Such a lovely story!!! And you buddy are gifted!! My gawd what way of plotting and building the characters without giving away any of it most of the time!!
Some where a ArShi reader will know that their pasts would definitely be inter related but the name Rennie and the scenes might steer you away until you wait for Khushi's opening up chapter!!
Chris Khushi bond is so sweet and lovely!! And of course Chris and Lavanya!! Aww made for each other!!
Vinay Anjali Arnav a trio that have equally seen things and lost but each ones loss is not comparable to the other!!
Diya and Shashi aww such adoring people!! Nk too a live wire man!!
Payal Mom and buaji god I'm not wasting a line on them!! Shyam is definitely the one to teach her her place but I pity her no woman should go through it!!
Everything said and done at the end alls well with the family I mean a few knots yet they are removed it holds more importance when you see your nearing the end to untangle it all!!
Akash he is an enigma!! That one update where you had penned down his POV as the third person always my heart went out for him!! All I wanted to do was go give him the bear sized hug and say dude you are too sweet!! And diya is all yours!!
Now this is going to be fun tu tu main main all the way!! And they did not just disclose their kiss in front of the whole family!! Lmao!!!
Looking forward to this trip and their union!! Their first love indeed!!
Kudos buddy!! Can I buddy you for future works!!
Cheers!!
Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 9 years ago
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