have ultimately led them to be who they are now and that is praiseworthy of you as a writer to have given each of your characters so much thought. Payal was good as the vamp, all I can say is she is gonna get what she deserves. My heart broke for Akash when he saw NK and Arnav's camaraderie and thought himself to be unloved and unwanted but again instead of making him wallow and sulk you showed how he determines to be better just for his brother... That makes me wanna hug u. Diya is just super sweet and NK is simply adorable. About Arnav & Khushi, their past was difficult to read, so many emotions, such pure friendship and love and all of it shattered due to some people. I could go on and on about how much I love their portrayal in your FF but then I would end up with my comment as big as an update! I cannot wait to see how they discover that they are Rinnie and Chippu.I wanna see Shyam suffer and I wanna know why he wants to ruin Shashi and is interested in Diya, I wanna find out who killed Anjali's parents and why. So many more twists awaiting us readers and boy am I super excited. But I want to thank you for sticking to this story for two years despite your busy schedule. Very grateful to you for continuing to write for us readers. I have a few questions about the storyline.1. The fact that Vinay sent goons to the orphanage indicates he was a person with loads of power and influence. Could you tell me how old he was then? I am guessing mid to late twenties, same goes with Anjali. I would like to know her age and how older she is that Arnav. π2. During the all important fashion show on April 4, Arnav makes some last minute changes in how the stage looks, like putting up a new banner and all which really confused Aman as I remember him saying that it would appear out of place there, what was the banner and more importantly we never got to know who the show was dedicated to? Is that announced during the show?? ππ3. Was Payal the showstopper in the show? Or was she just a model? Didnt she meet Arnav when he came on the stage at the end??4. Chippu's eyes are green, and you had mentioned that Khushi wears contacts. Why does she hide that? π€I hope I am not inconveniencing you with my questions, am simply curious! Anyway, please update soon!!!! π³Please accept my Buddy Request.P.S. It's ok if you don't send me PMs, my current AD (asli duniya) circumstances are such that I won't be able to comment frequently.
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