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SwaRon OS : Separations - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing os neeti !!
this was such a adorable little heart warming SwaRon os .
i loved sharon , she being all strong and encouraging swayam to accept the application :)
had a nice time reading this .
thanks for the PM.
 
P.S - you do not suck at writing endings , it was a really cute and positive ending :)
 
 

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow totally different swaron. no dance no fights no misunderstandings 
this was refreshing and yes lady u do not suck at endings i actually liked the ending the most. and i totally agree with sharon that distance does make the heart grow fonder. 
this was totally refreshing. i actually liked these nerds πŸ˜›

p.s. neeti i hope i can call u that, can u give me links to ur other os/ss/ff 
i dont think i have read much of them 

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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved how maturely Sharon and Swayam handled the situation !! And truthfully speaking, you should always put your education first at this age !! If it's meant to be which SwaRon, you'll definitely end up together !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Damn interesting πŸ˜ƒ
feels like,, got a gud story after ages 😊

but ending . . . πŸ€”

u knw wat . . . Its incomplete . . . . . U should write the last part to give an appropriate end

coz . . . . She had opened 2nd mail . . . . & jis din 1st mail khol liya aur tab tak bahot der ho gyi . . . . Fir to sharon shock me chali jayegi 🀣

maana iss padhai ke piche lovers ko door jana padta hai but yahan to case hi alag hai πŸ˜†

I hope ek din ki separation kafi hai fir vo mail check kar le 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
AMAZING πŸ˜Š ...IT WAS NOT AN ABRUPT ENDING !!!!!!!! IT WAS FANTANSTIC...THE WHOLE THING !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
A nice nd happy OS! Wat more cud i have asked for! Grt work neeti nd thnx fr d pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
i luvd it neeti.. Ur Os r awsume.. I luve it ol.. Wel it reminded me of HSM3 where gabrilla went to standford..n distance doen't change relatn n ol..
It was nicely pen dwn by u.. Wel done..
N ya thanx for the pm.
Can i ask u sumthng?
U r frm?
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful os
keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
cute post!!
do write more!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Neets yaar, it is soothing and sweet OS, you have so natural at writing yaar, but i wish you would countinue with this and make it an SS πŸ˜‰ Well yaar it is clear fresh and fragrent like a beautiful flower. Both of them know each other in and out, and are lucky they could be part of each others welfare. sharon knows to pull swayam legπŸ˜† and her spat answer that distance makes heart grow fonder! Well I wish you would continue well I loved it and You are the best!