FF: RAYA LIFE AFTER PIHU NOTE updated pg 62

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am thinking. To write a ff on rayas life after peehu is born. Don't think it will be similar to the serial. Should I write?
Want your opinions.

Feel free to comment and critisize

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deepa1993 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ya sure ... Plz write.
Wating...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Go ahead just kneel it down
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yess!! Definitely write!! Its something we never got to see in the serial so its always a treat to read about posibilities plus anything on raya is always a delight to readd😳  Try to include pregnancy parts too!! This is the one thing I wish we could've seen in the serial😭
Waiting for your updatess!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome thought plz do connt waiting for it to start...
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found topic itself very touchy.. So my vote is yes..Edited by D4BALH - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for making you all wait so much. Here is the first part.

PART 1

This starts from the hospital. Priya is inside. All are tenesd and specially ram. 
Priya screams very loudly which is audible to ram as he is near the door. Ram can't hear her screams. He is getting worried and suddenly everyone hear a cry. 

P: doctor ladki hui hai?

Doc: yes mrs kapoor. 

P: doc if u don't mind I want to say my family about the child.

Doc: ok mrs kapoor.

Doctor goes out.

R: doc how is priya and the child?

Doc: both are fine mr kapoor.

Kk: Kya hua hai?

Doc: aap mrs kapoor se mil kar jan lijiye. U can meet her in 10 minutes.

R: is everything fine?

Doc: yes mr kapoor. Don't worry. The baby and mother is fine.

R: thanks doctor.

After 10 minutes

Priya is shifted to the room. Priya is having the baby in her arms. All come to her.

Kk: kaisi ho beta?

P: me thik hu ma. Dekhiye.

R: meri beti hai yeh

P: ha aapki beti ram. Ye lijiye. Pakadiye

R: nahi tum pakado.

P: arre aap dar kyu rahe hai? Aapki beti hai.

R: achha do.

Ram takes her daughter and peehu smiles looking at him. Priya sees this and she sleeps in his arms.

After 2 days priya gets discharged.
Dadi does her arti and she enters with the child. Suddenly the child starts crying. 

P: Kya ho Gaya ? Ro kyu rahi ho? Chup ho jao.

Kk: lagta hai isse bhuk lagi hai beta. Upar jao or dudh pila do.

P: ji ma.

Priya goes up and feeds her and she stops crying.

P: bilkul apne papa ki tarah ho tum. Tumhara nickname me cutie rakhungi.

R: ha nick name yeh thik hai.

P: aap kab aye?

R: jab tum isse bat kar rahi thi.

Priya finishes feeding.

P: ram aap iska khayal rakhiye me Naha Leti hu.

R: thik hai.

Just then kk comes.

Kk: beta iska naam socha?

P: nickname socha hai.

Kk: Kya?

P: cutie.

Kk: bht pyara hai. Badme me dusra nam bhi sochna.

P: ji ma. 

Priya goes for shower and ram is playing with cutie. He is maki g faces and she is smiling. Priya sees this and is very happy.

P: ram aap bhi fresh ho jaiye?

R: thik hai.

Cutie goes to her mom and she makes her sleep. She sleeps and puts her in the baby bed.

Priya has her food and ram and priya sleep.

NIGHT

Cutie starts crying and priya picks her up and she stops crying.

P: arre mummy k pass ake chup ho Gayi? Chalo tumhe thoda guma lati hu. 

Priya covers herself and cutie with a  shawl. Priya takes her to the hall and comes back to the room. 

R: kahan Gayi thi?

P: vo hall me ghum kar ayi. She was crying.

R: thik hai chalo so jao. Cutie ko sula do.

P: ha abhi lori sunati hu isse.

dheere se aaja ri ankhiyan mein 
nindiya aaja ri aajaa, dheere se aaja 
chhote se nainan ki bagiyan mein 
nindiya aaja ri aajaa, dheere se aaja

lekar suhaane sapanon ki kaliyaan, sapanon ki kaliyaan 
aake basa de palakon ki galiyaan, palakon ki galiyaan 
palakon ki chhoti si galiyan mein 
nindiya aaja ri aajaa, dheere se aaja 
dheere se ...

taaron se chhup kar taaron se choree, taaron se chori 
deti hai rajani chanda ko loree, chanda ko lori 
hansata hai chanda bhi nindiyan mein 
nindiya aaja ri aajaa, dheere se aaja 
dheere se ...

R: so Gayi?

P: ha. Bht pyari lagti hai sote wakt.

R: ha akhir meri beti hai.

P: hamari beti hai.

R: ha hamari beti hai.

Priya keeps cutie in her baby bed and she too sleeps with ram.

To be continued

Hope you all like it. Comment and let me know how is it. 





Edited by rampriyarocks - 11 years ago
cloud121 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
😃Nice update... 🤗 continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Alya1991

😃Nice update... 🤗 continue soon!!!

thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
cutie is soo cute😳
when will they name her pihu?
continue soon