Originally posted by: sonu-monu
dear you written style its so beautiful me loving this update i feel in love with Asher/Khirad once again :D
story is very strong & am happy you moving them in so flow :D
waiting for next part :)
Originally posted by: bonibright
Super awesome update..Loved it to the bits..You are such a gifted writer,I could well imagine Ashar,Khirad n Hareem in my mind..And what a captivating precap..Waiting eagerly for ur next update.Plz do update soon.And thanks a lot for the PM..😊
Hey MY Sweetheart 🤗
Ur update was a killer darling 😆🤪 It brought the magic of our Ashar and Khirad back. I was sooo lost in the update. It seemed as if I was watching a new version of Humsafar. The writer of Humsafar before making the second season should take adive from u and I mean it.😳 Hareem is so innocent and sweet. The most loving daughter. Ashar and Khirad love her so dearly.The way Asher said:" Tumhein phir se khoney se darta hun" Hayeee. Asahr is really in pain and guilt can't see him like this but enjoyed tnhe eyelock. Hareem ki entry thori late nahi kar sakti thi kya?😆 Asey hi bechari ko kabab mein hadi banati ho.😉The scene when Khirad was in front of the mirror. Awww. U made Humsafar come to life.The heart wala scene sooo cute.😳 The dinner part awesome 👏 Loved the way Khirad told her desire of wanting a strwaberry icecram and yeah it made me remember the scene when Ashar and Khirad was coming back from a dinner and Ashar had coffee and she icecream. But thankfully u did not ruin that part s great.😆👍🏼But the last part Awww again pain and hurt 😭Want another update soon now.😆Can't wait yaar. 😉Precap is sooo interesting.I also want a reply to this comment. Abhi!😆LoveUrz Angel. 😳
| topics | author | replies | views | reply |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| anikamathur | 49 | 3550 | ||
| awida | 33 | 6888 |
comment:
p_commentcount