Anu, it would be wonderful if you show Ashutosh originally as a khadoos no-nonsense fellow, devoid of all pity to a fellow human being...and then turns into a caring husband...that transition should form the crux of the story. Even their bedroom interaction which is initially a pure physical process turns into a romantic one...at the end of Nidhi's preg track, he cares for her so much that he is not willing to let her go out of sight...fulfills all her pregnancy demands etc etc...
I will rest assured, now that you can do enough justice to the story line.
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I have started out that way Doc. I will try and continue, it the way u have suggested.
I hope I can do it. Although making him khadoos should not be too much of a problem
I seem to be getting the hang of it. Although I need to ask u a few questions, will pm soon regarding those.
thanx once again Doc.😃
You can pm me anytime for that...