The Night I Took Off The Ring - New OS - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...it was such a soothing os...i mean it felt like Arohi was just another girl whom we know very well...

She getting into a relationship with Angad and even marrying him thinking that she will sooner or later start loving him is something which many of us go through...!!!!!

Finally Arohi realised her mistake and came out of the marriage...And Jai is a true friend of Arohi i have to say...!!!😊

And here our hero comes and changes our Arohi...he is a rockstar...!!!!any girl would fall for him...

Arohi finally in the end accepted that she was in love with him yipeee🥳

Awesome OS achu...loved it...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very vEry SweEt aNd niCe OS..
WelL wriTten..
ThankS foR tHe PM..
TC
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nic job...good story like it...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
you're sooo goood! love the way you've written a simple OS on the basis of relationships and how each one perceives it 👏 

arohi made a mistake... but when she realised, she rectified it! she may have hurt angad for two years but by divorcing him, she saved him from the same hurt for the rest of his life... it takes guts to do that 👍🏼 

i loved the arjun arohi meet and arohis cheeky answer 😆 

"Oh I stopped drooling the moment you opened your mouth! You should keep your mouth shut it will do you much help!" 🤣🤣🤣 

arjun had to realise first as arohi had lost confidence in her ability to maintain any relationship! i loved the way he said "i love hot mess" 😳 

her insecurities and his confidence... what a combination! you've explained it so so well! kudos dear 🤗 please write more achu... till u get enough direction and inspiration to continue your ff's... which, by the way, i miss a lot too 
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Posted: 11 years ago
i missed reading Your works Achu!

I had to come back and read this one!! :*

Miss you achu <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely yaar, I like this os
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too good !
Luvd arjuhi first meet..its wasn't love at first sight..but still luvd it ! 
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Posted: 11 years ago



read it again

truly beautifull

plx updt ur other work too achu

great writer jii..tk out few time for us too

missing ur writng so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AAKMH2




read it again

truly beautifull

plx updt ur other work too achu

great writer jii..tk out few time for us too

missing ur writng so much

 
i will try dear... 😊 
the problem is it is my last semester and there remains only two months and i had a lot of work to do... that's why i am irregular in i-f... 
and thank you so much dear! 😊